Old soul in a new site

[Foxfire]

Hey all just trying to find a new active-ish site to rp in. This one looked better than most so I've can down and have a looksee. I hope my char Cho Wroth is a char that could make a mark on the site. I will try to keep up. If I miss some thing just tell me and i'll do what i can to correct any error.

Thanks for having me,

Foxfire

 

[Dark child]

Welcome to the site! I began reading Cho Wroth's character sheet yesterday but I'm not quite through his bio yet.

The Noghri have quite a lot of customs and I like that you incorporated that into the profile. I would go into a little more depth on what stava training is as well as any other cultural references as it is a little difficult to figure them out without knowing the definitions and lore behind them.

The only other small thing that I have noticed so far is that Cho carries daggers but the profile doesn't state how many.

As far as RP is concerned, you can ask to join anyone so long as they are willing, though I believe you will have to have a Sith faction leader approve your profile before Cho can join any Main Threads.

If you have any questions feel free to ask them here or in the PM I've sent you.

 

[Foxfire]

Hey all just trying to find a new active-ish site to rp in. This one looked better than most so I've can down and have a looksee. I hope my char Cho Wroth is a char that could make a mark on the site. I will try to keep up. If I miss some thing just tell me and i'll do what i can to correct any error.

Thanks for having me,

Foxfire

Thanks for the info, I will re-correct the bio. The last site had me gutting this boi so many times not sure whats-what any more. I've started a little open thread on Zoist just to kick the cobwebs out of the writer's block. As for the noghri they are my fav-starwars race I was happy to see you had them on the approved list. Well i shall get back to work lot to cover and mend on this primal force beast of a sith.