Jarrakk Bedoi

[Wookiee2]

NAME: Jarrakk Bedoi
FACTION: Rebellion
RANK: Member
SPECIES: T'surr
AGE: 13
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 2.6 meters
WEIGHT: 230 lbs
EYES: Red
HAIR: None
SKIN: Blue
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: He has a perfect light blue circle birthmark on his back.
FORCE SENSITIVE: None

Strength: 8/10
DEXTERITY: 4/10
CONSTITUTION: 8/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 2/10
CHARISMA: 6/10

FORCE POWERS:None

SKILLS: He has good with a blaster marksmanship , good engineer, and good in hand to hand combat. He is also a good on the fly thinker who can work his way out of a jam. He is skilled enough to take down an inexperienced sith or jedi padawan out of training. He will be a good asset to the rebels.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: None

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Strengths: he is good at blaster marksmanship, and has sharp claws which helps in hand to hand combat. He is also good at fixing guns and ships. Weaknesses: he is very slow and is not as fast as others. He has a hard time evading fast creatures.

GEAR: Carbonite rifle, and longo two blasters.

SHIP: Cargo Ship

DROIDS: A metalwork droid

PETS: None

PERSONALITY: Jarrakk is a very greedy individual who will kill for credits. He is an aggressive creature who loves to fight and will fight any other smaller species to show his dominance. Last of all he is not very happy all the time because of his past. He also hates any of the mandalorians because his dad never did like them.

BIOGRAPHY:Jarrakk is a T'surr and grew up on the planet of T'surr. When he was born he quickly began popular by age 2 because of his intelligence. He grew up all the time fixing things others and earning credits. Though being so young he was considered rich. The T'surr's were known for having slaves which is why they were so rich. By the time he turned 4 his dad started teaching him how to use his razor sharp teeth to kill

Jarrakk was taught a lot at age 4 but age 6 was his biggest learning curve. He learned a lot from his dad like how to shoot a blaster and how to use his claws in hand to hand combat.

Age 8 was a big year for Jarrakk because that was his proving grounds along with all his other fellow T'surr's. Jarrack was took to the ring and was ready to fight. In his first fight Jarrakk got clawed hard on the arm by another then rage kicked in and the event turned deadly. Jarrakk used his teeth and stuck them in the neck of his opponent and left him laying on the ground In pain. However the bite the T'surr survived luckily.

Then by age 10 Jarraks Dad taught him how to run a slave business. Jarrakk quickly began learning more and more. After two years of learning from his dad about slaves he got to take control of them at age 12. With a lot of work needed to be done Jarrakk still worked on stuff and let the slaves do the rest. Then came age 13 came and he opened up a gun/ weapons shop. He fixed them and made them making a decent salary selling the blasters and rifles to factions and other species.

Then at age 14 Jarrakk was fully grown and said his final goodbyes to his parents then left to go join the rebellion because he is eager to be part of their military. When he arrived to Pardron to be put into the waiting list. The soliders have never seen anything like him. Jarrak was then took to a room and was given rebellion gear then was put into a group of others to become a rebellion. Now Jarrak is ready to make a name for himself being a part of major rebellion missions. However he wants to dominate all creatures he decided to join the rebellion to be in wars with them and be considered the underdog to win.

 

[Galavant]

Very interesting character, Wookiee! I do have a few questions/concerns though.

1) Looking at the T'surr on Wookieepedia, and the pages related to them, I don't see any info on how they age, or any proving grounds. Is there another source where you're getting this from? If this is fanon information, you might want to get in touch with Empress about that since she's our resident species approval admin, not to mention her numerous other responsibilities.

2) Given the T'surr outlook, how is this guy getting along with the Rebellion? Why is he joining the first place? There's no real motivation, and the cultural clashes make it seem really unlikely that he'd try to join up, or that the Rebels would just accept him considering he's from a species that's known for it's brutality, view of other species as inferior to a great degree, and slavery practices. His personality also doesn't make him seem like someone who'd join up. I'm not saying it's insurmountable but it should definitely be something that's a major point for the character.

3) I'd like it you toned down the strength, and constitution by a point, or toned down the dexterity by two points, given how you mention that one of his weaknesses is, he's not very fast.

 

[Wookiee2]

ok I will take all this and fix him. also the reason he is a rebel just because I wanted him to be more helpful and only have fury when in battle. But thanks anyway.