Janus Fawkes (UPDATE IN PROGRESS)

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JANUS FAWKES

NAME: Janus
SURNAME: Fawkes
LANGUAGES: Galac Basic, Nautila, Mon Calimarian
FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
MASTER: Nero di Lacrima
TEMPLE: Typhon
ALIAS:

STRENGTH:■■■■■ 5/10
DEXTERITY: ■■■■■■ 6/10
CONSTITUTION:■■■■ 4/10
INTELLIGENCE:■■■■■ 5/10
WISDOM:■■■■ 4/10
CHARISMA: ■■■■■■ 6/10
SPECIES: Nautolan
HOMEWORLD: Glee Anselm
AGE: Thirteen
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5ft 7
WEIGHT: 59kg (130 pounds)
EYES: Black
HAIR: None
SKIN: Moss Green
CREDITS: 1,000
FORCE SENSITIVE: YES
BIOGRAPHY
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---CHILDHOOD---

Janus was born on his species native planet Glee Anselm to an emotionally distant father who was never there and more interested in running the family’s vast robotics business and an over attentive mother giving Janus a tendency to rebel. From the age of six Janus had a fascination with computers and taking things apart although he was always under the watchful eye of his mother who constantly recorded his upbringing. As part of his education he received lessons in writing, reading and language lessons in galactic basic and Mon calamari as well as martial arts training and gymnastics training, skills which he uses till this very day. His father intended these skills to be used when Janus became part of the company and eventually the C.E.O although Janus was more interested in joining the army with a head full of dreams of being a war hero and beating the imperial scum. He spent his spare time tinkering with machines and droids. He did not discover he was force sensitive until his 8th birthday at which he accidentally threw a chair out of a window while angry.

He kept his sensitivity to the force a secret from his parents fearing that he would be sent away for being a freak (unaware of what the force was) trying to spend the time with academic and physical excessive diving into his study's and physical exercises but he was unable to hide the fact that the force was manifesting having small hazy dreams of the future and sometimes levitation of objects when he was angry

[PRE TIME SKIP]
---TRAINING ON TYPHON---



Janus trained in the temples of the Jedi since the age of eight training for over five years (now at the age of thirteen). During his time on Typhon he spent his time in the Jedi temple studying holocrons of history and holocrons on the various forms of lightsaber combat taking on learning Niman, an all-around balanced style of combat also keeping up his training in gymnastics and hand to hand combat training and dummies. He spent a lot of time in study halls reading up on lightsaber forms.

During his spare time he arranged training session with other initiates as the hone his skills in group training. For one session he trained with an initiate called Gol Erbek who was previously a padawan up until his master’s death. During the practise they honed their force telekinesis and talked about their views on the temple and force finding they both had something in common.


The day after Janus was studying shii-cho where he was approached by two students who wanted to practise sparring. Accepting the trio went to the training room to only be met by another Nautolan who they extended to him the offer to join the duel. The duel started out slow with Janus attacking Amon but was soon being pursued by Arkantos he was briefly pushed away by Amon but came back with a flurry of attacks trying to keep them close although Janus managed to roll away keeping his distance from the two before Deenar released a flurry of blaster shots to the group pursuing Deenar he attempted to destroy his gun but failed in doing on coxing Deenar to lock his weapon with his training saber. Janus attempted to kick him in the groin to try break the lock but his foot was locked between his thighs and free to strike him with his staff arm but before Deenar could strike Janus allowed his body to fall backwards allowing himself to flip Deenar over his body and onto the group a couple meters away letting Janus regain his posture. Deenar then committed a cowardly act by firing at Janus while his back was turned but he luckily deflected them. After a lengthy debate Arks team decided to force meld before the battle continued to a stalmate


---TEN YEAR TIME SKIP---

Update coming soon...

SKILLS
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FORCE SKILLS
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FORCE PUSH/PULL ■■
FORCE EMPATHY
FORCE MELD
[PASSIVE] FORCE PRECOGNITION ■■
BREATH CONTROL ■■■
FORCE SPEED ■■■
FORCE JUMP/LEAP ■■■
FORCE STUN
WEAPON/MARTIAL SKILLS
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LIGHTSABER ■■
BLASTER PISTOLS ■■
VIBRO WEAPONS
HAND TO HAND ■■■
TECHNICAL SKILLS
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HACKING/PROGRAMMING ■■■
ROBOTICS\ENGINEERING ■■■
COOKING ■■■
READING ■■■
WRITING ■■■
LIGHTSABER FORMS
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FORM I: SHII-CHO ■■
FORM II: MAKASHI
FORM III: SORESU
FORM IV: ATARU
FORM V:SHIEN /DJEM SO ■■
FORM VI: NIMAN ■■■
FORM VII: JUYO VAAPAD

GEAR
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  • TRAINING LIGHTSABER - The standard issue training lightsaber. made to do far less damage, and would result in welts, bruises, and minor burns instead of amputation or death.

  • JEDI ROBES (Custom) - Janus's robes are customized from the standard issue robes having a non sleeved grey tunic, arms covered in dark grey bandages all the way to hands, normal loose grey pants and boots with a utility belt aound his waist. His outfit comes also with a long dark grey cloak

  • DATAPAD - Janus's personal datapad is modified with personal programming and security features made for slicing and other computer based hacking, the datapad itself has encrypted security measure and a emergency memory wipe should someone attempt to tamper or hack into his personal files

ROLE-PLAYS:

- [PRE TIME SKIP]
[INITIATE]
-Ain't That a Kick in the Head [STORY] [18/12/2012] [COMPLETE]
- Making Friends [TRAINING] [22/12/2012] [IN PROGRESS]
Force Training - Telekinesis [TRAINING] [28/12/2012] [COMPLETE]

[II] Padawan
- Light Side Gives You Wings [TRAINING/STORY] [30/12/2012] [IN PROGRESS]


DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

KILLS:

 
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Your super small font is horrible. I can't read it without copy/pasting to word.

His skills in the Force are a little advanced for a 13 year old (not sure whats up with all the 13 year old characters lately), such as Force stun, grip, and barrier.
 

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Your super small font is horrible. I can't read it without copy/pasting to word.

His skills in the Force are a little advanced for a 13 year old (not sure whats up with all the 13 year old characters lately), such as Force stun, grip, and barrier.

working on it now and making the changes. and they say force barrier is quite basic unless wookipedia lies D:

and lol I think it looks better in a smaller font although I have no trouble reading it
 
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not sure whats up with all the 13 year old characters lately
Yeah, this made me wonder too. I made Deenar 12 because I am inexperienced in RPing, so he would be inexperienced too, and for quite some time, he was the only Jedi of that age I knew of, but then others started appearing. Oh well, I raised his age to 14 :D
 

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UPDATED :bitchez:bitchez
 

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His skills in the Force are a little advanced for a 13 year old (not sure whats up with all the 13 year old characters lately), such as Force stun, grip, and barrier.

I blame anime.
 

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A proofread would do wonders for the quality of this profile. The formatting is solid, though.

Your character's name is familiar, but maybe it's just me. Have you been writing Star Wars for a while?
 

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The picture is... of a female? Definitely not the most attractive... I think you might want to edit the gender... it could be embarrassing for her/him. Not that the picture looks like a 13 year old, but I suppose its not the worst. Also, some of the grammar needs fixing. It's not that bad, I've seen worse while grading papers for my professors, you'd be surprised the kind of dolts they let into college these days... I could probably edit it for you if you wanted.
 

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A proofread would do wonders for the quality of this profile. The formatting is solid, though.

Your character's name is familiar, but maybe it's just me. Have you been writing Star Wars for a while?

My character is named after Janus Greejatus (first name only) who was a close ally to Palpatine. And I have only been writing star wars on this site for a while so its not that good. It also half explains my poor bio :3

The picture is... of a female? Definitely not the most attractive... I think you might want to edit the gender... it could be embarrassing for her/him. Not that the picture looks like a 13 year old, but I suppose its not the worst. Also, some of the grammar needs fixing. It's not that bad, I've seen worse while grading papers for my professors, you'd be surprised the kind of dolts they let into college these days... I could probably edit it for you if you wanted.

Ooh that's a bit embarrassing the image is actually of a male borrowed from a friend who made it for her Star wars hunk album. No thanks I will mend it myself, we don't want a dolt to be pulling you down. The Biography section of the bio is long over due for a change but no not from the likes of you

:CNot

*cough* Bump :bitchez*Cough*
 

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Gosh Gendo, your profile font is too tiny >.<
 

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Gosh Gendo, your profile font is too tiny >.<

tiny....TINY :CNot

No but in all seriousness I haveno trouble reading the font. I like the font "system" albeit being small it looks neat though when I finally make the changes to the profile I might make a change to the font. :)
 

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I think you misspelled Tython. You have it as Typhon. If I'm wrong just ignore me.
 
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