Jack Graves

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It wasn't supposed to be like this...



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NAME: Jack Graves
AGE: 32
SPECIES: Human
HOMEWORLD: Dantooine

FACTION: Indie
RANK: Bounty Hunter

HEIGHT: 6'3''
WEIGHT: 186 lbs
SKIN COLOR: White
EYE COLOR: Hazel

CHARACTER SUMMARY:
“You think you can put it behind you, but you can't. It's like a shadow. A clinging darkness.”


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  • To the love of my life,

    Wherever this may find you, I hope it's bathed in sunlight. I hope the rain is far from you. I hope it's quiet and the air is warm and peaceful. I want you to feel in complete and perfect contentment so that every time you feel that way you think of these five words.

    I'm going to kill you

    I did a lot of thinking in that cell. A small area to pace means I had to expand my mind. As my viewpoint widened I tried, I tried to find a way to forgive you. All the machinations of my mind could not tinker a trinket of any worth to your existence. See, I can forgive you for me, but I won't let you do this to her. Not after what happened to the boy... to my boy

    There were no secrets between us. You saw me for exactly who I was and I finally saw you for what you are. You're beauty beyond measure, like every other lie. As I scratch out these words I know will come to your soft lips, I dream only of clamping a hand around them. No words condemned me. No words will save you.

    As you read these crumpled words that found you know I am close behind. I'm coming for her. I'm coming for you. You said it wasn't supposed to be like this.

    I agree.

    With all my love,
    Jack



  • Patient 567003

    Name: Jack Graves

    Force Sensitivity: None

    Nature of Offense: REDACTED

    Physical Condition: In a word, excellent. Jack Graves appears to use almost all of his free time to train his body. In the yard he is constantly lifting weights, running, or otherwise exerting effort. His cellmates complain constantly of his grunts into the late hours of the night. When searching for his resting heart rate our physician couldn't find one until he shook his legs.

    Tall for his species, the Patient practices poor posture. Slouched with his head on a swivel. This could lead to spinal problems and they should be encouraged to correct this. While Patient exhibits a great deal of exertion in physical condition, multiple cuts and contusions remain unexplained by even the most strenuous workouts. Patient is uncooperative when probed about this.

    Psychological Profile: Quiet. Brooding, the Patient displays a calm temperament that borders on unnerving. Multiple witnesses reported the Patient not blinking for up to forty five minutes while staring at a single point. Despite this the Patient scores in 96th percentile for intelligence, notably their score increased under stress, an anomaly among the group.

    Patient has failed to make any social connections with anyone in the facility. Words exchanged on a weekly basis many times fall under ten. While this would lead to the belief in antisocial tendencies, I believe the Patient may have a sophisticated nonverbal communicative ability. Patients, staff, even some guards show him unusual deference. Goods are exchanged without explanation. It is natural to fear the unknown, but it is even more natural to fear what is known and what cannot be changed. This Patient beyond all others makes me afraid.

    Recommended Treatment: Immediate Release

    Treatment Performed: REDACTED






 
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Could you add in whether or not the character is Force Sensitive? Other than that it looks good.
 

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Could you add in whether or not the character is Force Sensitive? Other than that it looks good.

It's in his case file that he is not but I know you have a ton of these. Thanks for the quick turn around
 

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It's in his case file that he is not but I know you have a ton of these. Thanks for the quick turn around
Just to be safe, please change that from "none detected" to a simple no. Better to have it explicitly spelled out. Approving on the assumption that you'll make that change.

Approved!
 
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