Molding someone's future...(Deakr Cueve's training)

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Rish sat near the front gate of the temple as he was putting the finishing touches on his tatoo,s. Spending hours upon hours, digging into his flesh using a small knife then feeling them with hot ink upon another small blade.
He was awaiting his new acolyte. Deakr was his name, he sounded like a trouble maker. And Rish wasint in the mood for insolence. By now his art upon his body was almost finished. It was finaly resembling the markings of the Bogan. Rish was quite devoted to their teachings. This was only a stepping stone to his devotion. But now it was almost time that his student was arriving, Rish put the finale stroke upon his body while the scorching hot ink seered his skin then put away the tools and then sat himself in a meditative posture awaiting his student...
 

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Deakr was walking along the outer wall of the temple. He had just walked around the whole building. They said he would meet his master at the temple entrance in a few hours, so he decided to spend that time walking.
Deakr really hated the cold. He couldn't stand it. That is why he was covered in layers of thick clothing.
Deakr reached the main gate and saw his new teacher. He could sense his pain but didn't do say anything due to his meditation. Deakr stared at him for close to five minuets and then sat right next to him in a meditative posture as well.
 

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Hearing his someone sit next to him, Rish opend his eyes to see who it was.
Although no one could tell his eyes were opening due to his anatomy.
"Tell me, what are you willing to learn."
Said Rish in a cold tone. He knew this was his student, as he had told him to meet here. But noticing his student was wearing layer upon layer of clothing gave him the impression that the cold was too much. Rish had grown immune to the sense. Part of his training was nothing but him sitting in the cold with nothing but his undergarments....
 

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Deakr jumped in surprise when his teacher spoke. After he calmed down he answered "What ever you feel I should learn. I don't know at the moment."
Deakr tried to focus but was too cold. "How can you stand this cold? Can we go inside?"
 

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Rish stood up and walked further out from the temple gate. Now he was standing in the cold still with his torso exposed to the cold. "If you want your training, you will deal with this enviroment." The wind wasint blowing much now. Although to others it would still be freezing. "Tell me. What do you know so far about the order?" Rish was going to turn this piece of human trash into something worth of the order. At least he thought him to be human. You could never be sure in the galaxy.
 
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"No peace, only suffering. No knowledge, only instinct. No serenity, only passion. No harmony, only chaos. No life, only death." He said, showing that he has it memorized. "I also know what all that means."
Deakr then got up and walked over to Rish in the cold. He could handle it a little more for about 10 minuets.
 

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Rish nodded his head. His student did know some things about the order.
But it was the combat training he was realy worried about. Rish himself was more proficient in combat with his lightsaber rather than the Force.

He knew the the basic aspects of the Force. Such as Pushing and pulling of objects using the Force. But perhaps this would be a learning experience for the both of them. Igniting his crimson toned lightsaber, Rish held a training blade in his hand and offered it to his student. "Today we are going to see how you fair with a blade." Said Rish in a harsh tone, he could tell his student wasint going to last long in the cold. But he needed to learn how to sustain himself by using his feelings of hate and malice.
 

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Deakr took the weapon handed to him and said "I work better with two but this will be sufficient"
He Ignited it and thought to himself If I am moving I could add an extra five minuets out here
Deakr swung the lightsaber around a bit and asked "What color is it? I cant see colors."
 

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"A blind human!? This is all I need. Never the less, the color is a light yellow."
Rish was getting agitated by his student. He may not be able to help that he was most likely born this way.
"Failure will not be tolerated under my teaching. I sense that you know much in the ways of combat and the Force." Rish paused for a moment and looked out into the distance. He knew there was a small outpost not too far from where they stood. In his mind he knew a test that would surely make him into a bogan. "Deakr were going to take a trip. To an old planet called Felucia." He had gained much information about this planet. It was going to be his students test...
 

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"Just because I cant see color doesn't mean I'm blind. I see with a complex combination of infrared, sonar, and the force. And I'm not human, see the glowing yellow eyes?" Deakr explained. He just hated it when people called him a human. He was a near-human of unknown descent and preferred to be called that. When he heard about the planet he asked "what kind of planet is Felucia? never heard of it."
 

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Rish said nothing but began to walk while signaling his student.
After about an hour of walking they reached a almost abandoned spaceport.
It was relativily small one. Yet there were a few travelers here that had taken the public transport.

Quickly Rish made his way onto the small transport. The piolt merely stepped out as he had dealt with Rish before. Rish entered in the coordinates for the planet then suddenly a warning message scrolled onto the screen.
Saying that this world was dangerous and unsettled. Rish knew very well what laid upon this planet....
 

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Deakr entered the transport after seeing the pilot just leave. He sensed fear in him.
He strapped himself in and thought why is it so deserted here?
Deakr then heard his teacher type something in and then a warning sound. Not being able to read the message he asked "What was that for?"
 

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"Oh nothing.." And just like that, they were off into the unknown regions of space. Felucia wasint far from Ando Prime. Most likely an hour at the best.

A hour later....

The ship neared the planet. You could see its flora life even from space.
It was almost beatufil. If it were burning....
 

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Deakr felt the the ship exit hyperspace. Must be their he thought.
He could sense all the life on the planet, ALL Of IT. Their was too much life and it was blocking up his vision. Their needed to be less.
"I don't like this planet. I cant see well on it." With the way he saw it would be difficult to tell one life force from another. kind of like shadows on top of each other.
 

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Abruptly Rish turned the ship right back around, headed back to Ando Prime.
His past master had sent him a message through the Force asking him to let him train Deakr. Rish turned back to his student, his expression was unreadable.

"You will no longer be trained under me. Another Crusader has asked to train you. A very special honor for another to request another."
Without another word Rish steered the ship back the landing pad with no other words menced between the two.


((Im sorry but I am training to many acolytes and Samowise will be training you now. He is great at training and would certianly do a better job than I would with you.)
 
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