Knight Khen'aum

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Knight Khen’aum


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Real Name: Knight Khen’aum

Race: Human

Faction: Sacred Band of Ziost

Class: Brother

Composition and appearance:

Khen'aum stands at the height of about six feet. He could easily be mistaken for a cyborg of some kind at first sight or even a full droid at first, but when you see him walk you can see well it is just his armor. He wears full body armor, and doesn’t reveal a single inch of his human flesh. He feels that since he lacks the force’s full protection like the Sith, he must be harder externally. His armor was a darker gray, and a large amount of it was scratched until it showed the black metal beneath the paint. A strap wraps around his shoulder, and a fur cloak will be covering most of his torso, adding one more layer of leather armor. His gear was very little on the outside, with two lightsabers strapped on his belt, one on each hip. And two pistols on the back of his belt, facing opposite directions in their holsters. His chest strap held the ammo for his two revolver pistols. Each with a caliber of 55, with barrels almost the whole length of his forearm.

His posture is strict and straight, his hands are always at his sides ready to grip his blades. When he walks he sends a small tremble through the floor, this mostly being from the heavy boots he wore along with the extra weight from his armor. He spoke audibly through a speaker in the front sides of his mask, and his voice sounded like one coming from a radio. Inside his helmet, a built in transmitter for shorter range calls out, and for on missions. He is built for battle, and quite obviously his is a brother of the Sacred band of Ziost warriors.

Personality:

Khen'aum can be composed when he needs to be, but is a furious warrior on the battlefield. He lives and breathes for his brothers, and has very little patience for incompetence and threats. He lives for his missions, and he does everything in his power to make sure they go smoothly. When they don’t his greatest fear is of the punishment he will receive, rather than death. . . If he fails a mission. Khen'aum was taken and trained as a young boy, and has been a loyal servant of the Dark Side ever since. Swearing to be physically more powerful than any Sith, and he wishes to compare himself one day with the greatest warriors in the Sacred Band. He is most loyal to his brothers, and to his position as a warrior, and if anything threatens it he will put his life on the line in a moments notice for the greatness of the cause.

He is stable, and is not easy to persuade. His path in life is set, and he will make decisions purely based off of what his higher-ups command. And when he has nobody to command him, he will do what he feels is best for the Sacred Band. He is a fearless fighter, and he stands in the way of any danger that must be faced. He has no thought of doubt when it comes to the Ziost Warriors, and instead he risks it all for them. He shares many of the same ideals as many of the other warriors among him. And if there is any one thing he hates in the universe, it is the Jedi. Although not to keen with the Sith, he feels as if they are just necessary for success, and has little problems with them. If it weren't for their sense of pride and their imaginary knowledge, he wouldn’t have any issues. But he feels they take too much pride in their force abilities, and that true power lies with a lightsabre and true skill.

Internally, his only true thoughts are of success, and glory. He wishes to bring honor to his brothers, and cares little about position or rank. He wants his last breath to be taken by a Jedi, in a glorious battle. One that any person might be happy to die in. Glory, and death are his two drivers, the two ideals that lead him on his dark path. He fights only to kill for his masters, and he wishes to one day eliminate the Jedi, as well as the rest of the scum in the Galaxy.

It is hard to gain his trust, as he has full trust for his Ziost brothers, and none for anybody else. Like an animal, his leash is held by his masters, and his one purpose is to fight for the Sacred Band. He wants to show his brothers he is worthy to be among them, and will continue to strive towards this goal until his very last breaths. When it comes to fighting, he is fearless, ambitious, bloodthirst, and wicked. He will kill an enemy the easiest way possible, and occasionally will destroy in brutal ways. Severing heads, cutting off limbs, all just to prove his superiority over his opponent. When he gives a warcry, his helmet will make loud frequencies like that of a broken droid, but it sounds like a screech or a creature, unhuman. He refuses to give up until he is unconscious, or dead. And only when he is dead will he give up his beliefs and hope for the Sacred Band. He is ferocious, and is willing to protect almost any of his brothers, throwing his own life away for them if need be. He does not take it kindly when one of his brothers die, and instead he acts out in bursts of rage and anger like any warrior might do on the battlefield under these conditions. But he pushes on, and everytime he witnesses death it only fuels him more and more to destroy what peace is left in the Galaxy.


Biography


Knight was taken as a young boy, in order to serve the Sacred Band of Ziost. He was always treated fairly as all the other kids his age, and he grew to love his home and his brothers that he was training with. He was born right on the planet just so he could be a warrior, his mother was killed shortly after. He was trained from the moment he could walk. His lightsabers were in his hands from the moment he could swing them without destroying or melting everything around him. He was born for his duty, and he has lived for his brothers ever since.


As he matured into adulthood, he was only more harshly trained, and he was on par with all the other students. He always had two sabres rather than one, always having been in love with them and the damage they can do. He felt two is better than one, and he even made it so they could attach together. Even at the young age of thirteen, he was already fighting in bloody battles and wars with the other children as soldiers, merely front line ragdolls. He has attacked and been deployed against enabled warriors by the time he became an adult, and made his own suit of armor when he finally matured into a true Ziost warrior. He always pictured himself inside that suit of armor, and he eventually made that dream come true when he was an adult, and he lived to serve it and it’s purpose for the rest of his life. Nothing more did he love than his cause, and in every battle his love for it was fueled more. Most of his time was spent though on his home planet, with the rest of the Ziost warriors, training hard. All he ever did was train, and train. All he ever wanted was to master his sabre, and smash any odds put against him. To be the perfect warrior was his dream, and one day it had to come true. His life is simple, and his future is set in stone.

Knight has lost many friends in battle, and has gained many more. And each battle he enters the greater he feels, and the more powerful and strong. Even if it is just a battle he is taking place in to earn some credits to take home. With each life he takes, his pride grows and his strength with it. Always he has been this way, and since he was a child he was respectable and respected. He was the perfect student throughout his life, and never faltered on his path Always being loyal and kind to his peers. No matter what hazing treatment he dealt with. But up until his adult years he was called a dog with no free will, and to change that he brawled with a couple of his Ziost members, to assert his dominance and prove he was no dog. But infact he was, and he only really wants to be the best of the best and outclass the rest.

Lightsabers:
His lightsabers are uncommon among the rest of the Sacred Band, but to him they are dear. Throughout his life he felt that he could always be stronger and more capable with such a weapon than any Jedi, and after learning that they crafted their own, he decided to do the same thing. Relying on his armor mostly for defense, he decided to craft two matching green lightsabers. The process took many months, finding the kyber crystals, but the hilt was made from scratch, and it was made using old junk and metal parts. The kyber crystals were cracked and unstable, but he felt it was a non-issue, having used only the two revolvers he had up until he built the lightsabers in his earlier days of training. Of course, when he first started using the blades much destruction was dealt to his home and training area, but Knight Khen'aum was determined to become the best lightsaber duelist there was, so that he could prove his might to the Jedi, and his brothers. With this determination he seeked training, and then received it after some time of lonesome practice. His training mostly consisted of fighting alone or with training droids that he constructed on his free time.

Knight has been told by his comrades that lightsabers are unsafe for someone like him, a non-force user, but it only makes him more determined to use them. So he decided to begin throwing himself into as many battles as he could find, in the name of not only his training but the Sacred Band. He wanted to serve the band more than anything, but training with his blades was something he couldn't get enough of during his first battles, although he did resort to his revolvers for most of his time on the battlefield, only taking any chance he could find to use the blades. However this was not enough for him, so he seeked better training, knowing his skills did not even compare to higher ranking padawan. Discipline was something that Knight has much of, and he knew that the best force users among the two sith counterparts are the Sith Brotherhood themselves. He needed to find a Sith to train him in their use, and he did so without mention to his comrades.

During any free time he had, he decided to seek out a sith sorcerer by the name of Castor, only a lower ranking sorcerer but it is told that Castor was a Jedi before he joined, and was trained with the lightsabers, even reaching the rank of a Jedi Knight before he rebelled. Castor was reluctant to train a Sacred Band member, and it was never heard of before but he agreed to do so anyway, under the condition that Knight performed small offensive engagements for Castor's personal gain. So during battles he would seek out certain Jedi, younger ones that he had a chance to defeat and take them out any chance he had with his revolvers, returning the lightsabers to Castor in return for brutal lightsaber training. The two did not see each other as student and master, but merely a trade. Castor barely could tolerate the Sacred Band, and Knight could barely tolerate the Sith, but revenge was in it for Castor, and Knight got exactly what he wanted. And so he was trained, after every battle for the years to come. (Has yet to kill a Jedi, is untrained with Sabers.)
 
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Okay, so being armed with lightsabers isn't a very typical thing for SBZ members. I'm completely okay with it being a thing, and I think the concept is an interesting one, but just be aware that it's not a common thing. Also be aware that if he's not Force Sensitive then he won't be able to deflect blaster bolts.

I'd suggest editing the profile to include why and how he got the lightsabers and who trained him in their use, since it would require someone that already knows how to use them to do it, which none of the SBZ are capable of doing, I believe. That or you could also go the route of him not really knowing how to use them, which opens up the avenue of your character seeking out training. Either option is a completely acceptable one.

Get back to me when you've made those minor edits and I'll see about approving the character ^_^.

Also, I'm really sorry this took so long.

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Okay, so being armed with lightsabers isn't a very typical thing for SBZ members. I'm completely okay with it being a thing, and I think the concept is an interesting one, but just be aware that it's not a common thing. Also be aware that if he's not Force Sensitive then he won't be able to deflect blaster bolts.

I'd suggest editing the profile to include why and how he got the lightsabers and who trained him in their use, since it would require someone that already knows how to use them to do it, which none of the SBZ are capable of doing, I believe. That or you could also go the route of him not really knowing how to use them, which opens up the avenue of your character seeking out training. Either option is a completely acceptable one.

Get back to me when you've made those minor edits and I'll see about approving the character ^_^.

Also, I'm really sorry this took so long.

@Seiya

Edits made, hope you like them! Let me know if I need to make any more changes.

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@Seiya It is better, but there are a couple things I think still need changing. Firstly, this seems unrealistic and should probably not be in there.
Even at the young age of thirteen, he was already fighting in bloody battles and heroic wars. He has killed hundreds by the time he became an adult
And secondly, confrontations with the Jedi weren't a thing until the timeline began, so him already having experience fighting Jedi on battlefields isn't something that is a possibility, since the confrontations between PCs in Conflict Threads are the first confrontations there have been in a century or more. Up until the first confrontations between Sith and Jedi in the new timeline, the Sith were just a rumour that no one could actually confirm.

Apart from those two things, however, it looks good.
 

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@Seiya It is better, but there are a couple things I think still need changing. Firstly, this seems unrealistic and should probably not be in there.

And secondly, confrontations with the Jedi weren't a thing until the timeline began, so him already having experience fighting Jedi on battlefields isn't something that is a possibility, since the confrontations between PCs in Conflict Threads are the first confrontations there have been in a century or more. Up until the first confrontations between Sith and Jedi in the new timeline, the Sith were just a rumour that no one could actually confirm.

Apart from those two things, however, it looks good.

So the quoted part didn't mean he killed hundreds of Jedi, just people in battle. And not necessarily just Ziost wars/battles. But aside from that I mentioned that he pretty much spotted out padawan on the battlefield and hunted them, this is still the case, and in this stage of his life he is horrible with his lightsabers, meaning he has not been trained yet since he has yet to take out any Jedi, I added a small edit to the bio to show that, sorry for confusion.

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My issue with the quoted part has more to do with the whole "killed hundreds by the time he became an adult" part. It's just... unrealistic.
 

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@Seiya

Apologies for the wait. First of all I commend you on the effort you've put into the personality section. I just have a few quips with the biography before I approve him. Fighting in wars and killing indiscriminately by the age of thirteen is highly unrealistic, he could have been a child soldier sent on a few assignments, but nothing more than that.

The biography as a whole is very cluttered with unnecessary fluff revolving around his lightsabers and his battle tactics, etc, which makes it difficult to read the actual story. Include things like weapons and combat styles in their own sections, as they don't add anything to the story and just add clutter.
 
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@Marf Right so I just removed both those large paragraphs regarding the lightsabre. And I shall remove the part regarding how many people he killed so that it seems as if he was just a child soldier.
 
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*Ahem*
The SBZ has SISTERS too, y'know. Is Knight sexist? Bonnie will show him a thing or two.

:P

Other than that, though, he and Bonnie would get along well together. She'd try to get him to loosen up a bit ;)
 
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