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So, what do people think of the changes so far? The colours and such. Also looking for that force sensitivity scale thing that i saw in one profile, so if anyone knows where i can get a copy of the format of it, let me know please~

Lastly. I'd like players with Force users to 'rate' Joy from 2,000 to 10,000 and i'll take the average decided, for her midichlorian count and how 'powerful' she could be. 20,000 being anakin-level potiential, 2,500 being an average force user who dies like a bitch.
 

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'midichlorian' count doesn't really set the bar for how talented you are with the force. Here normal training or innate ability would do.

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'midichlorian' count doesn't really set the bar for how talented you are with the force. Here normal training or innate ability would do.

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D:

I thought its like IQ. Where it helps give an idea what kind of potiential you could be expected to have?
 

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It can also be used as an excuse to say "My character is stronger than yours" without undergoing the same amount of training as the other individual. By all means you can have a *shudder* midichlorian count but that most likely than not, wont define your actual talent in the force.

Anakin Skywalker still got owned by better duelist, like Obi (Where it shows they have the same amount of strength when it comes to force powers) and Dooku( Where his death was a mere plan by Sidous to turn him over to The Dark Side).
 

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It can also be used as an excuse to say "My character is stronger than yours" without undergoing the same amount of training as the other individual. By all means you can have a *shudder* midichlorian count but that most likely than not, wont define your actual talent in the force.

*softspokensqueak* I just wanted something prettier than whats there at the moment. *cower*
 

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*softspokensqueak* I just wanted something prettier than whats there at the moment. *cower*

I'm not stopping you. It would just confuse people as all.
 

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Well what else could I put there... Hum. I was just going to have a colour-filled bar to represent it rather than a number, anyhow.
 

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Welcome back!
 

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born 15 aby and its like what. 28 or something?

Thank you Miz.

It's 1023 ABY.

So if you mean literally 15 ABY, she'd be ooooold. If you mean 1015 ABY, then she'd be eight.
 

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That might've been my original intent - eight. Prolly lean towards 12 at this point, though. Might need to edit that.

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It's 1023 ABY.

So if you mean literally 15 ABY, she'd be ooooold. If you mean 1015 ABY, then she'd be eight.

"14, ABY 1,009." (from profile)

So I guess shes 14.
 
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Weeeelll ain't she old and sweet and needs to be indicted into the Sith Order
 

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Fixed half a million spelling errors. >.>
Some extra fleshing out.
Also fixed the "Seeya" picture.
 
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Completely redid the template and such, thanks to Saul. ( http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...Saul-Template-Thread-(Faction-Tech-Character) )

Also did an update because why not.


Joy Carleec
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Themetunes
In case The above doesn't function:
Owl City: Fireflies, Good Time, When Can I see You Again?
Homestuck (coloUrs and mayhem): Phantasmic Youngsters
Imagine Dragons: Amsterdam
Erasure: Always
Bruno Mars: The Lazy Song
Hanson: MmmBop
Super Ponybeat (mix): dIsCoRd
New Radicals: You Get What You Give
Anything "Whimsical", really.

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Independent
Tatooine Expeditionary Force
Non-Combatant


SPECIES
Twi'lek

FAMILY
[st]Unknown Blood Father (Deceased)[/st]
[st]Unknown Blood Mother (Deceased)[/st]
Mark Carleec (Adoptive Father, Alive)
[st]Susan Carleec (Adoptive Mother, Deceased).[/st]

WEIGHT
105lbs


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14, ABY 1,009.
Presumed Born Roon, Raised on Tatooine.

GENDER
Female

SKIN COLOR
Rutian (Blue)

EYE COLOR
Blue

HEIGHT
4'11


FORCE SENSITIVE
Yes


DISTINGUISHING FEATURES

Abnormally girthy / large Lekku for her gender and age. Eyebrows are Tattooed on for a more human appearance. The bases/midsection of Tchun-Tchin are both Tattooed with darker blue bands, whereas the tiger-stripe tips are naturally darker blue. Lips and Blush appears to be a slight shade of purple.


ATTRIBUTES

STRENGTH: Typical of a young girl her size, she is nothing to be feared of in this regard. Perhaps she could lift 60lbs for a few seconds... This would be her weakest attribute by far.

DEXTERITY: Thanks to her race, Joy is naturally capable of smooth or rapid changes of body direction and with the addition of her small size she can be very slippery. This would be her second strongest attribute.

CONSTITUTION: While she's not the best taken care of, a reasonably hard upbringing has toughened her up somewhat and keeping busy has at least given her some endurance. Shes no runner, however. Her Constitution is about average for her age.

INTELLIGENCE: Perhaps her strongest attribute, she is a clever girl who prides herself on rapid learning of new things or putting her head to a job. She enjoys showing up adults, especially.

WISDOM: Joy has some logical forethought, but shes still got a long way to go to be sagely or predict problems into the future. She is still young and rash and has plenty of mistakes to make. Her Wisdom is about average for her age.

CHARISMA: Being a Twi'lek again helps, in that shes naturally adorable and charming and isn't afraid to make use of her natural talents to sway others into her way of thinking. Her Charisma is reasonably good.


SKILLS

Is adept with Computers, Mechanics and more advanced machinery within reason; applying concepts she knows to new devices she's taught about easily and having a logical mind to work out things through careful study and reading.
Has no driving/pilot Experience.
Has little to no combat Experience other than shooting a long barrel rifle (limited success).
Knows how to survive in the desert for a limited time with little resources.
Can pick up new languages easily; however only knows Ryl and Lekku from studies, is likely not very good with either without tutelage.


STRENGTHS & WEAKNESSES

While she is obviously not strong, her other weaknesses stem from inexperience, naivety and a lack of confidence in the face of violence. A majority of these are due to her age and not having experienced them enough to develop a sense of how to deal with it, or having not dealt with deceptive strangers (or strangers in general). However she is a fast study and is not likely to fall for the same trick twice. Her primary strengths come from her fast-working mind and logic solving ability, not to mention legs for running and a mouth for fast-talking and apologies.


PERSONALITY

Bubbly, adventurous and ambitious; she seems to contain bountiful amounts of energy, even when she's tired and is typically described for her logical problem solving mind and resourceful imagination when working with things she has a passion for. Shes also not shy when it comes to a new face or making friends (depending on the intimidation of the person), though she appears to favor humans when it comes to socializing - likely due to the familiarity of her family. Avoids violence and aggression outright, preferring things remain pleasant. When sufficiently intimidated, becomes 'uncomfortable' and quiet. Has a tenancy to act younger than she is; perhaps due to losing most of her childhood to the various ailments in her life.


BIOGRAPHY

Estimated to be Born 1,009 ABY, on the planet Roon in the outer rim systems, from what little information can be gathered from her clothes, baby belongings and genetics. She was most likely to of been from a family of spice smuggling Twi'leks; using the Death Wind Corridor hyperspace route to do their runs, when something occurred to their vessel. These problems could've ranged anywhere between involving the asteroids encircling the planet or pirates attacking the ship and beyond. In any case, wreckage of a ship was quickly claimed and salvaged by the locals, while two destroyed escape pods (one empty) and a third surviving pod were found in the Tatoonie desert. Despite the trauma, her father managed to trek several miles in the desert before collapsing at the doorstep of a farmer. While the human who opened the door was kind enough to tend to the needs of the two, without sufficient medical attention the Father passed away in his sleep.

Mark Carleec now found himself with a baby alien and only knew the mutterings of a near-dead man. He felt somewhat responsible for the child's situation, having been unable to help her blood further and knowing that places that would accept such a child would eventually turn her to prostitution or worse, he decided to become her adopted father. This was not without ulterior motive - since his wife desired a child while he did not. It was hopes that the new arrival might help mend their strained marriage.

She was named "Joy" in 1,010 ABY by the new adoptive parents. And though for a time they appeared satisfied with the girl, it wouldn't always seem so. Underlying problems between man and wife was not so easily dusted under the carpet. Despite this, Joy grew up happy and as a bit of a tomboy, helping her dad maintain the moisture farm and other mechanical objects with his guidance while assisting her mother with chores around the house. She bonded more with her father, than her mother - going out shooting, on errands and learning the majority of her skills from him.

By ABY 1,016, Susan Carleec's health began to decline and Joy took over the majority of her routine over the next few months. On the income of a Farmer, however. There was little that could be done. She passed away a year later under medication, so it was made more peaceful than it would otherwise be.

Her Father from then on would suffer from mood swings; requiring Joy to anchor them into positives for the remainder of her years at the farm. Despite the hardship she had experienced and the helplessness, her time working alongside her mother had helped her keep a positive outlook despite the darkness. And this remained with her, but everyone has a limit.

By the age of 14, ABY 1,023, she and her Father's relationship was strained (perhaps in part due to her teenage years) and she announced her intention to leave and make some real money for the family, doing something she can enjoy. Not to mention learn more about her origins. Her parents. Though he didn't approve, he made no effort to stop her and she promised to write to him often.

Then after packing her things, she left.


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Hold Out Blaster
(link)​

INVENTORY

CREDITS:
1,700

GEAR:
Pack with assorted personal effects; clothes, basic communicator tied to her Father for writing, holovid display of pictures and so on.
A Hold-Out Blaster, since its small and easy to use for personal defense with concealed holster.
New Clothes: Black Tunic with a tail, lined with red edges. Has a hood. Black Camo Pants, which are a little on the big side.
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ROLEPLAYS
  1. New Stories (Tatooine) [STATUS: FINISHED] [LINK]
  1. Sister of the Blue Night [STATUS: FINISHED] [LINK]
  1. Christophsis Heist Act I: The Scout [STATUS: FINISHED] [LINK]
  1. Christophsis Heist Act II: The Plan [STATUS: FINISHED] [LINK]
  1. Common Ground [STATUS: INACTIVE] [LINK]
  1. One Bumpy Ride [STATUS: INACTIVE] [LINK]
  1. Sand and Sun [STATUS: ACTIVE] [LINK]
  1. Rescue Me[STATUS: ACTIVE] [LINK]



TEMPLATE THANKS
Thanks to Starburns for his Template.
And thanks to Cassanova for letting me know the Templates exist.

Seeya!
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My Wonderfully Shitty Drawing:
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