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Wait, Sil is dead? Dude, no worries, Faresha will just use that rage to force crush the shit outta Jaleer's neck when she gets the chance. If she gets the chance. She'll avenge him, nonetheless
 

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Well, the story aspect is her lust for vengeance. That, unfortunately, leads to PvP.
 

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because I was stopped from ever getting into Carthage's Cell, from the second post I was fighting a losing battle, did my best to get Jaleer away from me long enough to try and get Carthage out but against a gun and grenade toting Jedi with no weapons It was inevitable, wasn't even allowed to get an NPC's weapon but hey ho that's the Jedi

It's ok @Ecclessey it's not your fault, it's just opened my eyes to the way the Jedi Play

I've learnt now and won't make the same mistake again

I mean, I get that you would be upset. Jedi Play though? The fact that we even let you out of your cell or didn't kill you on the battlefield before giving you more RP goes above most treatment you will get from anyone. Ever.

They approached it from a PvP perspective while I set up the mission for a collaborative story. I'm sorry @Necris, but your character's death is my fault. You should've at least had Carthage in there to help against a Jedi that was too well armed for boring guard duty, but I got carried away writing the opening post and suggested you disguised yourself as Benvenu7's PC, unknowingly setting up your ruse to fail.

I'll try and make it up to you with your SBZ character.

PVP and Story go hand in hand. Sometimes dying is part of the story.
 

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Well said, Bauren. Well, said better than I managed to.
 

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Just so everyone is clear, the escape thread was about a Sith trying to get out of a prison for Sith's, while a invasion of the prison is happening, for the purpose to invade the Jedi in that sector.

This seems like the story will revolve around violence, and fighting which would mean the story collaborative will go around PVP. We did work on a story which cause the story that we worked together just so happen to have a Sith die.

It was a great story in the end and hopefully we can continue to make more stories later.

@Necris I will be making one more post to rap up the thread and give your character a proper goodbye.
 

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Yup! Although it'll be after this round ends with Redneck.

Edit: Ral and Arclight, although I don't think they'll actually be joining us.

Hey yo, does that mean I'm supposed to be up right now? I've kinda been waiting around for ral or arclight to post, since I was under the impression they were part of our thread. If not, I'd be cool to get a post up tomorrow for sure.

@Necris - *hugs* I will say no more because I have learned not to voice my opinions when Jedi and PvP are involved. It always ends up in pages long arguments. :P
 

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I will say no more because I have learned not to voice my opinions when Jedi and PvP are involved. It always ends up in pages long arguments.

Snide comments like this are not a good way to avoid such things, just for future reference. =P
 

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Hey yo, does that mean I'm supposed to be up right now? I've kinda been waiting around for ral or arclight to post, since I was under the impression they were part of our thread. If not, I'd be cool to get a post up tomorrow for sure.

@Necris - *hugs* I will say no more because I have learned not to voice my opinions when Jedi and PvP are involved. It always ends up in pages long arguments. :p
Working on a post now. Sorry for the delay on my end, rough week.
 

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Hey yo, does that mean I'm supposed to be up right now? I've kinda been waiting around for ral or arclight to post, since I was under the impression they were part of our thread. If not, I'd be cool to get a post up tomorrow for sure.
Yup, it's your turn.

Edit: I believe when it is 5ish PM tomorrow it will be my turn because that is when Phantom edited his post. So FYI you have a day left @RedneckLoves.
 
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Just so everyone is clear, the escape thread was about a Sith trying to get out of a prison for Sith's, while a invasion of the prison is happening, for the purpose to invade the Jedi in that sector.
FYI, your character wouldn't know any of those things. Besides, ofcourse Necris' escape attempt. I believe Necris hinted in your thread at an increased dark sider presence, but the Invasion is a secret to all involved, including the Sith participants. I don't fault you, and in the end, no one is upset, not even Necris, about his character dying. While writing the opening post I underestimated the Jedi's willingness this timeline to go for a kill. For example, and I hope you don't feel attacked here, but Jaleer's personality is based around protecting any life, even if saving the life of a foe means he has to sacrifice himself, and while you incorporate that in dialogue, your first action in the thread was a quick draw firing bolts at Necris' torso. Everything we write is a story, whether it's good, bad or horrid, and I suppose I'm still stuck imagining Jedi from the Clone Wars or the prequels and put Necris up in a setting that he, ultimately, was destined to fail in.

It all seems a paradox to me, personally, but it's something I, especially as mission-making AFL, should accept and move on from. So if I seemed upset about the thread and how Carthage is still imprisoned, it's not because 'the Jedi are fiends, too PvP-focused and just horrible people' but because I made an error as AFL and it cost someone his character.

Now. Let's see if I can have my revenge by killing all Jedi in my own thread.
 
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@Ecclessey my first post was firing stun bolts :p

So I would say I stuck true to the personality. As he didn't have anything with him to kill other than his lightsaber.

If you read it carefully every shot were stun bolts.
 

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Yup, it's your turn.

Edit: I believe when it is 5ish PM tomorrow it will be my turn because that is when Phantom edited his post. So FYI you have a day left @RedneckLoves.

Since Ral and Arclight are both working on posts, I believe I do not only have one more day. The only reason I was waiting in the first place was so they would have a chance to enter the thread, since neither has even entered it yet. So it's not even my turn, therefore I would appreciate you not posting again and auto hitting me for that reason.

I have little time this weekend to post, but if others besides just Reya believe that I'm on a short time limit I can try to pump out a post tonight. But only if it's required of me.
 

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@Ecclessey my first post was firing stun bolts :p

So I would say I stuck true to the personality. As he didn't have anything with him to kill other than his lightsaber.

If you read it carefully every shot were stun bolts.

It's done now it doesn't matter
 

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Since Ral and Arclight are both working on posts, I believe I do not only have one more day. The only reason I was waiting in the first place was so they would
have a chance to enter the thread, since neither has even entered it yet. So it's not even my turn, therefore I would appreciate you not posting again and auto hitting me for that reason.

I have little time this weekend to post, but if others besides just Reya believe that I'm on a short time limit I can try to pump out a post tonight. But only if it's required of me.

Basically you now have 48 hours from the time of @Ral s post.
 

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@Maxx

You're up in the Generator thread, as your fellow Sith has not posted in 48 hours.
 

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Alright, I've posted.
 

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@Pureblood-Sin

Hey, you missed your turn last round. You can't just ignore the auto-hits that came from last round. Plus, Vera is inside the shedhouse. You posted as if she's outside.
 
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