Kriek

[Brian]

Race: Abrek

Faction: Independent

Age: 22

Height: 6'9'

Weight: 310

Complexion: Dark Skinned

Eye Color: Grey

Home World: Toydaria

Force Sensitive: No

Attributes:
Strength
8/10
Dexterity
8/10 Ambidextrous
Stamina
9/10
Constitution: 9/10
Intelligence
7/10
Wisdom
5/10
Charisma
7/10

Skills:
Vibro-Blade form V 7/10
pistol&rifle Blaster 8/10.
Acrobatics 9/10
Reprogramming droids 9/10
computer programmer 7/10
Star fighter 7/10
Pilot light freighter 8.5/10

Languages:

1. Understand-Rekal,Galactic,Beasalisk,Jawaese,Hutese,Wookie
2. Speak Without Translator-Rekal, Wookie

Biography:
Kriek lived on the streets with is sister.He was poor and didn't know how to speak other languages besides his own.So his only option was stealing.However Kriek did not like stealing but he had to feed his sister and himself.At the age of six Kriek started to understand Galactic due to the translator he stole.That wasn't all the translator taught him though.Thanks to the translator he now understood Beasalisk, Jawaese, Huttese, and Wookie and even learned how to speak Wookie. One day the translator stopped working. He didn't know how to fix it so he went to someone who knew how.There was a problem though. He didn't have enough credits to get it fixed but the woman was nice and gave him an offer."If you work for me for three weeks I will fix it for free", said the woman. The three weeks went by fast and ended up turning into two years. When his boss found out that he had a sister and that they were living on the street she adopted them into her home. His new mom taught him a lot of things.From building blasters,blades,and droids from scratch to flying freighters and negotiating trade items. He even built himself a translator wristband.When Kriek turned twelve his mother gave him a house and her store on Thakwaa. He loved it on Thkwaa. It was quit, people there were nice and he made a lot of credits. It was the happiest he had ever been but it didn't last. His mother had not checked up on him for eight months. Concerned Kriek went to check on his mother and discovered that she and his sister had been killed in a pirate attack. Enraged Kriek joined the anti-piracy group known as the Kjlljk Protectorate. After joining the Protectorate he was trained for two years to become an agent.

Personality:
Kriek is quiet,and friendly towards his friends. However people who do not know him might think that he is cold. He hates criminals especially the Sith and Pirates to him there is no difference and will kill them without thinking twice about it. He is easy to get along with and will do whatever it takes to get the job done even death.
Gear:
Melee:
Eletroblade- Modified to fit Krieks height
Pistols:
CMBP-12- Modified Quick Draw
CMBP-12-Modified Quick Draw
RXA-310 Thunderbuster Pistol modified to fire sonic
RXA-310 Thunderbuster Pistol modified to fire sonic
Rifle:
Harlaw Heavy Carbine
Ammunition:
(6) Clips of CMBP
(6) Clips of Thunderbuster
(4) Clips of Harlaw
Grenades:
Fire Spray (5)
EMP Grenade (5)
Armor
Faraday Heavy Armor

Ships:
Star Hawk- Modified two laser cannons, One double barrel ion cannon

Droids: N/A

Role-Plays: N/A

Rank: N/A

 

[Mad Dog]

Hey man,
So I don't really see anything wrong here, but your biography does kinda have an abrupt end. Maybe add a bit at the end about how he's affected by his families death, or how he's avenging them by killing pirates or something.

Then also your armor has a 4th function, and you should note what your choice is for that here.

Other than that. I don't see any major problems.