"Lucky" Logan Frost

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NAME: "lucky" Logan Frost

FACTION: Independant

RANK: smuggler/transporter

SPECIES: human

HOME WORLD: Coruscant Level 1500

AGE: 25

GENDER: male

HEIGHT: 5'7

WEIGHT: 145

EYES: brown

HAIR: black

SKIN: white

CREDITS: 1,000

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: his left arm has been replaced with a robot arm

FORCE SENSITIVE: no

STRENGTH: 7/10

DEXTERITY: 7/10

CONSTITUTION: 7/10

INTELLIGENCE: 7/10

WISDOM: 5/10

CHARISMA: 8/10

SKILLS: As a young boy he did odd jobs and it helped him learning some skills that has aided him in his transporting business such as
multiple languages, knowledge of multiple races(ways of business), strong arms, negotiator/business man

GEAR: Multiple forged permit documents(helps him conduct business and go unnoticed)
two blaster

Strengths: he is a strong and confident leader who knows the in and outs of organised crime and knows how best to stay undetected by authorities

Weaknesses:can never say no to a woman or a large pay ,never fully thinks things though, love to annoy the authorities

Ship:YT-2400 Light Freighter

Personality: The ship is a means of escaping the terrible life he lived on the lower levels of Coruscant, and Logan's attempts to get by in a Universe that has forsaken him. He took whatever jobs he could get, turning a blind eye if he could to the legality of the job, but never doing the wrong thing in terms of morality.

He was a man of compassion (refusing jobs that would involve him in slavery, for instance), with a strong sense of nobility. And would kill those who threatened him with a philosophy that, "If someone tries to kill you, you try and kill 'em right back." He is not above joking with his crew or picking bar fights, but he retained his honor in the face of adversity. What separated him from typical heroes was that Logan is the type of person who was willing to shoot first and skip the question; oftentimes not even bothering with a "fair fight." He is not above petty theft, smuggling, or even killing, but often rationalized such behavior to make it appear more noble or valiant, such as stealing from Slavers.

He is very protective of his crew and fiercely loyal. He retained the idea that you never left someone behind and, once you are a part of his crew, you are assured his protection. He treated an attack on a member of his crew as being tantamount to a direct assault on him and would not stand for it. He is also a natural leader, inspiring loyalty that is reciprocated as is shown in both his business experiences and in his relationship to his crew.

Biography: Logan never knew his parents they were killed on the orders of a crime lord known only as The Dealer (but Logan doesn't find out till later on in life). A man by the name Uncle took Logan in when he was three and from then he did anything he could do to keep the slime ball uncle happy by the time he was seven Uncle already had Logan doing petty crimes like pickpocketing ,drug/gun running, theft and many more crimes all around level 1500.

Uncle was from Tatooine and had opened up a bar called "The Drunken Rancor" as a front for his small time crime ring. when he turned eight Uncle got a new "recruit" to Uncles so called family came she was a small girl no older than five her name was Zara and it was also around this time they ran into a merchant Besalisk by the name Staric. Staric took a shine to both Zara and Logan and would come to the Drunken Rancor and tell them stories about a tale about a legendary ship called "WildStar" Staric's stories always brought the kids hope.

By the time he was 19 he had only ever seen the sky of Coruscant once and hard times had fallen on both Uncle and Staric as the local crimelord "The Dealer" Staric closed up his business when pressured by The Dealer and Uncle had to give 15% of his take to the Dealer. Shortly after the hostile takeover Logan found out that the Dealer wished to turn Zara in to a "working girl" for his more perverted clients so Logan hatched a do or die plan to get both Zara and Staric from this evil place.

Logan went to The Dealer and lent money and went to a casino he went in there with 5000Credit and managed to get in a game of Dueling dice with a man who was down on his luck and put his ship as his bet by some mystic power Logan won the ship. Logan took Zara and Staric to the ship and since has not returned to Coruscant however he never gave the money back to The Dealer.
since then the three of them have been in business together Staric rents one of the pods on ship to make on world business transactions and to get clients for the crew of the newly named ship "WildStar" they also rented the other pod to a merc who called himself Mac for a while and he told them about the best pilot in the Ver's by the name of Benny on Naboo.

By the time Logan was twenty two he was on a small mining station on a asteroid belt doing a job when a Wookie bounty hunter sent by The Dealer and this bounty hunter was relentless it took driving the station into a large volcanic asteroid just to kill the Wookie but not before Logan's arm was ripped off and since has had a robotic left arm.
 
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Pretty neat character, but it is my duty to inform you that clicking on your character gave my an OCD-induced heart attack :P
 

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any information you can give me to improve it would be very welcomed :)
 

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any information you can give me to improve it would be very welcomed :)

First off, try and split the biography and personality into several paragraphs. Walls of text are no fun to read for anyone. All that, in my opinion, needs to be done, is some spacing and tidying up. Example, put a space between Force Sensitivity and Strength, and with this:

Frostfall said:
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:his left arm has been replaced with a robot arm

Add an empty space between the ':' and 'his', one of the many things that make a profile easier to read. Doing similar with the rest of the profile, and if you could read over it and try and correct some of the grammar mistakes, that'd be great.
 

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thank you for your advice i have edited it. is it more visually pleasing to your OCD ;)
 

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EDITED: Staric is no longer a Rakatan due to them being extinct a shame but still now he is a Besalisk :)
 
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