Mialdir Cas

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NAME:
Mialdir Cas
FACTION: Sith Brotherhood
RANK: Sith
SPECIES: Unknown (believed Anzati and Morellian ancestry)
AGE: Unknown
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’10”
WEIGHT: 187 lbs
EYES: Brown
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Tan
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N/A
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

MENTAL & PHYSICAL:
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STRENGTH:
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DEXTERITY:
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CONSTITUTION:
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INTELLIGENCE:
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WISDOM:
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CHARISMA:
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SKILLS: Cas is good at building and repairing mechanical objects.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: He relies solely on his own ambitions to keep him alive. He trusts no one. He believes his purpose it to bring about a stronger Sith by studying new philosophies that the Sith could embrace.
POWERS:
Telekinesis
Force Grip
Force Choke​
Sense
Force Illusion
Force Sight​
Energy Manipulation
Pyrokinesis
Force Lightning​
Status Effects
Force Drain​
Mind Manipulation

SHIP: N/A
GEAR:
Lightsaber with a long hilt that has a pointed end and crimson blade View attachment 3665
Traditional black robes with red lining, black gauntlets with red markings

DROIDS: N/A
PETS: N/A

PERSONALITY: Cas is known for having a very serious personality. He is very independent and unconcerned with other’s problems. He hates the Jedi and many of his fellow Sith. He is calm, but when angered he is vicious and uncontrollable. He has a fascination with death that some Sith believe to be unnatural. He has been known to kill an enemy and then proceed to rip the carcass open to inspect the insides. Cas regards his fellow Sith with disdain and contempt, as he feels that many of them are of feeble, indecisive repose. Cas tends to be a loner and refuses to spend much time with others. He views others as tools more than anything else. They are only but pawns in his game of chess; a game in which he has long aspired to become more than even the Dark Lord himself.

BIOGRAPHY: Mialdir Cas was born on Korriban. Many believe that he killed his parents and changed his name when he became a Sith. How he was trained as an Acolyte is unknown to most. His ancestry is so mixed that no one is sure where he originated.

Cas focused much of his early years as a Sith on developing powers that few had ever known, like pyrokinesis. However, he was mostly unsuccessful. As time went on he continued to focus his power development on forms of alchemy. Cas forced himself to learn all that he could in secret. He discovered that the truest form of power was not using the Force, but instead control over everything in some form.

Cas' first significant appearance among his fellow Sith caused them to think of him as a man not to be trusted. He was quiet and calm, but he had a presence about him that the other Sith could not describe. They knew that he had plans to do something, but as he kept only to himself none knew what his plans were. People would say, and Cas would tell any who asked, that he was no ordinary Sith and his ambitions were not at all what one would assume a Sith would have.

Cas was rarely seen by his fellow Sith or members of the Band of Zoist until the war was started. After the war started, Cas had more use for his lightsabers. He used his blades as little as possible but loved what happened whenever they slice through living creatures.
 
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Hey there friend!

This is a great start at at Sith, and I like the direction you're going. We need to know a bit more about him though! Specifically, the personality needs to be at least a paragraph, and a bit more in depth on the backstory.

Additionally I need to know more about what his gear is! Right now you've just got a picture, which is nice for flavor, but you've gotta list it out (looks like its a lightsaber). Additionally would like to know what kinda force powers he can use, which would go under strengths!
 

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The bio looks long enough IMO. You could probably go a bit more in depth on it. I'd like to see a bit more in the personality, though, just so we can get a good grasp for who this guy is!

Additionally, force powers this timeline are handled more in classes, like telekinesis, mental manipulation, energy manipulation, etc. I'll link you the guide on force powers here. We don't have stuff like "Force Rage" anymore, so just give that a good read so you understand the Force this TL!
 

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@Prudence I'm not sure if I can do much more about the powers. I've done all I can think of for the personality.
 

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Hello there!

Since @Prudence is a complete nerd, I'll also be throwing in my own thoughts on this profile. Though not mandatory, it's still highly recommended. Now, without further ado:
  • The personality category. It's lacking, admittedly. If you're indeed having trouble adding to its length, I'd be more than happy to help. For instance, you could go into further detail about several other traits: his intelligence, his wit, his charm, his honesty, trustworthiness, desire, lust, jealousy, etc. To be more specific: why is he a loner? Yes, he sees other people as tools, but there are many ways in which you can elaborate on that, e.g. "Mialdir regards his fellow Sith with distant contempt, as he feels that many of them are of feeble, indecisive repose. They are only but pawns in his game of chess; a game in which he has long aspired to reach a position of power within the Brotherhood." (You're more than welcome to snag that, if you'd like)
  • I don't have any issue with the force powers myself, because it looks like you've edited out the issues anyway. Not like they actually matter, tbh.
  • Biography might be a tad shorter than most, but it's fine as it is.
  • Either way, great job with the formatting! Glad I'm not reading another wall of text. Props to ya, frand.
I'll approve of it as a Sith, but I do ask that you keep these requested edits in mind.

Cheerio!
 

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Alrighty! As I am no longer Sith AFL, imma just tag @Prudence or @Gian Greydragon and see if they find your edits adequate enough for approval.

Cheerio.
 
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