Marten Skeerit

[Wayrider]

NAME: Marten Skeerit

FACTION: Old Empire
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 1.75 meters
WEIGHT: 85 Kilos
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

APPEARANCE: Marten Skeerit is a human with short blonde hair worn in a spiked Flat top. He has an athletic build and pale skin which adds to his feral looks. He has a wide jagged scar which runs down from in front of his left ear across his jaw and continues down his neck. He is usually dressed in black leather pants, and Jacket which he wears under his black leather hooded long coat.

ATTRIBUTES: Marten Skeerit has a high charisma to which any one can be drawn to. He usually only uses it when around those who are drifters and the dregs of society. He tends to push away anyone who has true ties to any community. He has a quick wit and uses it mostly to deliver insults both the good natured type and deliberately cruel with equal speed and deftness. The only thing faster than his hands is his volatile temper. His strength health and stamina are above average due only to the amount exercise he does daily when planet side.



PERSONALITY: Due to his volatile temper he tends to wear out his welcome relatively quickly. He doesn't mind he has no real friends anyway. His acquaintances that are the closest thing to friends he has and are either people in a position for him to use or just too powerful for him to challenge. He doesn't remember any real family, just other street trash like himself that he lived with, ate with, ran with or from as was necessary to survive. He figures death is only one mistake away so he will always attempt to strike first.



BIOGRAPHY: Marten Skeerit is the only name he can remember mostly because he had heard one of the guardians at the orphanage say it several times. By the time he understood what the guardian meant he had been using the name so long it stuck. He had run with the street trash for so long he didn't know any other way of life. Always hungry always wanting more, he knew how to scrounge and repair all kinds of junk. Being able to read a schematic is how he usually was able to eat. If he couldn't find something to fix and sell or steal he went hungry. He was found by his master the first time he moved something with just his mind. His training had been brutal and fast, constantly moving from place to place. Constant training with harsh punishment for failure forced him to always push hard especially whenever he can feel his masters presence nearby. So he tried hard all the time since he could only sense him when he was close.

He has no ties to anywhere only to his master and he had disappeared a couple weeks ago. If he didn't show up tomorrow he would need to take the VH-Freighter and move it into orbit, since he had no credits to pay additional docking fees. He didn't dare to sell any of the equipment on-board. Aside from his clothes a set of DG-500 dueling gloves and his blood red light saber he owned nothing. If he has to leave the ship at least there were a carbine and a pistol in the locker he would also take them. There were enough food and fuel on-board he could wait in orbit for an additional 21 days if he had too.


SKILLS:
Medical knowledge 5/10 human only
Technological expertise 5/10
Piloting 5/10

The Force - Marten Skeerit is proficient with

Physical augmentation 5/10 incorporating it into power strikes and long or high jumps when necessary.

Telekinesis 5/10 using Pushes and Pulls to off-balance his enemies in a fight.

Lightsaber Combat 6/10 Juyo Form VII

Marksmanship ZA-44 5/10 pistol
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/za-44-blaster-pistol.85115/

E-33 5/10 carbine
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/e-33-blaster-carbine.85104/

GEAR:
Armor DG-50 Dueling gloves
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/dg-500-dueling-gloves.84712/

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SHIP:
VH-Freighter
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/vh-series-freighter.85304/

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[Wit]

Having a character go by "Disavowed" seems like a very anime concept, in the real world he would hear the guards call him by more simpler names before he heard Disavowed. If he picks a name by what the guards call him then he's gonna hear names like ass or worse before picking up Disavowed. Also, no one who calls themselves Disavowed is gonna be charismatic. "Hey, I'm Disavowed." And there goes your charisma.

I'd strongly suggest dropping the Disavowed angle and giving him a name, that's just unnecessary edge that's only gonna make him a walking meme.

 

[Wayrider]

Having a character go by "Disavowed" seems like a very anime concept, in the real world he would hear the guards call him by more simpler names before he heard Disavowed. If he picks a name by what the guards call him then he's gonna hear names like ass or worse before picking up Disavowed. Also, no one who calls themselves Disavowed is gonna be charismatic. "Hey, I'm Disavowed." And there goes your charisma.

I'd strongly suggest dropping the Disavowed angle and giving him a name, that's just unnecessary edge that's only gonna make him a walking meme.

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[Logan]

You'll also need to remove the thermal det from his belongings, as they are advanced technology and require a plot to access.

 

[Wayrider]

You'll also need to remove the thermal det from his belongings, as they are advanced technology and require a plot to access.

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[Wit]

Did you just search and replace the word disawoved with the new name? "Marten Skeerit is the only name he can remember mostly because he had heard one of the guardians at the orphanage say it several times. By the time he understood what the guardian meant he had been using the name so long it stuck." Why would Marten Skeerit be something a guardian would say several times, and what did the guardian mean? You should re-read the bio and just clean it up a little.