Kyrick Jalapter

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NAME: Kyrick Jalapter
FACTION: Shade Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 foot 2 inches
WEIGHT: 180 pounds
EYES: Brown
HAIR: Black
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Two tattoos, one on each shoulder
DOMINANT HAND: Left
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 6/10
DEXTERITY: 8/10
CONSTITUTION: 8/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 8/10
CHARISMA: 10/10
FORCE POWERS:
Push
Pull
Jump
Speed
Influence
Meditation
Heal
Lightning
Throw Lightsaber
Precognition
Force Valor
Choke

SKILLS: Persuasion, if that fails, aggressive negotiations. He is an accomplished fencer, because that his truly what he is, he is no mere swordsman, like most Jedi. Instead of hacking at his opponent he uses grace and speed to maneuver around them.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: He has created his own form over the years, blending the determination of Shii-cho, the agression of Ataru, and the perseverence of Djem So, to create a form that saves his energy, while always keeping him on the offensive against his opponent.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strength: His ability to persuade people is incredible, He can persuade someone to do almost anything, and that is without the Force.
Weakness: He can be overly confident in himself, rushing into a situation that he really should think over first. However, he is very loyal to a cause to which he commits himself.

GEAR: Green lightsaber
Blue robes of his own invention

SHIP: None

PETS: None

PERSONALITY: Kyrick is a very confident person, he trust himself to the point that he thinks he is almost invincible. His skill in the Force lends to him the ability to add to his naturally suave and persuasive personality, to become almost irresistible. He is a born leader, able to take charge of anyone, and use his abilities in persuasion to make them unfailingly loyal. He is in love with combat however, and can not take a back seat to the fighting.

HISTORY: Kyrick was born on a small farming world, and when he was found to be Force sensitive he was taken by the Jedi to be trained. By five years old he was found to be incredibly adept at persuasion, he had persuaded another youngling to give him more food. At the age of eleven he crafted a yellow lightsaber and was taken on by a master and subtly trained to be a diplomat Jedi. However, at the age of eighteen, when he was told he was going to be put into the diplomatic Jedi division he was appalled. He didn’t want to do that, that wouldn’t let him be in the action. He knew that if he took that position he would be stuck dealing with stuffy senators and he didn't want that. He wanted the freedom of a Jedi that went on missions, that could travel the galaxy and have adventrues. He had heard rumors of another option, the Grey Jedi. He quit the Jedi, and gave them his old yellow lightsaber. After leaving he spent a year finding the parts necessary to build a new lightsaber, this one was green. He also designed a custom set of blue Jedi robes. They were similar enough to remind him of his duty to the people, but different enough to let him stand out as different. After this he served a brief stint as a member of a mercanery squad, he was very carefull however to never do anything contradicatry to his morals. When he saw the leader of the squad kill and innocent person however, he left the squad. Now though, at the age of twenty, he will find the Grey Jedi, and join them.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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Firstly, Dex will most likely kill you.

Secondly, i'm thinking that avatar is alightly too graphic for our boards. You might get told to remove it, idk.
 

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I think that pic is already being used by someone.
 

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Firstly, Dex will most likely kill you.

Secondly, i'm thinking that avatar is alightly too graphic for our boards. You might get told to remove it, idk.

Why?

and I got it put in by an admin anyways. I couldn't actually put it in myself, so I put it in Avatar request, and it came up.
 

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Maybe they didn't catch the blood spurting out of that dude's neck.

And Dex had that image set aside ages ago in the new timeline characters thread.
 

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Maybe they didn't catch the blood spurting out of that dude's neck.

And Dex had that image set aside ages ago in the new timeline characters thread.

Shush, what they don't know can't hurt me.
 
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The profile seems a bit short to request a position as master.
 

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The profile seems a bit short to request a position as master.

It's not short, your's are just too long. Also, there are sixteen year old Knights in your order, I think a twenty year old diserves to be a Master. The leader is only twenty three.

*looks at you imploringly*
 

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He can persuade people, has 7 force powers, has no lightsaber forms, and is overconfident at times. Just does not seem master material to me yet.
 

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He can persuade people, has 7 force powers, has no lightsaber forms, and is overconfident at times. Just does not seem master material to me yet.

As for lightsaber forms, those confuse me, I don't know what to put in there. I will add Force powers, I am brainstorming that actually.
 

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The history and personality both lack depth.
 

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The history and personality both lack depth.

Now is when I wished I had the role eyes smiley. DEPTH? Depth to the character should be established when you start roleplaying them, to give them depth you have to establish their secrets, and I don't want to release those yet.
 

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You do not need to give away any secrets just let us know who your character is.
 

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It's not short, your's are just too long. Also, there are sixteen year old Knights in your order, I think a twenty year old diserves to be a Master. The leader is only twenty three.

*looks at you imploringly*

The history should be a couple of paragraphs.

The leader is only a Knight. Not only is unlikely that a new member would step in as a master, I can't promote people to master until the staff say I'm one. That won't happen for at least a month or two into the new timeline.

And if you weren't a Knight in the old timeline you'd start off a padawan and learn the beliefs of the Order. You'd have a shorter training thread than a newbie, but you still need to have one.

And he doesn't know 3 forms, he uses a fighting style of a few parts of each of them, which plenty of Knights and Masters did, but the staff may say until you are a master you can only blend two.
 

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As a question, why does he hate being a diplomat so much? As your profile describes, it's obvious he has talent for it and there is no indication he doesn't like it whatsoever compared to fighting

Edit: As 'being in the action' seems a very poor reason (To me) with no real ties; normally someone likes to do something they are naturally talented at or something...
 
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As a question, why does he hate being a diplomat so much? As your profile describes, it's obvious he has talent for it and there is no indication he doesn't like it whatsoever compared to fighting

Edit: As 'being in the action' seems a very poor reason (To me) with no real ties; normally someone likes to do something they are naturally talented at or something...

Updated, it now explains why he dosn't want to be a diplomat.
 
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