Jackals & Bulls

[The Agriculturist]

blah blah can an admin change the name of the thread to 'Jackals & Bulls' ?

 

[Who Wrecks?]

Clever.:test1:

 

[Lirreka]

An interesting story, confusing to say the least. Mechanically there are a few issues; some rambling sentences that could be pruned down to two however it might lessen some of the confusion that seems to be the main goal of this story. All in all it was a good read.

 

[The Agriculturist]

The confusion now is important, as it is what keeps people interested, as they want to become not confused. It is only the begining, so I have to introduce a lot of characters, which adds to the confusion caused by the fact the reader comes in in mid story. However, the more the story gets developed, the more the confusion will cease.

 

[The Agriculturist]

G E N T L E M E N,-- B E H O L D!!!!!!! A - N E W - U P D A T E - I N - M E - S T O R Y!!!

 

[Ru the Boatswain]

funny and entertaining. its more towards the latter.

 

[The Agriculturist]

You're wierd. its serious and unentertaining. Y O U - H A V E - N O T - G O T T E N - T H E - C O D E!!!!

 

[Ru the Boatswain]

oh not looking at the code anymore. im just reading it strait forward.

 

[Johnnysaurus Rex]

Pretty good. Kinda makes me wish I had the ambition to put stuff back up in the Fan Works. Do have to admit that I skimmed a lot, but I seem to do this with almost everything in the Fan Works section.

 

[The Agriculturist]

Little Update. But very very very important. mooohahah

 

[The Balance]

This is brillant

 

[The Agriculturist]

B R I L L I A N T !!!!!!!!

 

[The Agriculturist]

Chapter II is now entirely up. Probably last update, since no one reads this amazingness.

 

[The Agriculturist]

Badabump

 

[Sovereign]

Your characters are brilliant.

 

[The Agriculturist]

It's cuz i didn't make profiles for all of them! hooray for chaos!

 

[Sovereign]

It's cuz i didn't make profiles for all of them! hooray for chaos!

Anything worth writing comes on the spot anyway.

 

[The Agriculturist]

this story is the spot for good reading.

 

[Sovereign]

this story is the spot for good reading.

I know. Anyone who wants to read something good should definitely come here.

 

[The Agriculturist]

Hahaha there is victory in advertising!