Jerej Bathina

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Constructive criticism is welcome!!
NAME: Jerej Bathina


FACTION: N/A
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 26
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 4'9"
WEIGHT: 145
EYES: Green
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Long hair, pretty built.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Force Sensitive

STRENGTH: Strong, and smart
DEXTERITY:
Very flexible
CONSTITUTION: Very Healthy
INTELLIGENCE: Naturally good at bounty hunting because of his father, has ability to repair things, and heal him self.
WISDOM: Very intelligent. Can make plans at the last minute and can make the plan work.
CHARISMA:
Smooth talker can influence decisions of a strong man.

PERSONALITY:
Tough, but out going. Willing to help anyone out... for the right price.

BIOGRAPHY:
As a child Jerej grew up as a son of a bounty hunter, through out his child hood all he cared about was fighting and being the best at everything. As a young teen he realized he was force sensitive in his middle teens his dad brought him home his first light saber, and started to learn how to use a light saber, along with basic force powers. By the time he was a young adult he had mastered the basic force powers, along with going on some bounty hunts with his dad. Later in life he got the ambition of becoming the best bounty hunter there is.
So one day his father told him that he will never have what it takes to be a good bounty hunter. So Timpo started hunting bounty's on his own and sometimes getting ahead of his father on his own bounty's and taking the money for himself. He walked into a trap and his father followed him into the trap and in the end of the fight his father was killed by the man he had a bounty on. Destined to kill find and kill the man the killed his father Timpo is now on the loose.


FORCE POWERS:
-Telekinesis
-Sense
-Jump
-Speed


SKILLS:
Run fast, and has great agility.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Green Light Saber Sword

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He doesn't know when to stop sometimes. He can walk into traps very easily but don't be fooled because he can get out of them almost just as fast as he got into them.

GEAR:
Light Saber, laser guns, and Armor


-- The Content Below is Optional, but Encouraged!--

SHIP:
RZ-1 A-wing interceptor
Sentinel-class landing craft


DROIDS:
Astromech droid



KILLS:
N/A

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A
 
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Prudence

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Interested to see how this fleshes out once you're done with it being a WIP.
 

Prudence

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I'd expand the bio and the personality quite a bit. Look at how long my bio and personality (see "Prudi Kyramud" in my signature". My bio is a bit longer than yours needs to be, becasue I've been playing him for a few years so a lot of the bio is comprised of stories on site. The personality though is about how long your personality should be.
 

Timpo Falensarano

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I'd expand the bio and the personality quite a bit. Look at how long my bio and personality (see "Prudi Kyramud" in my signature". My bio is a bit longer than yours needs to be, becasue I've been playing him for a few years so a lot of the bio is comprised of stories on site. The personality though is about how long your personality should be.
I'm going to make him force sensitive bounty hunter and then I he can roll with your guy or something.
 
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