Klyyd Organa

[ThElonMusketeer]

Klyyd Organa
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FULL NAME: Klyyd Organa
AGE: 25 (6923 BBY)
SPECIES: Human
GENDER: Male
HOMEWORLD: Alderaan
HEIGHT: 6'1
WEIGHT: 225 lbs
HAIR COLOR: Black
EYE COLOR: Brown
FORCE: Yes, trained

LEVEL: One
FACTION: The Jedi Order

SECT: Guardians
RANK: Knight​

Biography
Klyyd was born on the peaceful planet of Alderaan to two idealistic politicians with their minds set on extending peace to the entire galaxy. Raised a pacifist until his father was assassinated by a rogue group of radical anarchists, after which his connection to the force was discovered and he was taken to be trained by the Jedi. Because of this he threw himself into studying the force, hoping to find a means to bring his father back. After trying to sneak into a restricted section of the Jedi Library, he was caught and was about to be reprimanded when an older Jedi intervened. This Jedi, a Knight named Var-Tan Rott, seeing that the boy was merely in mourning and was lost in need of guidance, decided to train him personally. At the beginning of his training Klyyd was shy, withdrawn, and reluctant to wield a weapon. Despite this, he forged a deep spiritual connection with the force, which helps guide his actions. Through the mental and physical training his mentor put him through, he flourished him into a strong and wise Jedi Knight. But his mentor failed to see the darkness growing inside Klyyd, since that fateful day of his father's death. Though when darkness falls, all one needs do is turn on the light.

Personality
Klyyd Organa, for lack of a better term, is complicated. As a child, he felt immense guilt and loss: blaming himself for the death of his father. At the beginning of his training, he was lost and sought guidance where ever he could. This thirst for knowledge, once put to better use, helped Klyyd mature. As he grew so did his connection with the Force. This powerful connection helped turn him into a strong and courageous Jedi, fully devoted to Jedi doctrine. Despite this, Klyyd experiences a lot of guilt and soul-searching over his actions when he allows his anger and contempt to overcome him, and he frequently wonders whether he is doing the right thing. These seeds of doubt and a growing darkness might just be the end of him, or a beginning.

Abilities & Skills
Force Abilities -

Telekinesis: Intermediate
Force Sense: Intermediate
Acrobatics: Intermediate
Mind Trick: Beginner​

Lightsaber Combat -

Form I: Expert
Form V: Intermediate
Form VII: Beginner​

Gear
Jedi Robes
Lightsaber (Blue Kyber Crystal)

Soundtrack
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1. Main Theme/Klyyd's Conflict

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[Raydo]

Hello there!

I just have a couple of things. First off, Your biography meets the 50 work requirement, but I would recommend going back and adding a bit more detail when you get a chance. More importantly, Your listed skill levels are incredibly high for a relatively fresh and young Jedi Knight. While these don't really have much effect on the story, I think it gives you and others an unrealistic picture of the Skill level your character would have at this stage in his life. This is pretty minor, but please tone done your skill levels and build them up as your roleplay and develop your character. Lastly, holocrons are extremely rare artefacts and a Jedi Knight would not have access to one or the knowledge to create one (I assume that what you meant when you said personal) so you would need to remove that.

It's a good start, and I am really only concerned on the last two points I brought up. Fix those things and tag me and I will come check it out/approve your character! Thanks!

 

[ThElonMusketeer]

Done the 2 main things, I will try to flesh out his backstory later. Also, kept Form I at Expert, given this is the first form younglings are taught, and probably would have mastered it by the time they reached knighthood. Is this alright, or should I drop it down a peg?

 

[Raydo]

Done the 2 main things, I will try to flesh out his backstory later. Also, kept Form I at Expert, given this is the first form younglings are taught, and probably would have mastered it by the time they reached knighthood. Is this alright, or should I drop it down a peg?

That will work! Thanks!

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[ThElonMusketeer]

UPDATE: He has a beard now. I don't have a computer at the moment, so I can't update the picture in the profile, but I did update his avatar photo.