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Well I'm finally ready to start utilizing this character. I just simply broke Djem So a bit, now it is perfect useable, and backed up by canon.

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lol no. You just edited the first two lines of your write up for 'Form VIII'. While there's no problem using a personalized variant of a form, but trying to sneak your fanon form through like that is a no-no. So, here's what I'm going to ask you to do:

Delete the entire lightsaber form section. Start from scratch, sticking only to a canon form. Again, customization is fine, but complete reworking isn't.

If you'd simply waited for your saber form to be approved, I wouldn't have drawn a hard line in the sand like this, but I won't tolerate you trying to slip it under the radar. As such, this is non-negotiable.
 

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Sorry to tell you this, but it isn't actually fanon. The form is Darth Vader's Djem So Varient xD. I just wanted to give it a name.

Read his wookieepedia article and you will see that under his lightsaber training, there is large similarities between the two forms xD. This still falls into the category of Djem So, it is just more rigid and percise.

I just gave it a pretty name so that my character could have exclusive rights to it. The whole thing is solid and legit from Darth Vader's own style after he went into the suit, who this character actually possesses the same physical body type, and also a few of the restrictions due to his heavy armor.

The name was just a means to make it an official and single style. Sorry to be greedy, but I just wanted the varient to myself, everyone is free to use like it is... :(
 
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He was a practitioner of multiple styles, Jerek, and as such had the expertise to incorporate multiple styles into one - it was not creating a new 'variant' on Djem So, rather, it was mixing it up by injecting moves and stances from other forms.

At any rate, this does not change the fact that you merely altered the first few lines of your 'Form VIII' and slapped 'Djem So' at the front, and so my ruling is unchanged. Please revert this to vanilla Djem So. Until you do so, you are barred from using this character.
 

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You haven't even read Anakin Skywalker's Sith Lord section of his lightsaber training like I said have you?

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Anakin_Skywalker#Sith_Lord

Seriously, read it and you will see that I am completely right in the fact that the form is actually a varient of Djem So and not just Darth Vader's practition of other forms. He added the elements of other forms to his Djem So. He wasn't a practitioner of the exactly, just a cut and paster.

"Vader was able to overcome this limitation fairly quickly, developing a refined version of Djem So that continued to include Ataru and Soresu elements, but also added Makashi and Juyo to the mix."

Ah crap, Juyo was lost in my translation of the style into site. :(
 

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Anakin had prexisting knowledge of all included forms prior to creating that style, Jerek. He was one of the most powerful Jedi of his time, and that was due in no small part to his mastery over the Lightsaber. He was able to create that modified version of Djem So because he already knew everything there was to know about the forms he was incorporating into it.

I'm not about to get into a debate with you about it, though, and that's that. Alter your profile as I outlined, or this profile will be locked and archived.
 

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I've already told brandon before hand, why do you have to be so stubborn over my use of Darth Vader's Djem So Varient?
 

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Because it's not a canon form, because all you did was PM Bac with a description of the form [I know; I talked to him about it], and because you kept trying to slip this under teh radar, then went screaming to wookieepedia when that didn't work.

Anywho, you were warned. Locked and archived; feel free to restart this once you've made the required edits. That is all.
 
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