Karan Sentu

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NAME: Sentu’Karan’Nuruodo.
FACTION: Independent
RANK: Bounty hunter
SPECIES: Chiss
AGE: 42
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6feet 5 inches
WEIGHT: 240 pounds
EYES: Red
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Blue
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: No
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

STRENGTH: He was athletic, a fencer, and martial artist he is very strong but not so much as to slow him down.
DEXTERITY: He is quick on his feet a habit enforced by fencing and martial arts.
CONSTITUTION: He is in good health as most Chiss are.
INTELLIGENCE: He is a nobleman he was the son of very intelligent Chiss and spent much of his childhood reading on military matters. He is a good problem solver and a tactical genius.
WISDOM: He seems to always know what the correct move in any military situation is. He is very strict about the rules which keeps him and others out of trouble.
CHARISMA: He is a noble born Chiss and possesses all the charm that such an upbringing can provide. His manners needless to say are incredibly refined.


SKILLS:
He is an avid fencer and was trained in lightsaber combat by a Jedi he once knew. He was extremely involved in martial arts and is a very good hand to hand fighter. He is also an accomplished duelist and can defend himself with the lightfoil that he carries at all times. He can navigate and fly.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He is very good at finding ways to kill people. He is a formidable opponent in any fight due to his enormous size and his training, however, because of this he will never turn down a fight. He is slightly schizophrenic and also insane. His emotions and his mental condition can sometimes be used against him. He is very easily enraged, and loves to be cruel. His time in intelligence interrogating suspects taught him how to sedate drug and gas people. He owns and occasionally uses different knockout and lethal gas canisters, as well as some smoke canisters to scare away the public.
GEAR:
He wears a black suit most of the time but his outfits vary depending upon where is and what he is doing and carries a very fancy lightfoil with him at all times. He also owns and carries a pair of small concealable blasters. He owns a Katana, throwing stars and some throwing knives that he saved from his childhood. He owns a set of daggers which he conceals on his person which are very fancy and were gifts from his fencing instructor. He also owns a pair of ivory handled .45 caliber revolvers that were gifts from his father. He keeps these in belt holster where he can get to them easily.

SHIP:
S40K Phoenix Hawk-Class Light Pinnace: A light starship that is cheap and far from luxurious. It did contain 2heavy blaster cannons and 2 light ion cannons as well as a hyperdrive class 2 system and a shielding and navigation system. It’s use is just as a light and affordable ship to carry a few passengers through space. It can hold up to 4 passengers.

PERSONALITY:
He is Schizophrenic and insane. He is easily angered. His emotions are out of control he laughs and cries and sometimes sings and dances at inappropriate times. He does have a remarkably bad temper becoming very angry over most things that go wrong and sometimes even becoming violent. He is very reclusive and wants the company of almost no one. He is poor but due to his psychological ailments he never worries about money. He kills for the love of the sport more than he does for the money. He considers himself to be a very good fighter and will never turn down a fight.
BIOGRAPHY:
Birth and raising.

He was born the third son of a very wealthy Chiss merchant and a very intelligent Chiss woman. He was tutored from birth by a very expensive and accomplished tutor in the area of military matters and general knowledge because his parents realized that he would not be able to survive on the inheritance he would get because he had older brothers. They decided that his best option would be to get him a good post in the military. From a young age he preferred at was better at army strategy than navy strategy. He led a very structured childhood from 7 am until 3:30 pm every day of the week he did school. Then for the next three hours his tutor would instruct him in military matters sometimes this just consisted of giving him books to ready at 6:30 until bed time at eleven was spent in two hours of martial arts practice two hours of fencing practice and half an hour at blaster shooting practice. On weekends he would spend 4 hours from 8 am until noon on martial arts and then 4 hours on fencing the rest of the day was his. This was the daily routine. However, he was allowed to skip fencing and martial arts not infrequently in order to do things with his friends. He was taught extensively in lightfoil fighting because his father believed that was the only way for a civilized man to defend himself against all adversaries. He learned to fight with them very well. He is also an expert at fighting with his hands over the years he learned several martial arts. His brothers mostly kept to themselves except for a few practice duels now and then there contact was limited. There was little time for enjoyment without having the afternoon lessons cancelled because company was coming.

College education.

Like so many other young men from wealthy families he found himself too young to receive a very big inheritance from his father, at least for a while. He decided as his parents had planned all along to enter into the army. He entered into the army academy and vowed to study his hardest and finish top of his class. He obeyed every rule religiously and never got anything other than an A in any class. He obeyed his superior’s orders promptly and without question. He was a model student and the class president. He graduated top of his class.

Beginning of his military career.

His father got him a very good starting position as a military intelligence commando. Secretly, he decided to leave the army behind and start a new life for himself. One that paid a lot better, but only if you got the kills. He started his move toward this darker and crazier side of him when he was in the army. He got tired of taking orders all the time, and became extremely angry and the “incompetence” of the generals. He became ill and suffered severely psychologically. He became severely paranoid and thought that everyone was trying to kill him. He also began to lose his grip on reality he became insane, and yet when it came to planning and killing he is still surprisingly lucid. He hears voices in his head sometimes, but they always want him to kill more people. His emotions are completely out of control he cries and laughs and dances at completely inappropriate times. He did his job faithfully for a few more months while he saved up and prepared to leave the army. Then, all of the sudden, he disappeared from view, he became a man on the run looking for bounties to make some cash. He is very poor and uses just what he owned from being in the army and his childhood. After he completes his first bounty hunt he intends to buy better items and go after bigger bounties.
KILLS:
None.

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
None.

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None.

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None.

ROLE-PLAYS:
None.
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jpchewy01

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It looks good, but you should change the name to an ethnic Chiss name and any mention of blaster should be changed to charric.
 

Mars

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Not that they matter, but his strength, charisma, agility and such are op as he has no weaknesses there really. His weaknesses you do have listed are things a higher level military commander should have moved past and the training with lightsabers despite a lack of force sensitivity is pointless tbh.

I'd be more comfortable giving you a commando rank. Fix up those things above and change the history to fit.

Thanks!

:CHappy
 
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Kant

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My character has changed and is now updated. How can I get it to not read Chiss anymore since he is now a bounty hunter and not a Chiss army guy.
 
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Ehrlich Mar

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Just edit the first post; it should let you change the prefix from there if you edit in "advanced mode"
 
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