Mockadane Stormcloud

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Name: Mockadane Stormcloud
Species: Human
Age: 29
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 225
Eye Color: Brown
Occupation: Bounty hunter/Mercinary/Assasin
Home world: Nar Shadaa
Force sensetive: No
Appearance: Mockadane has tanned skin, bald, shaved not natural, above average build, his clothes have many pouches and pockets for his goods and explosives when needed. He also wears Enso MKII Combat Armour
Equipment: Mockadane has a variety of weapons on him at all times such as:
1-SA-17 Mercy Stun Gun
2-GB-357 "Gratia" Blaster
1-CQB-R19 Blaster Rifle (strapped to his back)
1-ATLP (usually kept on his ship unless stated otherwise.
1-EMP Grenade( in pouch)
1-MK3 Pyrotechnic Munitions Device "Firespray"(in pouch)
In his belt pouches: He keeps tracking chips, Small and concealable, Stun cuffs, and grenades just in case.
Ship: The Rapere
Transport: shade ground transport
Droid: HRD knows as Eldorack

Personality: Mockadane's only purpose in the Galaxy is to get as much money as possible. A job is a job, no matter who it is for or what they want. He is emotionless, doesnt care about anything or anyone. Mockadane is the quiet type, prefers to listen and wait than to just rush in and give his opinion. Very standoffish with strangers but once you get to know him he is a very loyal and reliable friend.

Biography:
Mockadane's past is not known to him, where he comes from or who his parents are. The only life he has knows is in an orphinage or on the streets. Most of the time it is the latter. As a boy Mockadane had wondered why he was in the situation he was in. Where was his parents. Why had they left him in the wretched place. Surely if they knew where he was they would come and get him and take him away. That was always what he told himself, to feel better when he could not stand to look at the employees of the local orphinage where he stayed.

Mockadane took every chance he could to escape, trying to hide in ship cargo holds and what not. And time after time the door bell rang, and more times then not it was the local police holding the escapee. Every time he had escaped from that hell hole of a home he was beaten, but he did not care. It was worth it. He figured that if he escaped enough times, and tried different ways each time, something was bound to work. And he was right.

As always, opening the door ever so slowly as he tip toed outside, and then making a run for it. This time he didnt have to do the thinking. As he ran as fast as he could, a rather large hand jutted out from within the shadows and yanked him from the streets.

"Hey, whats going on here"

"Shut up kid. You wanna make some money"


"Ya"


"Ok, I've got a job for you and a couple of your friends."


Mockadane looked around curiously.

"What friends?"


"Its a saying, dont worry about it. Ok here is the deal. I need you to kill this man"


He handed Mockadane a piece of paper with a name on it.

"Meet me back at this docking bay, and be quick."


Mockadane blinked as he stared at the name, then looked up at the man.

"How"


"How what? How do you kill him. Easy, stab him with this"


He handed Mockadane a small knife and left. As he made his way to the shop, he was a little worried he would get caught. Finally reaching the door, his heart racing, beads of sweat rolling down the sides of his face as he slowly picked the lock and opened the door. He walked through the establishment, looking for his target. Snoring could be heard, getting lourder the farther in the place he went.

Finally reaching the strangers sleeping chambers, Mockadane was so nervous. He slowed his breathing, tip toed as softly as he could as he walked up next to the bed. Instead of seeing the man laying on the bed, all he saw was the employees of the orphinage as he thrust the dagger through the mans heart. He could hear him gargle on his own blood as he gasped for the last few breaths he would ever take.

Putting the knife into his belt he ran out of the room, running to the docking bay where he was told to go. His new employer was working on something for his ship as Mockadane walked through the entrance. Handing the man the knife, traces of blood still on the blade.

"Say, your pretty handy to have around. You wanna make this a full time gig for me kid. I could use you."

Mockadane nodded. This was his life for the next ten years and he had become very proficient at it. Becoming very good with a sniper riffle and also blaster pistols. He had begun to gain so much trust with his employer that he was allowed to accompany him to where he aquired the contracts. Mockadane saw an oportunity. 'Why have the middle man when Im doing all the work' he thought.

Mockadane saved his earnings until he was able to purchase a vessel of his own. Now was the time to take over. Having been with his employer many times, he sat in the cockpit of his new ship The Raptor, punched the coordinates into the nav computer and after a few minutes was launching into hyperspace as the stars streaked past him.

After he talked with 'The boss' as he likes to be called, they came to an aggreement. Mockadane flew back to his employer. As the ramp lowered with a slight hiss, the large tanned assasin walked down the ramp. His employer stood, waiting, angry.

"Where were you"

"Taking care of buisness."


"What buisness is that"


"Nothing, just a loose end I had to tie up is all."


A smile etched its way upon his employers face as he stood in front of his favorite employee. With outstretched arms they embraced in a friendly hug.

"My boy...I always knew th..."


Mockadane's employers eyes shot open wide as he realized what had just happened. Stumbling back a few steps, it was visible. The knife he had given the boy so long ago was now lodged into his chest. Mockadane cradeled the dying mans fall, holding his head in his hands. Gasping for breath, and nothing. Mockadane dropped the man, and stood to his full height. Realizing now was his time to collect unto him which was his. Everything.

Walking back up the ramp and activating the repulsor lifts of his ship, The Raptor clawed its way into the atmosphere. All the while Mockadane had a slight grin on his face.

Mockadane's HRD image.
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@Malon does this character need to be approved since its an indie?
 
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Independent characters only need approval if their backstory involves the history of a faction.
E.g. Jedi turned bounty hunter with mentions of the Jedi Council in their bio.

Because of this, Indies are somewhat of a grey area and are more or less reviewed by members of the site.

The Personality section however doesn't yet meet the minimum so you will have to expand on it. It's just nice to get an idea of how the character thinks and will also help you play them IC.
Mockadane's appearance is greatly improved with the photo, but I would also add things such as eye color and any known scars/how he got them.
The photo itself can be directly inserted with a link unless you do not want to. I can help you with that if you want.
On his gear you might want to add what he carries in some of the pouches such as motion trackers like the one Obi Wan used on Jango's ship, as well as the carried ammo for his weapons.
 

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Also, instead of attaching the picture to the post, you can use the IMG code to make the picture view-able in the actual post.

Code:
[IMG]IMAGE SOURCE LINK[/IMG]
 

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ok thank you. Also i noticed that ysalmiri is an unapproved species list. Why is that. I was going to keep one of the animals on my ship but it looks like i cant.
 

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ok thank you. Also i noticed that ysalmiri is an unapproved species list. Why is that. I was going to keep one of the animals on my ship but it looks like i cant.

It's a banned species due to its ability to disrupt the force in a sphere around itself, which would be incredibly overpowered.
 

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oh ok. do you think i could write something up for my character having something like that on his gauntlet but it was only for about 5 min that way it is not overpowered and can also be damaged?
 

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oh ok. do you think i could write something up for my character having something like that on his gauntlet but it was only for about 5 min that way it is not overpowered and can also be damaged?

You'd have to submit it on the tech board, but given the rule that technology cannot disrupt a Force User's ability to use the force, getting it through would be virtually impossible.

Also, something else I noticed on the profile, PCs are not allowed to own Corvettes, so you'll need to change it.
 

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im still looking through the armor. I was thinking about writing up his own but for now not really.
 

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im still looking through the armor. I was thinking about writing up his own but for now not really.
Check out the Vagabond armour that Clayton made. it's pretty decent and a safe standard to go with in my opinion.
 

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i just updated my profile with armor
 

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i just updated my profile with armor
seeing as there are new rules with tech and armour specifically is getting a high overhaul I would make sure that it was still valid under the new restrictions since it was approved many months back. at least if you plan on doing pvp at all.
 

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oh ok i went to the sixth timeline thread and that armor was there so i assumed it was ok
 

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oh ok i went to the sixth timeline thread and that armor was there so i assumed it was ok
yeah the compendium still needs to be update. you'll notice stuff that was previously approved has either been archived, returned to unapproved, re-approved or yet to be checked by the mods/clayton.
 

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oh ok ill look through the armor again. thank you.
 
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