Ja Che

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[fancybox2][/fancybox2][fancybox2]View attachment 3095[/fancybox2] Ja Che
[fancybox2]NAME: Ja Che
FACTION: Wants to be Jedi Order
RANK: If so Padawan
SPECIES: Kel Dor
AGE: 14 in human years, 133 in Kel Dor(I did the math)
GENDER: Male

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, And trained both by Kel Dor and by Jedi[/fancybox2]
Appearance
[fancybox2]HEIGHT: 5'7
WEIGHT: 125 lbs
EYE COLOR: Black of course, but has rare silver irises (it means he's forc sensitive)
HAIR COLOR: Has no hair
SKIN COLOR: Orange like Plo Koon but a little bit darker
MARKS: Has a scar from a Nexu Attack, and classic Kel Dor Markings

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Attributes
[fancybox2][/fancybox2][fancybox2]Strength:
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Ja's Strength is almost unnatural for his size, but his Kel Dor training
Has made his strength exceptional, thats average for a Kel Dorian.


DEXTERITY:
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His Dexterity is Average for his size, he has very athletic abilities that
come straight from the Kel Dor training, but in his view he falls behind.


CONSTITUTION:
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Ja has perfect health no injuries whatsoever, and can take a bad beating

INTELLECT:

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Ja has knowledge is impeccable Kel Dor have exceptional thinking abilities,
he has various ways to get out of dangerous situations, and usually outsmarts opponents and even the smartest of droids.

WISDOM:

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Since Kel Dor are generally known for being quiet and smart Ja is very serious, its almost like he has already lived, he has wisdom that he has no use applying at his age but it will come in handy soon.

CHARISMA:

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Kel Dor are known for being quiet but Ja is extra quiet, he is sort of an outcast mainly because Kel Dor were trained in a way where most people are their enemies, but Ja will eventually warm up to new people....hopefully.[/fancybox2]
Personality
[fancybox2]Ja [/fancybox2][fancybox2]can be really serious and quiet, but he is understanding, during training many other Kel Dor were lost but, Ja was able to keep a positive mind and push on, thats where his wisdom comes from. His ability to understand and truly comprehend. He may be serious but there are times where he may open up and forget the bad things about the world, and thats when he might like you as a person at heart.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES
Strengths:
Understanding - he is able to comprehend something and take that thing further to its meaning. To bend and change it, to something more pleasing.

Strength/Weakness
Outcast - At times he may become a nuance because the way he acts but, things such as getting info from him or breaking his spirit may never happen

Weaknesses:
Impatient - Since Ja ha amazing comprehending skills he usually knows what to do and sitting there figuring out what to do next is not on Ja's todo list and will quickly annoy him

Strong Willed - On top of being an outcast and comprehending Ja will quickly pursue his goal with his own direction, and only his own, he usually take no advice, or any help, and being a padawan doesn't help.

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Biography

[fancybox2]Ja was born on Dorin to the Baran Do. The Baran Do were Force Sages on the planet Dorin and most of them became Jedi. The Baran Do were known for discovering several force techniques, so they decided to pass it on to the young Kel Dor. Thats where Ja came in, Ja was talked about a lot among his companions. They trained the Kel Dor with Javelin like staves and long knives. This was very peculiar because physical violence was usually a final alternative but they were trained because they usually excel in it.

Ja was sent to Dorin Academy at a very early age. There he spent his time studying martial arts, ground tactics, and other means of warfare though he adapted to his physical skills, they continued to push knowledge of his mind, studying mathematics philosophy, mechanics, and other useful subjects.

At 7 years of age (human years) Ja was discovered by the order because of his skills, and force sensitiveness. He was placed in the Thranta Clan, and easily surpassed most of his companions. He averaged in combat, using the force and thinking capabilities. He eased into meditation and was able to use and balance the force like Yoda. In Dexeterity he fell behind but he got slit toe better.

When Initiate Trial came, Ja passed with grace , going over average in the test. Ja did over average in Physical tests and did average in Mental manipulation of the force, he did average on dexterity. He did amazing with dueling technique and meditation. And knowledge of the Jedi Code was just fine. He then moved on to be a Padawan not one of the best but he soon got to taking orders and may other things.[/fancybox2]
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Abilities
[fancybox2]Force Powers: [/fancybox2][fancybox2][/fancybox2][fancybox2]Telepathy - An ability he was born with due to being a spawn of a Baran Do which one of their abilities were to communicate with one another with this ability or with the force, they also used it to predict conversations. This is a very strong ability to Ja since he was born with it.

Force Persuasion - He is moderately good at using this skill, but he doesn't prefer it because he doesn't like order people around

Force Assisted Movements - His agile abilities come in handy with this skill, he thrives in it, a since he is so used to being agile he puts this ability to its full extent.

Telekineses - He is moderately good at this ability, he applies them in the intermediate ways.



Skills
Graceful - Ja had been graceful since a young kid, he had always been since he'd jump on the long, tall, and skinny rocks that had been on his planet(note that he'd do this very fast)


Natural Born Fighter - With his training at Dorin academy all he knows is to fight with his strength and speed this helps his Lightsaber form that , for he combines Form V with Kel Dor Martial Arts. He thrives in this for he trained it all his life.[/fancybox2]



Lightsaber and Saber Forms

[fancybox2]Form V [/fancybox2][fancybox2]
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Ja is pretty good with his form kind of scrappy sometimes, but he powers through, most of the time.
With his Strength and Experience in martial arts he knows about Tai Chi, taking energy your way and deflecting it, Form V is all about that, counterattacks, deflections, stuns and more. He also mixed it with a lot of Kel Dor Martial Arts

He has a simple saber that was infused with a Guardian Rapier so it has the swords designs and imprints, and part of the sword is attached, it has an orange crystal.
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Kuroshi

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it looks nice so far although just a nitpick Form "zero" was more an ethical principle over an actual lightsaber form, as the basis of it simply being the need of the Jedi to restrain themselves when tempted to use "aggressive negotiations," and instead use another well-developed Jedi skill like force persuasion while not resorting to violence.

and the skills section seems a bit lacking, with "craftsman" being the most so. Try and better explain why, and to what degree of skill, he had in regards to each topic listed as it seems more vague than anything else as far as i can tell.

Force abilities could also use some work. Is his only extent with the force telepathy? He was born with it but how proficient is he with it?
 

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Another quick nitpick on the part of constitution. A full 10/10 means that he can take a huge beating. I just want to make sure you know that so there's no misunderstanding, because the way you described it was odd to me.
 

Jay Okumaro

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Ok i did the edits necessary Kuroshi, please look at it and see if it is approved.
 

Kuroshi

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Ok i did the edits necessary Kuroshi, please look at it and see if it is approved.
The skills got alot more detail, looks nice so far. You posted in sign-ups right? The faction's leadership should get you later. Not sure if it would be the exact same as what happened with me, ferre messaging me to the fixes required and such, though.
 

Jay Okumaro

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The skills got alot more detail, looks nice so far. You posted in sign-ups right? The faction's leadership should get you later. Not sure if it would be the exact same as what happened with me, ferre messaging me to the fixes required and such, though.
Yea I put it on the sign-up sheet, so i should get a reply soon. Thanks
 
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