Nec Grend

[Ceder_Tree]

NEC

GREND

AGE

► 32​

SPECIES

► Devarionian​

HEIGHT

► 6'1''​

WEIGHT

► 235 L​

EYE COLOR

► Dark Brown​

SKIN COLOR

► Red-Brown​

HAIR COLOR

► N/A​

HOMEWORLD

► Devaron​

GENDER

► Male​

FACTION

► Blackbird Pirate's​

RANK

► Raider​

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► Non-Force Sensitive​

BIOGRAPHY

[beebox3=500px]Born on, the Devaronian homeworld of to an abusive, depressed father. Nec's father was a cruel man, sometimes not even regarding the boy as his own son. Nec grew up, without a mother forcing him into his full father's wrath. However, after a drunken blackout, he decided he could make it out on his own, he slipped out of the house, and ended sneaking aboard a small frieghter. He was finally free from the years of torment, and torture from his father. Free at last.
Or so he thought. He ended up on the Moon of Cynda, where he was discovered by the crew of the ship he had hidden on. He was thrown out onto the streets, where he had to scrounge for food. Until, a man came along and offered him to work in one of the many mines on the moon. Agreeing to sign the contract, without reading it carefully Nec, allowed himself to be forced to work in the mines indifinitly. Essentially, making him slave labor to his new master. Eventually, a conspiracy formed with the others whom were trapped emerged, and Nec was able to escape the mine. Using, stolen Thorilide, selling it to buy equipment and a star ship. Once he had his new gear, he started traveling around the galaxy. Eventually, ending up finding the Blackbird Pirates, which he quickly joined as a raider. He joined as he desired, to gain revenge on those whom he felt were allowing slavery, to continue unchecked.[/beebox3]

Equipment

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1x DX-38 Holdout Blaster
4x Powerpacks.
2x Vibroblade
1x Stalker Armor (Jetpack Option)
2x Thermal Gernade's
1x Wrist Grapple.
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Skills & Attributes

[beebox3=500px]Nec's main attribute, is his immense strength built up over years of constant abuse. From both his father, and rigerous mining job. He's also, isn't a dunce, due to having to be careful while mining the highly reactive, Thorilide. He isn't the best smooth talker in the galaxy, nor does he have a good amount of luck. He's fairly proficient in with his blade work, due to having some minor training from his Father, and the constant use of a pickaxe, allowed him to feel the weight of a blade, and he self taught himself a few technique's to use. Nec also is not one to crumble under a hit, it'll take a quite fair amount of attacks to take him out of the fight. He also has developed his skills in tracking over the years, due to experiences as a bounty hunter. His main weaknesses, are that he can become overly aggressive in a fight, overextending himself, leaving him vulnerable. He's also, quite easy to beat if you can match his strength, or have the blade work to counter it. Another weakness that he holds, is the he is not very quick, giving time for opponents to land blows onto him.
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Personality

[beebox3=500px]Nec is distrustful of other's due to his betrayal upon Cynda. He also has feelings of Imprisonment, finding the galaxy isn't as great as he thought, while he was in bondage. Leading to him, being slightly depressed, however he is still attempting to find his way. Nec, also has a great disdain for both the Jedi, and the Sith. The Jedi, due to not assisting in the true darkness around the galaxy, and the Sith for encouraging the slavers, and allowing it freely. Nec feels quite strongly for those, he cares about. Being extremely loyal, to those whom earn his trust. He also has the traits of his people, a wish to travel around and not stick to once place to long. He mostly enjoy joking with others. Trying not to be overly serious.
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Description

[beebox3=500px]Nec, is a six-foot tall, Devarionian male. He has a Reddish-brown skin tone, and a scar, running down from just above the eye, down to his left cheek. He has a muscular build, but being noticeably thin for such, a large build. He has dark brown eyes, he also lacks any visible hair. He has, two fairly averaged sized horns. He, also pointed teeth looking like fangs, that a grizzly yellow color due to lack of proper dental care. He wears, a dark brown Trench Coat, with a light tan armor underneath, he wears no helmet of any kind.
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Ship

[beebox3=500px]Nec, owns a standard issue XS Stock Light Freighter. Having it's normal yellow plates, and it's four laser canons.[/beebox3]

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[The Good Doctor]

Alright. Good start. Welcome aboard. I'll add you to the roster

But if you are going into combat or PVP soon I'd like for you to go through this handy guide of approved tech and pick out some gear. I don't know what 'Padded light armor" is supposed to mean or how many hit's it can take. I don't know what a 1x F-9 Laser Enforcer is and wookiepdia won't tell me anything. So if you pick a weapon (or submit your own) you can change the skin to make the desired weapon look like the Laser Enforcer if you like it so much. There's also generic tech in the Player's Workshop section.

Also, we would like that you tell us how many spare powerpacks/chips your weapons. Because if you go to a PVP/Combat without it being in your character sheet or first post you don''t have it.

I think that's all I see, but I won't hold up for approval. If you have any questions feel free to let us know!

And Social Thread!

 

[The Good Doctor]

@Ceder_Tree Hello there! Just revisiting this. So the gear looks better.

Although with tech rules, armors have a limited number of functions depending on what type (1 for light, 3 for medium, and 4 for heavy). And you also aren't allow to layer-on other submissions either. So Vagabond Armor has 3 functions already. The Z-4 essentially adds two functions since it has rockets too, which would give your character a total of 5 which is more than heavy armor is allowed.

So either the Vagabond would have to be functionless (which needs to specified) to accommodate the Z-4.
See if there is another armor that has an option for a generic jetpack (like this one)
Or you might have to remove the jetpack and use the Vagabond (or another armor's) built in functions, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

And keep in mind (if you don't like the the armor looks, you can use a different picture for it)

Also, if you would like some help with the coding of you character sheet (I can see some errors), I'm willing to help.

 

[Ceder_Tree]

Some, help in the coding area, could be extremely helpful. Namely, how to properly insert, pictures into a post. I've fixed up my gear as well, Stalker looks quite nice.

 

[The Good Doctor]

Try this C+Ping this code in the first post. I tested it, works on my end.

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[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]SPECIES[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Devarionian[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]HEIGHT[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]►  6'1''[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]WEIGHT[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► 235 L[/FONT][/INDENT]
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[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Dark Brown[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=#808080][B]SKIN COLOR[/B][/COLOR][/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Red-Brown[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]HAIR COLOR[/B][/COLOR][/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]► N/A[/B][/COLOR][/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]HOMEWORLD[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Devaron[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]GENDER[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Male[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]FACTION[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Blackbird Pirate's[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]RANK[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Raider[/FONT][/INDENT]
[FONT=calibri][COLOR=grey][B]FORCE SENSITIVITY[/B][/COLOR] [/FONT]
[INDENT][FONT=calibri]► Non-Force Sensitive[/FONT][/INDENT]
[/exsize][/justify][/abox3][/fancybox3][cbox3=500px][FONT=calibri][B]BIOGRAPHY[/B][/FONT][/cbox3][beebox3=500px][justify]Born on, the Devaronian homeworld of to an abusive, depressed father. Nec's father was a cruel man, sometimes not even regarding the boy as his own son. Nec grew up, without a mother forcing him into his full father's wrath. However, after a drunken blackout, he decided he could make it out on his own, he slipped out of the house, and ended sneaking aboard a small frieghter. He was finally free from the years of torment, and torture from his father. Free at last.
Or so he thought. He ended up on the Moon of Cynda, where he was discovered by the crew of the ship he had hidden on. He was thrown out onto the streets, where he had to scrounge for food. Until, a man came along and offered him to work in one of the many mines on the moon. Agreeing to sign the contract, without reading it carefully Nec, allowed himself to be forced to work in the mines indifinitly. Essentially, making him slave labor to his new master. Eventually, a conspiracy formed with the others whom were trapped emerged, and Nec was able to escape the mine. Using, stolen Thorilide, selling it to buy equipment and a star ship. Once he had his new gear, he started traveling around the galaxy. Eventually, ending up finding the Blackbird Pirates, which he quickly joined as a raider. He joined as he desired, to gain revenge on those whom he felt were allowing slavery, to continue unchecked.[/justify][/beebox3][FONT=calibri][cbox3=500px][FONT=calibri][B]Equipment[/B][/FONT][/cbox3][beebox3=500px][justify]
1x DX-38 Holdout Blaster
4x Powerpacks.
2x Vibroblade
1x Stalker Armor (Jetpack Option)
2x Thermal Gernade's
1x Wrist Grapple.
[/justify][/beebox3][cbox3=500px][B]Skills & Attributes[/B][/cbox3][beebox3=500px][justify]Nec's main attribute, is his immense strength built up over years of constant abuse. From both his father, and rigerous mining job. He's also, isn't a dunce, due to having to be careful while mining the highly reactive, Thorilide. He isn't the best smooth talker in the galaxy, nor does he have a good amount of luck. He's fairly proficient in with his blade work, due to having some minor training from his Father, and the constant use of a pickaxe, allowed him to feel the weight of a blade, and he self taught himself a few technique's to use. Nec also is not one to crumble under a hit, it'll take a quite fair amount of attacks to take him out of the fight. He also has developed his skills in tracking over the years, due to experiences as a bounty hunter. His main weaknesses, are that he can become overly aggressive in a fight, overextending himself, leaving him vulnerable. He's also, quite easy to beat if you can match his strength, or have the blade work to counter it. Another weakness that he holds, is the he is not very quick, giving time for opponents to land blows onto him.
[/justify][/beebox3][cbox3=500px][B]Personality[/B][/cbox3][beebox3=500px][justify]Nec is distrustful of other's due to his betrayal upon Cynda. He also has feelings of Imprisonment, finding the galaxy isn't as great as he thought, while he was in bondage. Leading to him, being slightly depressed, however he is still attempting to find his way. Nec, also has a great disdain for both the Jedi, and the Sith. The Jedi, due to not assisting in the true darkness around the galaxy, and the Sith for encouraging the slavers, and allowing it freely. Nec feels quite strongly for those, he cares about. Being extremely loyal, to those whom earn his trust. He also has the traits of his people, a wish to travel around and not stick to once place to long. He mostly enjoy joking with others. Trying not to be overly serious.
[/justify][/beebox3][cbox3=500px][B]Description[/B][/cbox3][beebox3=500px][justify]Nec, is a six-foot tall, Devarionian male. He has a Reddish-brown skin tone, and a scar, running down from just above the eye, down to his left cheek. He has a muscular build, but being noticeably thin for such, a large build. He has dark brown eyes, he also lacks any visible hair. He has, two fairly averaged sized horns. He, also pointed teeth looking like fangs, that a grizzly yellow color due to lack of proper dental care. He wears, a dark brown Trench Coat, with a light tan armor underneath, he wears no helmet of any kind.
[/justify][/beebox3][cbox3=500px]Ship[/cbox3][beebox3=500px][justify]Nec, owns a standard issue XS Stock Light Freighter. Having it's normal yellow plates, and it's four laser canons.[/justify][/beebox3][/FONT]
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So yeah. In the image links (which I put back placeholders from the source template to make it easier, just replace the links with the image link (starting with the http, ending with the extension like 'png', 'jpg' 'gif' etc) with your own. Has to have the same beginning and ending part.

Anyways. Again. The Z-4 has to go, or the base armor you have needs to have the functions (not the armor rating though) taken out (and specifically stated as such) to accommodate it.

Even with the jetpack option. The Z-4 still shoots rockets, which counts as another function since it attaches to armor, which makes four functions, when medium is allowed 3.
In the coding, I removed the Z-4 and listed the Stalker as having it's jetpack option. You could go on one of the alternative routes in my previous post too. Not trying to be mean about it or anything, but the tech rules are rules.

 

[Ceder_Tree]

Understandable, and I'm reading more and tech rules. (Probably should of done that earlier but eh.....) I'll try out the code, see what happens. Thanks, for the help on this.