Lois & Olive King

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Lois woke up to darkness, scary but familiar. Her sister lay in bed next to her, still asleep. They were twins, she assumed they looked the same, though she had no for sure way of telling. She began to get out of bed, going to the bathroom to brush her hair. It had taken her a couple years to get good at brushing her hair so it looked good, but she had wanted to do her hair herself. She had already finished her hair when her sister woke as their alarm sounded. Yawning she entered the bathroom as well.

"Twelve years and you still always wake up before me." Olive sighed.

"It's a gift." Lois smiled.

They both washed their faces and brushed their teeth before the left the room, hand in hand, to go eat in the cafeteria. They had not been jedi long. They had only been discovered when Lois had gone in for a doctors appoint to get further work done on her eyes. They had done a blood testing for some reason and found the force active in her. Figuring the two were twins they tested olive and found her positive as well. They had been flown to the temple the next day to begin their training. Lois was still trying to learn how to navigate the temple, so she relied on Olive to show her the way.

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NAME: Lois & Olive King
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Padawans
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 12
GENDER: female
HEIGHT: 4'5"
WEIGHT: 70
EYES: Glassy Blue & Blue
HAIR: Black
SKIN: white
CREDITS: 0
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Lois is Blind
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yup

STRENGTH: Their 12 year old girls
DEXTERITY: Their gymnists
CONSTITUTION: uh, weak for lois, but high for olive. maybe reversed...
INTELLIGENCE: Lois is smart, but Olive is kinda dumb
WISDOM: idk, not good?
CHARISMA: Their very cute ^^

FORCE POWERS:
idk, I guess they can move rocks?
oh! and they have a telepathic link to each other!

SKILLS:
None?

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
none yet ^^

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Lois is blind, but always willing to charge into the frey. She can also strategize really good.

Olive on the other hand is very headstrong, leaping before she looks. But she's very kind and patient when it comes to her sister.

GEAR:
Lois is more partial to dresses, but olive likes pants and shirts. the loose kind you can run in.

SHIP:
Uh, their 12 I don't think they can fly one...

DROIDS:
Oh, are there any good ones they could have?

PETS:
Can Lois have a kitty? Are their cats in star wars?

PERSONALITY:
Lois and olive are both very friendly, but lois more so. Olive can be gruff because she has to protect her sister. Lois can't see, but is very curious. constantly running off to try new things. Olive has to constantly hold her back and keep her from doing anything that can get her killed.

Olive woke up to find her sister already in the bathroom. That girl couldn't stay still. She followed her into the bathroom and began washing her face. The two had been inseparable since they were young, especially since their parents had required Olive to watch over Lois. But Lois never seemed to sit still for long enough for Olive to protect her.

When she was told that her sister was going to become a jedi, she had gotten surprisingly jealous. But when they found out that they both were, they hadn't slept for days, just talking so excitedly about becoming jedi.
 
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Yes, there are cats in Star Wars.

I eventually would like to read more back story, like where they from, how did they get to where they are currently, bonds they share, etc.
 

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Just a quick tip: in your attributes (strength, dexterity, etc.) it would be better to use the word "they're" (they are) as opposed to "their" (he/she owns).
And, in answer to your question, Constitution refers to someone's hardiness, ability to endure pain, resistance to illness and disease, and so on.

I'm very interested in this symbiotic twin relationship; this is the first time I've ever seen a profile that actually involved two people working as a unit. Fascinating. Very ingenious idea.
 

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Yes, there are cats in Star Wars.

I eventually would like to read more back story, like where they from, how did they get to where they are currently, bonds they share, etc.

Yay! Kitties!

as for where their from, I don't know. Where could they be from? what's a good country?

Just a quick tip: in your attributes (strength, dexterity, etc.) it would be better to use the word "they're" (they are) as opposed to "their" (he/she owns).
And, in answer to your question, Constitution refers to someone's hardiness, ability to endure pain, resistance to illness and disease, and so on.

I'm very interested in this symbiotic twin relationship; this is the first time I've ever seen a profile that actually involved two people working as a unit. Fascinating. Very ingenious idea.

>< freaking grammer nazi's, but thanks for the constitution info.
 

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You might want to consider designating separate stats for the girls, rather than grouping vague descriptions since they have the possibility to grow at different rates. There is great possibility for confusion down the line when other rpers are looking here for descriptions. Just a suggestion. Interesting concept though.
 

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You might want to consider designating separate stats for the girls, rather than grouping vague descriptions since they have the possibility to grow at different rates. There is great possibility for confusion down the line when other rpers are looking here for descriptions. Just a suggestion. Interesting concept though.

Thanks for the heads up, I'll work on that when I get a chance ^^
 

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very good, I like them. A thing that you may want to do with Lois since shes blind is as the story goes find a way to learn Force sight. it may help. "read wookiepdea to learn more". Work on bio more too, like to learn more :)
 
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