Kyle Mextro

[Darth Vader]

NAME: Kyle Mextro
FACTION: The Jedi Order; Jedi Temple on Coruscant
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5''4
WEIGHT: 123lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 500
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N/A
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Moderate
DEXTERITY: Agile
CONSTITUTION: Moderate
INTELLIGENCE: Moderate
WISDOM: Wise-ish (Half-way Between Moderate and Wise)
CHARISMA: influential (He'd be a great neogiator)

FORCE POWERS:
Push
Pull
Grip
Double Jump
Focus
SKILLS:
The Force (Obviously)
Melee Weapons
Neogotian
Focusing
Dedication

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-Cho
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths:
Moderatly clever
Patient
Calm
Good with lightsabers/Melee weapons
Wise-ish
Charismatic
Loyal
Weaknesses:
Easily takes offence
Fairly new at being a Jedi
Unaware of how big the threat of The Dark Jedi is
Too trusting
Loyal (Can become loyal to a traitor, like Anakin Skywalker in Episode III)


GEAR:
Dual Singlebladed standard lightsabers (One in left hand: Blue Crystal, One in right: Green crystal), Small Credit Pouch, Starfighter key, Temple room key, Coruscant Speeder key, Thermal detonators

SHIP:
Starfighter:
Weapons: A-4 Ion Cannon, Escort quad laser cannon
Engines: QID (Quantum Ion Drive)
Other: GPS, Hyperspace, Lightspeed
PETS: N/A
PERSONALITY:
He is friendly towards those who uphold the law, or believe themselves allies of The Jedi Order, or The Galactic Republic, he also respects Jedi Knights and all Jedi, that aren't padawans. He will be loyal to his master and respect, his or her orders. He is good at keeping secrets for friends and to protect people. He will fight for what he believes is right. He respects all manner of life, except those who stray into the dark side. He talks of the force alot.

He is supportive. He will fight for anyone who doesn't follow the Dark Jedi Code, or work for the Dark Jedi. He prefers to sort problems out, without violence, but it can happen. He enjoys music. He is affraid of his past. He never talks about anything in the past.
BIOGRAPHY:
Kyle Mextro was born in Coruscant, his father was a Jedi, his name was Johnathon Mextro, he supported many young Jedi to get to their place, he was a rolemodel for many padawans, but that all changed later on in life. His mother, Kelly Orphole was an architect, she designed a few clubs, a few shops and the odd house, she was close John. Kyle had an older brother, Luke, who was not force-sensitive, he always wanted to enlist into the Republic Military, his sister, Sophie wanted to be a Jedi, as she was force sensitive.

But everything changed for them, when a group of Dark Jedi raided their house, a week before Kyle's parents wedding, the Dark Jedi killed his father, they choked him to death with the force, then they went for his mother, they killed her by slicing her open with their lightsabers. They then ran after Kyle's brother, Luke killed on of them with his blaster, they used lightning with the force to kill him, right before Kyle's eyes, Kyle was 5 at the time, they tried to kill Kyle, but the Jedi Order arrived, they defended Kyle, but they threatend Sophie they pulled a lightsaber to her throat and when the Jedi approched, they slit it, Kyle saw and screamed, he ran off, The Jedi defeated The Dark Jedi, then found Kyle and raised him as a Jedi.


KILLS:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE-PLAYS:
None

 

[Dmitri]

You may want to get permission before claiming Kyle's father was a Jedi Councilor.

 

[Project]

The first thing that fell into my eyes when I read the profile was the mentioning of the Sith, which do not exist in this timeline as of yet. You should edit that, aswell as the portion of his father being a 'role-model for the Padawans'. Another thing that will have to be changed about his father, is the fact that he was supposedly on the Jedi-Council, a position reserved only for the most trusted of Jedi (and characters that are actually played by people). Also, as a sidenote, people do not become Padawans and then look for a master. Either a Jedi-Master takes them on, or they do not train as Padawans at all and instead join other branches of the Jedi.

 

[Darth Vader]

Fixed, also can I claim that his father was a Councilor?

 

[Project]

Fixed, also can I claim that his father was a Councilor?

Personally, I can only give you a vague answer, even though I am on the Jedi Council myself, since it is up to Kali (Our current Faction leader) to give a final verdict. Although, honestly, I really don't see what that would change about your character, unless he's the bragging kind. Concerning your characters state of 'needing a master', I suggest you just leave that out of his history completely.

EDIT:
Also, you didn't remove all traces of the Sith from your character profile.

 

[Darth Vader]

Done, also, he never talks of his past, meaning he'd never say about his father.

 

[Project]

Done, also, he never talks of his past, meaning he'd never say about his father.

Then it should not matter at all, really.

 

[Darth Vader]

So am I approved, or do I need to do more edits?

 

[Project]

You have to post in the Jedi Sign-Up Thread first.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=18328

 

[Darth Vader]

I've posted there, now I just need to wait
Edit: Approved on the Jedi Signup, by you, Project