Killon Millalak

[fezgod]

Rank: Apprentice
Age: 24
Planet of birth: Coruscant
Backstory: Killon was Jedi Knight who had a hobby in Philosophy. He liked to raise moral questions about the force. One the question he asked was. "is it us who control the force or force who controlled us." the idea around this question is because if force is around us and ties us to everything then does that mean it controls the destiny of every living creature in-universe. Killon Millalak Hated the idea that destiny was preplanned and that he had no free will. So he tried to look for answers that could control one from the force. He found no answer. He wailed in pain realizing that there was no way to free oneself from the force.
When he heard a rumor that exiles controlled that force though domination of it and he started looking for exiles to study the dark side of Force. He even Volunteers for multiple dangerous solo Hunts against the Exiles so that he can Learn how dark side and Exiles work. After few years of hunting, he found an exile Master from the Sorcer sect library. When fighting him, he realized that this Eile master was too powerful for him. When in battle he saw his master over Darkside of force and decided that he could become a student and learn the dark side of force from him. So he put his lightsaber pack into his robes, With Exile master very confused he stopped fighting and looked at Killon. Killon asked that could he be his apprentice and also told him about why he wants to join the Exiles and practice The dark side of the force. The exile master accepted this and told him that his name is Nazgorond. Learning from Nazgorrond, he started to learn that they really that Exiles controlled force by telling it what to do instead of letting the force to flow through them when they are using force abilities. He was happy and ecstatic realizing that he does have free will and is not beholden to the destiny of force. He also learned how Exiles solved they own problems with they own work without help from anybody else. With this advice, he started to believe that the only way for people to grow is to let them face they own challenge and not. Nazgrorond also showed him that the Exiles have many different and fractured Phiolpshpeys under different sects. After few months of study the Jedi order began to be very worried about Killon and sent Jedi Master Norrick, Norrick was a veteran of Multiple battles in civil war and was more power than Nazgorond. Norrick when founded out that Killon was learning from Nazgrorond he decided that he must kill both of them. After few minutes of battle, both sides looked quite worn out with even Norrick looking wakened from battling both Exile master and Previous Jedi Knight. At the climax of the battle, Norrick managed to get clean head kill at Nazgorond. When saw the death of his master, the person who freed him from shackles of force he went into a fit of pure rage and managed to kill Norrick though his rage, Norrick would survive if he wasn't so heavily damaged from the fight. After draining his master Helmet for respect for him, he went off to join the Exiles and help them in the civil war. When in the civil war he worked for almost every sect and changed sects when he had a good understanding of what they believed in and they Philosophy and learned they teachings while also making notes on Philosophy of sect. Writing the benefits of and disadvantage that each sect offers in they beliefs and philosophy. He is also writing what his thoughts on Force were and tried to expand the knowledge of how Force works and effects that it has on galaxy at large.
after the civil war, he continued to make notes and changes that force has made to the galaxy on also tried to expand his thought on each of the sects while also trying to develop his dark force abilities to this day
Appearance: He is average height and weighted, a human who usually wears a mask to protect his face from any attacks. He is Caucasian and currently his the look what his face looks like is unknown.
Personality: He is introverted and normally tries to avoid talking. However, if it is a talk about the of Philosophy or the force, then he would gladly join. When talking about Philosophy to a person who disagrees with he becomes condescending to an individual however if he respects the person he will give them a serious tone and tries to explain why he is right. When talking about other subjects, he bit uncertain and normally says when he advises that he is not sure even if it right.
Also there darker side to his personality. He believes for people to be strong they must go through they must sort they own sort problems out and believed helping them weak. He even thinks that a little bit of help means absolutely nothing and even damages individual strength
Abilities: He has a masters knowledge of Philosophy. He has good knowledge of dark force with both aggressive, defensive and utility abilities. He also has a good understanding of lightsaber combat. He has good knowledge form V and III.
Equipment: Exile robes.
A walking stick.
Lightsaber.
Datapad.

 

[GABA]

Hello!

This is a nice start, but I suggest going back and reading the Jedi write up and the Exile write up.

They give more detail on the reasons for the civil upheaval and eventual war that broke out, which can help your philosopher's background. Take your time and be sure to check for grammar errors in your character profile, there were many that made it difficult for me to follow.

Tag me when you have made changes.

Thanks!

 

[fezgod]

@GABA Ren

 

[fezgod]

@GABA Ren

 

[GABA]

Ok, first, the Jedi code and the tenants don’t mention that Jedi are controlled by a predetermined destiny, that is something on a personal belief depending on the Jedi.

Another issue is, the civil war has been going for nearly a hundred years, war is nothing new. There isn’t any Exile Philosophy, they’re a disorganized group with individual mantras. Killon would not have any access to any such materials.

So please don't scan the write ups, read them carefully and make the edits accordingly.

 

[fezgod]

@GABA Ren Sorry. did not realize it was going on for 100 years and that I thought that even the Exiles were unorganized they had philosophers. I have revamped the story so that is more acceptable to canon now

 

[GABA]

If you take out the part about getting books from the exiles, that will improve it greatly. There aren't really like definite material texts out there, and even if there was, exiles are greedy enough not to give to him.

I would suggest that he would go on the missions to hunt exiles and instead of fighting them, he would study them, then have him tell the Jedi masters his findings which would lead to exiling himself.

 

[fezgod]

@GABA Ren Ok I have rewored the story a bit more and think that this is bt better of story.

 

[GABA]

This is a completely different story, its not really reworded at all, if you had followed my suggestion you would have been good.

It would be unlikely for a new exile to take on a Jedi Master and to go from sect to sect would be unlikely too. If you want him to be knowledgable in all of them, then you may need to build on that through RP, but to have it straight off the bat within a few years will be unlikely.

Please make these changes.

 

[Raydo]

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