Oghon Parsa's Character Workshop

[Oghon Parsa]

SKILLS:

Basic lightsaber prowess

Basic knowledge of the Force



LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

Lightsaber forms that would suit Oghon:
- Ataru, due to his agile movements and dexterity.
- Niman, due to his belief of moderation.
- Shien, due to his martial inclinations.


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Strengths:
- Curiosity: Oghon is very curios and eager to learn, which shows itself in his hard work.
- Perfectionist: May count as both a strength and a weakness. Oghon is very conscious about his own abilities and accepts nothing less than perfection.
- A sound friend: Oghon is a true friend, once you get to know him.

Weaknesses:
- Impatience: The adolescent Oghon is often quite brash and impatient, acting out of his heart’s decisions, not his mind’s reasoning.
- Pride: Sort of a collateral effect of Oghon’s perfectionist self. Strengthened by his adolescence.
- Jealousy: Mostly in extreme cases and also as a collateral effect of his perfectionist self. Further strengthened by the insecurity inherent in an adolescent.



GEAR:

Jedi robes
Hopefully, soon a lightsaber


-- The Content Below is Optional, but Encouraged!--


SHIP:
Not yet, no.


DROIDS:
None so far.

PETS:
None so far.

KILLS:
None.

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
None.

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None.

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None.

ROLE-PLAYS:
Soon to be updated.

 

[Oghon Parsa]

Please feel free to offer constructive criticism! :) I will also be making a Bounty Hunter-ish type of character and, hopefully, a politician. Haven't decided on the latter yet, though.

 

[Tsunami]

Please feel free to offer constructive criticism! :) I will also be making a Bounty Hunter-ish type of character and, hopefully, a politician. Haven't decided on the latter yet, though.

Please be aware that the Jedi and the Senate are seperate main factions and therefore you can't be part of both at the same time. I would also like to point out that you do not have to start out as a Pad. learner, that most people are starting at the rank of Knight. This choice remains totally down to you however and there are plenty of people still making Padawann characters.

I would quite like to see a more fleshed out personality. That portion of this character sheet is going to help you in your roleplay. The more you write the less you will have to think about when you are doing RPs. There is also no appearance section as of yet? Is this because you are currently trying to find a good picture?

On the subject of the bio, i am not 100% sure so don't take what i say as gospel, however the Sith are only just starting to reappear to the galaxy in recent years. The fact that you hail from so far from the current Sith territories they have claimed (Iridonia and the Coruscant) means that i would highly doubt you would even know or believe that the Sith had returned.

The only other thing i would say about the bio is the bit where you mention the Jedi

"but only after the Jedi threatened to come back with support."

This does not seem too Jedi like and while I really liked the story you had set, that would be a tweak I would make.

Hope that I was of some help to you, good luck with your roleplay!

 

[Oghon Parsa]

Ahh, so one can have three characters, but only be a member of one faction? :)

The personality is sort of a work in progress. I'll flesh it out soon :)

I like the idea of being a Padawan Learner. However, I might decide that he is further in his apprenticeship than I initially wanted (depends on how fast a year goes by on this site).

About the Sith, I must say that I based that mostly on guessing. I had trouble working out the setting from the Timeline pages :)

Lastly, what I meant in the section with the Jedi was that Oghon's father did not give him up willingly. But history shows that whether a parent is willing to give up his/her kid or not, if it is Force-sensitive and a Jedi finds out, it ends up in the Order. That's has got to mean there's at least some form of 'forced persuasion', whether it is Jedi mind tricks, threats, impressive persuasive abilities, or something else :) I see that a Jedi 'threatening' someone is not very Jedi-like, but I'm unsure how else to portray it.

 

[Oghon Parsa]

Please be aware that the Jedi and the Senate are seperate main factions and therefore you can't be part of both at the same time. I would also like to point out that you do not have to start out as a Pad. learner, that most people are starting at the rank of Knight. This choice remains totally down to you however and there are plenty of people still making Padawann characters.

Do you know whether the Jedi faction and the Galactic Republic will be on good or worse terms? I might make a Jedi diplomat as my politician :)

 

[Tsunami]

Do you know whether the Jedi faction and the Galactic Republic will be on good or worse terms? I might make a Jedi diplomat as my politician :)

They are totally separate, I don't know how a Jedi diplomat would work as it is not part of the official ranking system. The main factions are:

- Jedi
- Senate and the Border Alliance
- Sith and the Sacred Band of Ziost

You may have 1 or 2 Characters in any main faction and the 2nd/3rd must be an Indie. As you can't be part of two main factions.

 

[Oghon Parsa]

They are totally separate, I don't know how a Jedi diplomat would work as it is not part of the official ranking system. The main factions are:

- Jedi
- Senate and the Border Alliance
- Sith and the Sacred Band of Ziost

You may have 1 or 2 Characters in any main faction and the 2nd/3rd must be an Indie. As you can't be part of two main factions.

Alright, I'll scratch the politician until further notice :)

Would I be able to create a BH and become a member of the Guild? Is that considered an Indie faction?

 

[Dravro ordo]

If on about the bount hunter guild then yes it counts as indie faction