O'Mealey Eisele

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So, I made this character for the past few weeks let me know what you think. Empire database is before he became Eisele, Republic after.

Empire Database:

//Accessing Database for O'Mealey Eisele
/Secret Security Clearance needed....
/Clearance Granted.

NAME: O'Mealey Eisele
FACTION: Unnamed. Goes by the codename "Patriots".
RANK: Leader.
SPECIES: Human. Genetically altered.
AGE: 35
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'1" without boots. 6'3" with boots.
WEIGHT: 190
EYES: Light blue.
HAIR: Long grown out blonde hair. Shaved on the sides, top slicked back to the right. Part on the left side over the left eye.
SKIN: White.
CREDITS: Unknown.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Tattoo on left shoulder blade. Scar over left eye where he was shot. Scar spider webs out from there 1 inch. A "Blue light" that runs over the body in constant motion.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Negative.

STRENGTH: Bioengineering to have near super human strength. 9/10
DEXTERITY: Eisele practices freerunning and stalking from the former life in the SEAL teams. 7/10
CONSTITUTION: Bioengineering restructured for faster cell growth. Heals faster than normal. 7/10
INTELLIGENCE: Bioengineering has replaced parts of the missing brain with nanocomputers, nodes, and artifical synapses. 8/10
WISDOM: The best wisdom Eisele has is hindsight. 5/10
CHARISMA: After being labelled a terrorist Eisele learned how to win people over on his side.

SKILLS and SCHOOLS:
Schools: Competative Shooting Team, Special Forces Assassement and Selection, Survival Escape Resistance and Evasion school (Up to tier 4.), SEa Air Land Assassement and Selection, Special Forces, SEAL Qualification Course, Sniper School, SEAL combiatives course(Hand-to-Hand training), Explosives Ordance Disposal training, Improvised Explosives Course, Warrior's Leader Course, Pathfinder School, Airborne, HALO, Space Combat Applications Course, was also going to school for a double major in Chemistry and Biology.

Skills: Faster healing, near super human strength, self taught hacking.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: Phyiscally only matched by force users, faster healing, weapons handling unmatched, stealthy.
Weaknesses: Suspected EMPs haven't had a field test. Possibly insane. Lightsabers. Has a very high heat signture if being looking at through thermals.
APPEARANCE(LAST APPEARANCE):
Appears to be the age of mid twenties. Thin pointed nose, bridge of the nose was broken once and it is very obvious. Five O'clock shadow goes halfway up his cheeks. A "Blue light" that remains in constant motion. Very rarely goes over the face.
Boots with dark cargo pants tucked into them. A riggers belt with a pistol holster on the left side. Grey thermal shirt worn under a trench coat that stops at his ankles and has a hood. Wears a shegmah around the neck and pulls it up before engaging in contact.

GEAR(USUAL M.O.):Carries two pistols. One on the hip, the other in a holster holster. Carries a curved blade on the shoulder holster aswell. Depending on the mission usually carries a rifle. Carries a backpack with survival gear and extra ammo.

SHIP:
No ships known on record. None suspected.

ALLIES:
Former squadmates. (Assumed.)
PERSONALITY:
Cold, calculating, presice, psychopathic, and possibly schizophrenic. An Empiral Special Forces team. Within three days time he completely destroyed the mental condition of the soldiers. Implimenting his own self twisted version of paranoia on them.
BIOGRAPHY:
//Accessing Database...
/Access granted. Retrieving files "Operation White Out." Status: Keikodi. Eight years ago.
"Is he ready yet Doctor?" An expensively well dressed Middle aged human asked as the two figures walked down a hallway.

"As the schedule says he would be. But that isn't for a while." The Doctor said walking along side the man. He was wearing a typical white lab coat with the name SynCorp stensiled in.
Along with that right under it was the Doctor's ID tag hanging there. He was the head Doctor of the R&D division.

"It seems we don't have as much time as we initally thought. The competition is stepping up their game and is coming close to finding out what we have been doing and copying it.
They still haven't fully found out what we are doing here." The Middle Aged man said. "Tell me about this one. I hear out of the plenty of subjects we gave you, only one has made it though."

"Yes, that is correct." The Doctor started shifting though his datapad he was carrying and pulled up a file. "A contact within the Republic Government got this for me. Here was his record before your "Security team" aquired this man." The Middle Aged man gave him a weird look and took the file. It read:
NAME: Chief Petty Officer Keikodi (KIA)
FACTION: Republic Navy. Republic Navy SEALs. (DEVGRU(Classified))
RANK: Chief Petty Officer. E-7
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 27 (At time of death. Would be 35 now.)
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'9"
WEIGHT: 160 Pounds
EYES: Ice Blue. Extremely light colored
HAIR: A faded haircut with no more than 2 inches on top
SKIN: White colored skin
CREDITS: Pay Grade: E-7
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Tattoo on the left shoulder blade. Its an old symbol dating back before the Old Republic.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Negative.
STRENGTH: Maxing the Republic Navy Phyiscal Fitness Test. (RNPFT) Keikodi still surpasses anyone else in his units PT. 7/10
DEXTERITY: CPO Keikodi believes that the faster, more flexable you are the better you are in fighting. CPO Keikodi is a practicing freerunner. 8/10
CONSTITUTION: CPO Keikodi can deal with most of all pain, however his tolerance for it may be high, being able to withstand it is another story. 5/10
INTELLIGENCE: CPO Keikodi is always training, if not his body than his mind. He is always trying to learn all he can. 7/10
WISDOM: CPO Keikodi leaves wisdom for those who need it more than him. 4/10
CHARISMA: Besides CPO Keikodi most the time outranking who he needed to in order to get the job done he most the time has not needed to motivate people to fight. 3/10

SKILLS AND SCHOOLS:
Competative Shooting Team, Special Forces Assassement and Selection, Survival Escape Resistance and Evasion school (Up to tier 4.), SEa Air Land Assassement and Selection, Special Forces, SEAL Qualification Course, Sniper School, SEAL combiatives course(Hand-to-Hand training), Explosives Ordance Disposal training, Improvised Explosives Course, Warrior's Leader Course, Pathfinder School, Airborne, HALO, Space Combat Applications Course, was also going to school for a double major in Chemistry and Biology.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: Anything CPO Keikodi could put his mind to he could do, no matter the task.

Weaknesses: CPO Keikodi sometimes doubted himself, not a very good leader, and had a low constitution.

BIOGRAPHY:
Keikodi joined the Republic Navy right out of Mandatory School. He was an outstanding student, and the fact that he wanted to join was even more impressive. Keikodi op'ed to go right into training to become a SEAL. At the time Keikodi was only 17 years of age which would have made him the youngest person in the SEAL schools. The washout rate doing this was over a 95%. Keikodi knew it and it thrilled him, finally something to challenge him. Keikodi blew through school in order to become a SEAL he was honor graduate of most the classes he went to though the Navy.
Out of 7 combat deployments, all 7 were successful. Keikodi was awarded the Navy's Achievement Medal with a V for Valor.
While on leave with his squad, him and his squad were ambushed by a terrorist organization only known as "The Hunting". Unarmed at the time of the attack Keikodi and his squad were able to defend themselves. While most the combat was caught of various security camera terminals around the whole battle still remains a mystery. After about 10 minutes of the attack Keikodi was killed in action. Shot in the forehead. After Keikodi was KIA the rest of his squad was captured. Keikodi's body was also retrieved and the terrorist's bodies that were KIA were burned on the spot by a thermite grenade.
As the Middle Aged Man was just about done reading it the Doctor spoke up. "Honestly I don't know how your team even killed him." The Middle Aged man looked up from the datapad. The Doctor cleared his throat and continued. "This man was deployed seven times. To absolutely horrible places. And these aren't like those one or two day missions, these are he has boots on the ground for at least a year. His training surpassed anything your "Hunting" had." The Doctor said.
"Well it wasn't easy, he alone took 14 of my squad out. That isn't before his squad surrendered they together nearly took out a platoon and a half. Good thing I sent almost three platoons." The Middle Aged man said handing back the datapad. They continued walking to the labs. "The record said he was K.I.A.?" The Middle Aged man asked.
"That's right." The Doctor said, he already knew the next question about to come from the man. "He got to the labs D.O.A. and eight years ago when I was only first starting he was handed off to me. So the first order of getting the job done was to bring him back. He was put on artifical lifesupport systems after we brought him back. He's tough I'll give him that, he came in with a slug through the frontal lobe, but once we got his heart pumping again he stayed that way. Thankfully the slug went inbetween the two hemispheres of the brain." The Doctor was starting to get more excited as if he were reliving it right there or like if he was watching it though a holofeed.
"After we got that out of the way, I decided that we were going to start to reconstruct the brain. So that is were we started the Ghost Protocol. This was going to be the center of all the project's work. However all we needed to fit in his head there wasn't enough room. So what we did was close the distance of the spaces between Synapses. Which had a weird effect, the rest of the body's Synapses started naturally closing the space between themselves. This had effects like condensing his body mass, changing the very structure of his D.N.A..."
"Changing the structure of the D.N.A.?" The Middle Aged man asked.
"Yes, we'll get to that in a minute." The Doctor dismissed. He began talking to himself to see where he left off. "Involuntary muscle reflexes became quicker and not to an immesurable time, quite the time difference. After this we started to create an infastructure in the man, nodes if you will. These nodes were put in places like joints, organs, muscles, tendons, ligiments. Pretty much everything. And at first it was just one for each group, but his body started recreating them. It wasn't soon after I found out why. His nervous system, both parasympathetic and sympathetic, were becoming one with the nodes and the brain implants. This had it's effects too like his healing process it's almost rival that of a Jedi's if he was in mediatation, or at least it is now." The Doctor said as they arrived at a lab door that opened without a touch.
"What do you mean "at least it is now."" Asked the Middle Aged man. The Doctor sighed.
"He is being cryogenicly frozen, and he is in a chemically induced coma. Who knows what will happen once we let him have his brain activity back. However we do know that he is probably ten times stronger than he was before his death." The Doctor said before walking into the lab. The Middle Aged man followed him into the lab.
The lab was a bright white. Typical of surgeons rooms or exam rooms. In the center of the room was a table standing on it's edge at a 45 degree angle with Keikodi laying on it. He has straps around his wrist, hips, and ankles. The only thing he was wearing was a white boxer briefs. Around him still studying him was a group of scientists and doctors below him all looking up. They were a mixture of sexes, species, and orgins.
The Doctor picked up a large hammer with a wooden handle. He was leaning to compenstate to deal with the weight.
"Move." He commanded the group around the base of Keikodi. The moved and quickly. The Doctor swung the hammer right into the stomach of Keikodi. However it hit so hard that it broke the handle and the end of the hammer flew off. Blood was involuntarly coughed up.
"What are you doing?!" Yelled the Middle Aged man, and the Doctor dismissed it with holding up his hand then pointing to the spot where the hammer hit. It was already bruising, but then as fast as it came about it was nearly gone.
"Marvelous." The Doctor said in admiration looking up at the motionless man. "Come here." The Doctor said tossing the hammers handle he was holding off into a corner. He walked over to a computer that had a series of files on the desktop. The Doctor navigated though it with speed. He opened one of the files and a feed came up. It was a Quadra-helix.
"What's this?" The Middle Aged man asked. The Doctor smiled because he knew that he knew.
"It's his D.N.A.." He opened up another folder and a double helix came up. "This is a regular humans. Most people have a double helix with 23 chromosones. He has Quadra-helix with 154. Pretty much all it is, is that it's reinforced so that healing can go on quicker. When humans heal the double helix has to break apart then grow back asexually. Therefore making it slower. Theorhetically he should heal only quicker than humans by four, but he won't ever get sick. The common cold to him would be the plegue to us. However when we bring him out of his coma and he gets his brainpower back for the first time in nearing eight years all that could change." The Doctor reported.
"So what are we waiting for?" The Middle Aged man asked.
"You." The Doctor said while calling in extra security.
"Why do we need them?" The Middle Aged man asked.
"Well last thing that he could remember was being in conflict. He won't exactly know that he was dead. When you are shot in the head it's like the light switches just go out. If you do come back you'll remember the last thing you were doing. And I don't know about you, but we spent eight years on us making him your perfect little Corprate weapon. He was already well enough equiped to take us on before. I don't really want to see what he is capable of now." The Middle Age man nodded. Once a few security guards entered the room the Doctor looked at the man to see if he was ready. He nodded back. The Doctor started flipping switches. All the other in the group studying him before were all in the room eager to see what was about to happen.
The machine injecting the chemical keeping him in a coma retracted and backed away from Keikodi. They watched the next few seconds in anxiety. A dark blue light ran from Keikodi's scar in his forehead to down into his chest. A deep breath was taken so suddenly that one of the group of doctors jumped. The security team raised their weapons at Keikodi. Beeps, ringing, and alarms were going off. It was the medical life monitering equipment. Keikodi's eyes shot open and he was scaning the room. His muscles were flexed, his heart rate elevated, along with his blood pressure and his respriations. Keikodi tried moving side to side with his upper half after he say the security team pointing their weapons at him. He still didn't realize where he was. The Middle Aged man realized what was going on, walked over to the security team putting his hand on the weapon he lowered it. The man walked over to Keikodi he pushed a button and released his retraints. Keikodi slid to the floor where he caught himself. His legs were for lack of a better term asleep.
"I'm CEO Tarion Kennison of SynCorp." He said pointing to the logo on the wall behind him before extenting his hand. Keikodi looked around the man to see the logo. He recognized it. He picked the man up by the throat with his right hand.
"You're the ones who attacked me on my leave with my squad. Where are they?" He asked as he raised him off the ground. One of the security guards released his weapon and let the slig catch it before grabbing Keikodi's wrist trying to free his grib on the man. Keikodi nor Mr. Kennison moved. With Keikodi's free left hand he grabbed the guard by the back of the neck and tossed him into another one of the security guards knocking both them to the ground. Keikodi dropped Mr. Kennison and went for the third who was rasing his weapon at Keikodi. Keikodi grabbed it by the railguard and yanked it right out of the guards hands and tossed it behind him. The guard completly shocked at what happened relied on his training he went for his pistol, Keikodi grabbed the fist that was on the weapon still in it holster and jerked it up breaking his forearm. Both the bones in his forearm broke through the skin. The guard screamed in pain. The other two guards were just getting off each other. Keikodi took the pistol and shot the two gaurds in the head at point blank. A bit of blood came back on Keikodi who was still holding up the guard who dropped his weight and was holding his forearm with his good arm. Keikodi finished him off too then tossed him aside.
Mr. Kennison was still on the ground gasping for air.
"STOP!" The Doctor yelled. Keikodi turned to size him up. "This isn't nessasary. It's understandable you want revenge, but let him explain." The Doctor handed Keikodi a datapad with all the work they had done on him and what happened. "You should be thanking him." The Doctor said.
"Where is my squad?" Keikodi asked simply. The Doctor shugged and pointed to the datapad it had everything on it. Keikodi was holding it with his free and and nagivating though the touch screen with his finger that was in the trigger weild.
Squad Status: Escaped.
"Who's thingy is this?" Keikodi shook it in the air to get the point across. The Doctor pointed to the weezing Mr. Kennison. "So this has everything that SynCorp has to offer?"
"Yes!" Mr. Kennison choked out. Keikodi turned around to face him and executed him with one shot. Besides all the scientists who were studying the unconcious Keikodi only the Doctor was left in this room. Keikodi raised his weapon at the Doc. The Doc didn't react the way Keikodi expected him to, he went for a weapon in his belt line in the small of his back. Keikodi put four shots center mass before he could draw it. The Doc just fell over backwards. Keikodi looked around the few scientist that were there all were on a knee with their hands protecting their head. Keikodi executed them as he walked out of the room. In the hallways red siren lights were going off.
"Security Breach. Security Breach." Said and automated voice. A Security guard came around the corner running and Keikodi put two center mass. The guard fell mid step and slid over to Keikodi's feet leaving two blood streaks behind him. Keikodi still had the datapad. He made his way to the armory before leaving.
"Close the door!" One of the guards yelled before using both hands to push the door closed. Keikodi kicked the door like he was breaching it and the door flew open. He entered the room and put a shot in both the armorer's head before they could recover. There was one in the seat watching the security cams that had his hands up. One to the head. Keikodi's face wasn't even registering the emotion, and neither was he. Keikodi rolled the guard out of the chair before sitting in the chair and studying the layout. He now knew the way out. A guard ran into the room asking if the room had been compromised. He button hooked the door and ran straight into Keikodi. Kodi with and open palm grabbed the side of his head and slammed in into the wall. Keikodi could hear something break, most likely his neck. He dropped the man and he slid to the floor.
Keikodi grabbed a pair of black cargo pants, boots that he tucked the pants into then bloused them. He grabbed a black shirt and put it on. Before leaving he saw a coat and grabbed it. He put it on, it fell to right around his ankles he pulled up the hood so it covered his eyes. He was about to walk out when he smiled to himself turned grabbed the datapad off the security desk then continued on his path. Keikodi made his way to the hanger. He killed everyone that he saw. Security guards, civilians, doctors, a mail courier, it didn't matter to him. He grabbed a gunship started to take off. He turned and began to open fire on the building. They were on Coruscant. Keikodi was aiming at the base to collapse the building. When the building began to fall Keikodi left the planet. He set his way for Hutta "The Smuggler's moon." He was on his own now. Or at least for now.
//end record



//Republic database:
..... Start transmittion.

NAME: O'Mealey Eisele
FACTION: Unnamed. Goes by the codename "Patriots".
RANK: Leader.
SPECIES: Human. Genetically altered.
AGE: 35
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'1" without boots. 6'3" with boots.
WEIGHT: 190
EYES: Light blue.
HAIR: Long grown out blonde hair. Shaved on the sides, top slicked back to the right. Part on the left side over the left eye.
SKIN: White.
CREDITS: Unknown.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Tattoo on left shoulder blade. Scar over left eye where he was shot. Scar spider webs out from there 1 inch. A "Blue light" that runs over the body in constant motion.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Negative.

STRENGTH: Bioengineering to have near super human strength. 9/10
DEXTERITY: Eisele practices freerunning and stalking from the former life in the SEAL teams. 7/10
CONSTITUTION: Bioengineering restructured for faster cell growth. Heals faster than normal. 7/10
INTELLIGENCE: Bioengineering has replaced parts of the missing brain with nanocomputers, nodes, and artifical synapses. 8/10
WISDOM: The best wisdom Eisele has is hindsight. 5/10
CHARISMA: After being labelled a terrorist Eisele learned how to win people over on his side.

SKILLS and SCHOOLS:
Schools: Competative Shooting Team, Special Forces Assassement and Selection, Survival Escape Resistance and Evasion school (Up to tier 4.), SEa Air Land Assassement and Selection, Special Forces, SEAL Qualification Course, Sniper School, SEAL combiatives course(Hand-to-Hand training), Explosives Ordance Disposal training, Improvised Explosives Course, Warrior's Leader Course, Pathfinder School, Airborne, HALO, Space Combat Applications Course, was also going to school for a double major in Chemistry and Biology.

Skills: Faster healing, near super human strength, self taught hacking.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: Phyiscally only matched by force users, faster healing, weapons handling unmatched, stealthy.
Weaknesses: Suspected EMPs haven't had a field test. Possibly insane. Lightsabers. Has a very high heat signture if being looking at through thermals.
APPEARANCE(LAST APPEARANCE):
Appears to be the age of mid twenties. Thin pointed nose, bridge of the nose was broken once and it is very obvious. Five O'clock shadow goes halfway up his cheeks. A "Blue light" that remains in constant motion. Very rarely goes over the face.
Boots with dark cargo pants tucked into them. A riggers belt with a pistol holster on the left side. Grey thermal shirt worn under a trench coat that stops at his ankles and has a hood. Wears a shegmah around the neck and pulls it up before engaging in contact.

GEAR(USUAL M.O.):Carries two pistols. One on the hip, the other in a holster holster. Carries a curved blade on the shoulder holster aswell. Depending on the mission usually carries a rifle. Carries a backpack with survival gear and extra ammo.

SHIP:
No ships known on record. None suspected.

ALLIES:
Former members of his squad.

PERSONALITY:
The first word out of everyones mouth who isn't directly in contact with Eisele is insane. Complete disreguard for any forms of life. Eisele has no problem in hunting out problems within his own organization. Plenty of agents have tried to infiltrate it, however they were soon terminated due to the lack of total loyality that they didn't give to him. The orgin of this condition is still unknown. In combat Eisele has been known to be completely ruthless and unforgiving. Eisele is very paranoid and doesn't trust anyone. Approach with caution.

BIOGRAPHY:
Alias: Keikodi.
//Accessing...
/Access Denied. Improper Security Clearance. Top Secret clearance needed.
Known about O'Mealey Eisele:
Many attacks on the Republic have been organized from Eisele. Including the abduction of his former squadmates who are suspected K.I.A. After the destruction of the SynCorp tower soon after state secrets and SynCorp projects were sold to Czerka Corperations. Total amount of the price is still unknown. Eisele later contributed to the destruction of SynCorp. Suspected to have played a part in the assassinations of the heads of SynCorp. Eisele has suspected to inflitrate most organizations of the Republic such as the Republic Secret Service, Republic Intelligence Service, Republic Military. Has been known to contact with both Republic and Empiral forces.

//End Transmittion...
 

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Very nicely done but his skills seem op...there is nothing wrong with having a character that his super strong and fast, but you have to balance him somehow. (Read my Vermin profile for an example.)
 
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