Mjou Frisk

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NAME: Mjou (Me-oo) Frisk A.K.A. Frisk
FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 14 years
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5’1”
WEIGHT: 95lbs
EYES: Grey
HAIR: Platinum blond
SKIN: Fair
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Vertical scar starting from her chin, ascending upwards to the left side of the mouth. Splitting both the upper and lower lip superficially.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 4/10 Petite in all forms of the word, Frisk’s strength is meager and she can easily be overwhelmed by most anyone. She is hardly a physical threat and struggles with heavy lifting, and many other tasks that require any kind of physical prowess.

DEXTERITY: 7/10 The only thing that Frisk can rely on is her speed and evasiveness. Her small body is light and allows her to outpace and dodge most obstacles (or people) that come her way. Years of fleeing from bigger opponents has given her a slight, flexible and athletic body.

CONSTITUTION: 5/10 Malnourished but not as unhealthy as a street urchin might be, she is all in all in good health but is skinny for her age. She is prone to hypoglycemia, but only due to her lack of a consistent diet. Years of running and getting into scraps have rendered Frisk an athletic youth, she can run for miles and does not tire quickly.


INTELLIGENCE: 5/10 While not wholly stupid, she is uneducated and lacks any cerebral development that one might gain from being taught in a regimented setting. Underdeveloped, fast problem solving can be a bit of an issue for Frisk when it comes to things that don’t directly pertain to her survival. She is mostly illiterate.

WISDOM: 3/10 What Frisk lacks in formal education she makes up for in her street smarts. She knows the right places to hide in any city, has a knowledge of the cartel connections and in general can talk a tough game to any thug or swindle a tourist. While she has a good mind for surviving, interpersonal and political wisdoms pass right over her head and she often times can grow vexed with others due to this lack of understanding.

CHARISMA: 4/10 While she has all the visual charm of a cute, wide-eyed girl; Frisk is bold and aggressive, which unfortunately renders her rather tactless. She is loud-mouthed and readily gives out insults and compliments alike. She’s not particularly good at diplomacy or influencing others but she doesn’t necessarily struggle to make friends.

FORCE POWERS:

Force-Sight: Enhances Frisk’s visual and spatial perception. While this ability is hardly developed to it’s farthest capabilities, it IS her most utilized; she has an uncanny ability to maneuver in the dark and often times can tell if she is alone in a room or not. The ability is usually reduced to a mere thirty foot radius around her, and is hard for her to maintain if there are too many outside distractions.

Force-Pull: A Telekinetic ability that allows the user to pull a material object towards the user. Frisk is by no means proficient with this technique and does not fully understand what occurs when she does it. Usually provoked by the heat of a moment, when it does happen Frisk chalks it up to her outstanding luck and tries not to think about it.

Comprehend Speech: An ability that allows the user to understand the spoken language of any sentient being they interact with. Once again, Frisk does not consider this a outstanding ability and merely believes she is exceptionally good at understanding the tones and body languages of other races. She is fairly proficient at this ability, and can generally comprehend anyone she’s speaking to.

SKILLS:

Crowd-Pickpocketing: Though the most risky form of pickpocketing, Frisk has mastered the art of swiping goods off of unsuspecting victims in a dense crowd. Utilizing her small size and speed, Frisk moves with the flow of the crowd; eeking out a target and snagging anything from jewelry to weapons to pawn.

Security Savvy: Frisk is familiar with most common forms of security and is rather resourceful at finding ways to get around them.

Haggling: As an experienced thief and pawn-artist, Frisk knows the fair market value of most generic goods.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

Training-saber: Permanently placed on the low-energy setting, this saber can do little more than bruise or burn an opponent. The light is a faint, flickering green, the hilt is 24 centimeters long and resembles a standard lightsaber.

Form I: Shii-Cho (not proficient)

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Strengths:
Fast and evasive
Brave but cautious
Street Smart
Shrewd Haggler

Weaknesses:
Petite
Physically weak
Uneducated and illiterate
Tactless


GEAR:

Old, antique Quick-6 that’s stuck on stun.
Stolen rucksack
R2 unit protoreceptor cap on a chain, strange designs are carved into the old metal.
Heavy, oversized flight jacket. Dirty, hole-filled tank top. Ratty shorts. Knee high, black boots. Fingerless, leather padded gloves.


SHIP:

N/A

DROIDS:

N/A

PETS:

N/A

PERSONALITY:

Young and brash, Mjou Frisk is a product of the hard life that bore her into the present. Independent, self-sufficient and aggressive; this street urchin is tough and makes a point to let everyone around her know she can’t be bullied or swindled.

Eager to make a cred, she’d sell the shoes off a bum if it got her a meal; but this is more due to her utter hatred of going hungry rather than any type of greed. While she isn’t greedy, she IS covetous of her belongings; which is a surprisingly small quantity for a professional thief.

She can be foul-tempered if slighted by someone, and holds that grudge until it is rectified by the offender; which usually involves supplication of some kind. Despite this she can be very generous and friendly, especially if given some form of food.

Due to her affinity and fixation on food, a psychological anomaly sometimes occurs when Frisk feels her food source is threatened; unusual aggression can manifest in the form of tantrums. These are infrequent and rare, and most times she comes off as a very confident and brave youth.

While she is in fact, quite brave she is also very stand-offish with strange people and places; if she is unfamiliar with it she will treat it with suspicion until it proves itself safe. When she is comfortable, she is bright and curious; eager to laugh and make others laugh as any child longing for acceptance is. Her inability to read is a source of some embarrassment for her, she has tried several times to learn but can’t seem to grasp the concepts. This is a sensitive topic for her and usually is the reason she starts fights.

BIOGRAPHY:

It is assumed that Mjou was conceived and born in space transit, as she was discovered amongst wires and loose parts in one of the lesser spaceports of Coronet City, on the planet of Corellia. A Gand dock worker by the name of G’myk Tyul, who felt for the small, squalling infant took her in.

It was a struggle for the two, G’myk was a humble; docile Gand who worked hard to feed and care for the infant, and often times left her to the care of his Cantina friends while he was on shift. This varying community of drunken caretakers made Mjou a confident, curious child who knew more about swiping someone’s purse than writing her own name.

Though the Gand himself never impressed upon the child the pressure he was under financially;Mjou knew that it was a burden for him to pay for both of them. She utilized her knowledge of pickpocketing to supplement their income with credits earned by pawning stolen goods. G’myk knew of this extracurricular profession and often times tried to convince Mjou to give it up, only to be met with tantrums that he was too passive to triumph over.

During her 12th year, tragedy struck as G’myk was fatally wounded on the job. Though G’myk requested the compensation his employers would pay go to Mjou, she was never officially adopted and not considered kin. The money was absorbed back into the Vendor company who employed G’myk and Mjou was tossed out on the street as soon as another tenant offered to pay the monthly rent.

Pained by the loss of her surrogate father, but capable enough to care for herself; Mjou continued pawing her stolen goods, and relying partially on the kindness of G’myk’s old friends. She survived on her own, taking gopher jobs when she could and stealing what she needed to pay for her day-to-day needs.


Living as a street urchin and thief for two years, Mjou managed to eek out a living well enough to survive; but this is all she did. Surviving was all she could hope to do, and she was good at it; though the stresses of the lifestyle often times brought out small glimpses of her untapped Force abilities.


Finally, Mjou worked up the funds and nerve to steal aboard a frigate heading down the Corellian Run. She remained undetected by the crew and was able to make it all the way to Tynna. Once there, she opted to leave the vessel for another; but not before sneaking into the city of Lutris.

Once there, she was found pickpocketing by Jedi Master Reland Gil and Padawan Jade Evoyn who confronted the thief and managed to convince her to hear them out. Revealing to her they were Jedi and that they suspected her to be force sensitive; the youth reluctant went with them to Naboo where she was brought into the New Jedi Order as a Padawan.






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The only thing I can see that should be changed is her rank, all new Jedi PCs start as a padawan, you can RP an introduction thread on how she joined the order, but you'll still make her a padawan first. Other than this I really like her, she has an interesting past that should prove fun to play off of. All in all, really nicely done.​
 
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Seems a good character IMO though the descriptions of your character's attributes and your numbers seemed a bit different, might want to look through a few other characters as the numbers are a bit tricky, 5 is human average so someone illiterate and issues with complex issues probably wouldn't have a 5, for an example. Just an observation. I like the bio and personality, seems well-written.
 

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Wisdom seems a bit high for a 14 year old, but the other stats look fine. You can also say Jedi Hopeful if you like, though the official rank is Padawan. Be sure to sign up in the Jedi sign up thread!
 

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I adjusted the wisdom stat as looking back on it it WAS a bit high for a 14 year old. I kept the other stats as is, INT stays the same because there is a difference between uneducated and unintelligent. Changed her to Padawan in there and will now march on over to the Jedi sign up Thread!
 

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They may wish you describe how you found the Order because the Jedi are super underground right now and Corellia is pretty heavily militarized by the Sith currently so there probably wouldn't be a lot of Jedi going there unless they were on a very important mission.
 

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They may wish you describe how you found the Order because the Jedi are super underground right now and Corellia is pretty heavily militarized by the Sith currently so there probably wouldn't be a lot of Jedi going there unless they were on a very important mission.


I was thinking about that and I think the answer to this lies within the intro RP I wish to do. Since I did want to start out unaffiliated because I wanted to RP my characters discovery/induction into the Order, I hoped to start from before she was even part of the Order. Which is also why I put in Jedi Hopeful rather than Padawan.

I was hoping that with said RP done, I would simply add the information on how she was brought in afterwards. Since she is also in a very active port city, it wouldn't be impossible for her to get off world via a freighter or some other transport vessel. Thus getting to a more Jedi friendly planet and coming across any of the Order.

I probably should have written that somewhere....Well! I'm doing it now!
 

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Haha okay, well like I said there probably wouldn't be a lot of Jedi heading to Corellia because how crazy deep in Sith space it is. So when you do your intro thread keep that in mind, because if you do it on Corellia there's a chance the Sith might want someone there too since of how militarized it is. It may be easier if she catches a ride to someplace less Sith-y, like Tatooine or Naboo (there are plenty of other planets in the Outer Rim, but those are two of the more popular ones, feel free to pick another one if you want). Just a heads up.
 

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My Jedi's more or less aimlessly wandering around right now, so he could possibly run into her somewhere, help her along to some Jedi holdout.
 

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Tatooine is right along the Corellian Run actually, near the end of it but it'd be a go final destination!



My Jedi's more or less aimlessly wandering around right now, so he could possibly run into her somewhere, help her along to some Jedi holdout.


I wouldn't mind having Mjou run into your guy! I'm assuming you're meaning to use Hal? Would you like me to give you a list of planets along the Corellian Run? You could pick one and we could have the two meet??
 

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Loving the feel of this character, good job for your first write-up. Go ahead and check the Jedi sign-ups.
 

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I wouldn't mind having Mjou run into your guy! I'm assuming you're meaning to use Hal? Would you like me to give you a list of planets along the Corellian Run? You could pick one and we could have the two meet??

Yes, Hal is who I use for any Jedi related business. He is on Tatooine right now, so that's a possibility.
 

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Don't listen to Sid, he eats Padawans.
 

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Yes, Hal is who I use for any Jedi related business. He is on Tatooine right now, so that's a possibility.

Could always have her help Hal get back on his feet once Vica's done with 'em.
 

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I am equal parts concerned and intrigued. Either way, Mjou and Hal meeting up at some point on Tatooine would be gratefully accepted and I look forward to it.


Unless it results in a meat-grinder for my poor, crappy padabrat
 

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Haha, I promise your padawan will be fine! We'll just beat the crap outta Hal instead. I mean, look at that face - he deserves it. ;)
 

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Haha, I promise your padawan will be fine! We'll just beat the crap outta Hal instead. I mean, look at that face - he deserves it. ;)

Tis a lovable, punchable sort of face.
 

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That would be fun, having a prospective padawan dropping off a battered knight to the Jedi as part of her application. "I brought the idiot in, that's my good deed of the day. Am I in now?"
 

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A better deed woulda been leaving his drunk, sorry ass in the sand to rot.

(We will give you cake for it.)
 

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More likely that she'd steal all his valuables and THEN bring him in claiming to be doing a good deed. "I saved his life---didn't I sir? Yes I did. He could have died out there, fortunately I happened by and thought what a waste of a good wallet--life! I meant life. I said life."
 
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