Kryzun-Cah Primiscun

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Kryzun-Cah Primiscun
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Acolyte of the Bogan.

NAME:
Kryzun-Cah Primiscun.
SPECIES:
Zabrak.
AGE:
19.
HEIGHT:
6'2".
WEIGHT:
245 pounds.
FACTION:
Bogan.
RANK:
Acolyte.
HOME PLANET:
Dathomir.
CURRENT LOCATION:
Conscio.
LIGHTSABER FORM:
Studying the Form IV: Ataru.
TECHNIQUES:
Basic practitioner of Morichro.
Practitioner of Sokan.
Studying the art of Jar'Kai.​
Biography Logs

I never chose to become a monster, I was just a normal Zabrak youngling living on the outskirts of the planet Dathomir. The Bogan were sent to my village to pick a few potential Force-Sensitive Zabrak. I never knew I was force sensitive, but they began testing on me, and I was picked to be sent to their temple. I began training as a youngling, up until the age I am now. I am not your average Bogan, they are filled with hate, yet I am filled with a hunger for hate. These Bogans did this to me, they turned me into the animalistic being that I am forced to be now, however, I cannot change back.

I wear grey robes customized with black patterns running down the flowing robe, underneath is medium armour covering the exposed parts of my body. I don't specialize in the Force or the lightsaber skills, I am a balance of each. My face has been tattooed with traditional Zabrak black tattoos, mainly lines running along my face. The spikes on my head, are the same size as a typical Zabrak, and they curve at the top, almost acting as like a crown, because I intend to be king one day, I assure you, I will.

I was asked to perform a mission to Dathomir, on my eighteenth birthday. It was a test to see if I had controlled the hate to fulfill other's wishes. I passed, flying colours. I had to eliminate the other tribes, for unknown reasons. I killed people I grew up with, something I couldn't get over until 3 months later, when I fully controlled the darkness within me. I have now succumbed to the darkness, I am no longer pathetic, I am now a monster.​

Personal Logs

On Dathomir, I was innocent, I was kind. I was never what I have become now, and my parents would never have thought that this is what I would have become either. Nothing can suffice the thoughts that rush through my mind every time I seem to think of Dathomir, but one can only fathom as to what I can see myself as in the future. I am no longer filled with good thoughts, I am now filled with hatred, and rage is the only thing that feeds the physical being as to which I am currently assigned in. On Dathomir, I would never kill anyone I ever loved, but now? I do it as a task, for fun. Although there is no sense in trying to turn me back to the light, I have always wondered what would happen if I did? Would there be a different future to me other than destruction? Who knows, I have made my choice, I serve the purpose of the Bogans, nothing more, nothing less..​

Lightsaber Form

I've done a little research into the fourth form known as Ataru, and learnt a little by myself, but due to my level and rank, I have not gained any experience within this form so far, but I am sure this will be the one I am learning. I am also a practitioner of the technique known as Jar'Kai. This is the art of two lightsabers, but as I've said before, it's only research, only a master can teach me these things, so I better sign up for this little Bogan training stuff, huh?​

Force Powers

Uncontrollable user of Force rage.​

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Alright. This guy is a bit too experienced for my tastes. You would not have a dual lightsabers. You would obtain these during training as well as any type of force power. Explaining the lightsaber form was a nice touch but you will have to refer to my last statement.

Need to bring it down so you are an acolyte. Not an experienced crusader-like character.
 
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