Kryte Shyft

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NAME: Kryte Shyft
FACTION: Independent
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Zeltron
AGE: 19
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 175cm
WEIGHT: 67.5kg
EYES: Green
HAIR: Red
SKIN: Red-Tinged but very closed to the tone of a tan human.
CREDITS: 800
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
DOMINATE HAND: Right-Handed
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 4/10
DEXTERITY: 7/10
CONSTITUTION: 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 7/10
CHARISMA: 10/10

FORCE POWERS:
None

SKILLS:
Quick Learner
Acute Force Sensitivity
Unarmed Brawling
Empathetic Telepathy
Mind Control (Racial Trait + Force Sensitivity, ie. VERY weak)

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Kryte has not had any extensive training in any areas; he’s relatively green when it comes to things such as combat, stealth, or even slicing. However, due to his tendency towards meditation and introspection, he is clever and learns exceptionally quickly. In addition, he has a much more acute awareness of the force than a normal non-trained 17 year old force sensitive would have. (Again due to the time he spends meditating.) He’s also decent in a barfight, due to roaming around through cantinas and the like since he left home. Also, due to his racial empathy, he is especially prone to psychic attacks, and due to his frailty, if he gets hit, it hurts..
Due to the racial traits of a Zeltron (the ability to produce pheromones, telepathic empathy, and mild mind control) he has unnaturally high charisma, especially when all of that is combined with his force sensitivity.

GEAR:
Datapad
Comlink
Pair of blinders/Interface Goggles
Pair of aural enhancer/blocker implants
Basic First Aid kit
Sewing kit and strips of cloth
Rebreather
Multitool
Laser utility knife
Slugthrower Pistol

SHIP:
None

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Kryte is fairly spontaneous and light-hearted, and very introspective. He is not, however an introvert, he merely spends a good deal of time looking inward for self-improvement. He believes in the pursuit of happiness, a trait common to his race, but was ostracized because he didn't pursue it through the same hedonism as his peers. Almost an epicurean, he believes in simple pleasures far more than the copious amounts of sex and gluttony condoned by most of his species. He is very sincere and generally kind, but still holds no respect for unreasonable authority. Relatively inexperienced, he is quite naive, but likeably so.

HISTORY:
Kryte was born on Zeltros, and lived there until he was 17. When he hit his teen years, he started acting differently than the other kids, when they were pursuing hedonistic ventures, he was living a modest life, seeking pleasure more often in activities such as reading or philosophy, than in the sex, drugs, and binge eating that his peers were partaking in. Due to the natural Zeltron empathetic telepathy, his family and friends started to realise that he was just as happy as they were, even while he spent more time meditating than he did partying. This of course lead him to become ostracized from the community, forcing him to play the role of stranger and outcast. So when he turned 17, he left the planet to travel the space lanes, looking for nothing more than some adventure, and hoping one day to get to see the library in Coruscant.
Since he left Zeltros, he’s been wandering around space, stopping at cantinas and casinos to tend bar. Due to his natural telepathy, enhanced by his force awareness, he can always tell when a patron’s going to get violent, or when someone needs their next drink, letting him earn better than average tips, and giving him an upper hand when brawls do break out.

KILLS:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE-PLAYS:
It's Getting Darker and Darker...
 
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Please, any criticism is very welcome!
I'm new at this, ha -_-.
 

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Is that Mind Control power literally a mind control force power thing, or is it more of an influential type of power (since he is a Zeltron)? Your telepathy has the potential to be used in godmodding, so I'm iffy about that, too.
 

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Always be wary of tele-anything that isn't to do with the force... It's shaky territory at best.
 

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I'd let that shit happen. If he's not here to kill you allt hen it can make for a VERY good story.
 

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Thanks all!

It's basically just the Zeltron natural traits, but a bit stronger because he is a force sensitive.

But nothing godmoddy, or very strong at all really.
 

Will

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Thanks all!

It's basically just the Zeltron natural traits, but a bit stronger because he is a force sensitive.

But nothing godmoddy, or very strong at all really.

good profile. Nice username too, by the way. Like Howard Moon...
 
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