Louden Riley

Louden

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COMPOSITION AND APPEARANCE: Louden has dark brown hair and a light, hardly tanned at all, complexion. His deep blue eyes sit under manicured eyebrows and above angular and defined cheek bones and chin. His brown hair is kept short and clean but little attention is given to styling it.

At a little over six foot tall he is hardly the tallest man, and his lithe muscular frame certainly doesn't lend him the most physically dominating presence. The fluidity of his movements, whether walking or illustrating with his hands as he speaks, however do give Louden a charisma of sorts. They are precise, definite and graceful not unlike the personality of the man.

PERSONALITY: Louden is a determined, proper and particular man. He is often aloof from those of inferior ranks not out of any sense of arrogance on his behalf but rather a belief in the need for order and discipline. Of course this rationale is not always readily apparent. An intelligent and able man, he has little patience for people who cannot keep up with him. All of these quirks make him a difficult man to get close to or to feel any sense of friendship towards.

However his intense belief in justice means that he will not tolerate any injustice or wrongs. While dispassionate his decisions are never unjust, cold certainly but lawful and fair as well, at least according to his morals. But his sense of justice does not often allow for much compassion. Louden believes in the letter of the law, that it must be obeyed and executed without sentiment. While he may have personal feelings on the justness of a law, as long as it remains law he will execute it with impunity.

He does not tolerate any failings within himself, Louden is an exacting taskmaster not only of those under his command but also of himself. Believing that any task once undertaken must not only been seen through to completion but also be accomplished with aplomb makes him a hard man to please. It also means he is sometimes unnecessarily harsh upon his own performance.

He is fiercely loyal and protective of the men under his command. Viewing each of them as being under his personal care, and that should a single one of them die needlessly it is a blemish against his soul. He understands that sacrifices are necessary in war and that death is inevitable but he cannot countenance heedless and pointless waste of life.


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: His strengths lies in his ability with pistols and rifles. He always upholds the values of freedom and democracy and helps the needy. He also has a knack to tactically think about situations and acts accordingly. His weaknesses lies in being rash at times when it comes to fighting the Sith or Empire and will make mishaps on those situations. He also tends to overthink certain situations, leading to a pointless defeat at times.


BIOGRAPHY: He was born on a distant planet. He was raised by his mother, who was a local trader amongst the settlement. And by his father, a trooper who previously served under the Galactic Alliance. He had a pretty standard childhood. He was raised under good values and taught to always have morals. His father taught him the basics of combat and how to handle a pistol or rifle. When he turned 16, his father died in duty to the Alliance, leaving the mother to take care of him. Louden was deeply distressed by his father's death. He had always wanted to spend more time with him when he could, but his father was mostly absent because of his service to the Alliance. Louden now wants to enlist in the Alliance, like his father before him.

(I hope I have done this right. I know there are mistakes, so I apologize for them.)
 

Horizon

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Not too bad for a new guy, you'll create more elaborate pieces the longer you stay with us. Taking a gander over the other profiles can often gives you some rather good points.
 

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Thanks. Feel free to point out my mistakes and I will fix them. Also, am I allowed to have more than one character?
 

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Thanks. Feel free to point out my mistakes and I will fix them. Also, am I allowed to have more than one character?

I always like to see fleshed out back stories, always looks good.

As for the characters, I believe the total is up to six now.
 

Louden

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Thank you. I will plan on making more than one character...
 
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