Orion is scrapped will mods please delete

[ShadowWalker]

Character project "Orion" is now hereby scrapped of all major components please will the moderators of this forum terminate this thread.

 

[Green Ranger]

Moved to Unapproved Technology Profiles.

 

[ShadowWalker]

Oh dammit, I didn't realize I did that. My bad.

 

[ShadowWalker]

Second revisions complete and ready for review.

 

[Lycanthorph]

How long can the suit function without recharging the power cells with " biological fuel " ?

 

[ShadowWalker]

Thank you for bringing up that point, and it varies. With the serum that the Sith would produce to help the cyborg's systems cope with said draw, it would last about two weeks with constant exertion and fighting from the suit, that being said, that means that it would have to be constantly going at maximum power output to use up that energy, however... there is a downside. When the only thing that the operator has to work with, is "biological fuel" (ie whatever biological entity he can find that contains circulatory fluid, or blood) with a full and proper harvest it will last for a day without massive exertion, but in a combat situation, six hours. Will be added into the suit's notes shortly.

 

[ShadowWalker]

And now information has been officially added.

 

[Cassanova]

Has this been looked over by Rom or Kiro? As two of the most tech-minded folk in the NSI (New Sith Imperium) Leadership, their approval will also be required on this, as you are claiming it was produced by the NSI.

 

[Kiro]

The armor is designed to supplement Jame's natural stealth abilities,

Considering he's basically a robot at this point, what 'natural' stealth abilities? It's all the cybernetics.

And I'm tempted to outright disallow any statement saying the Imperium's made this, because it's a carbon copy and trying to shooe-horn in stuff from a videogame you like, especially when combined with the sword you already tried to make... but I'll give this my standard review at any rate.

First off, more space in the Description. It makes reading difficult, and finding any relative information even more so.

They also can be used offensively, allowing James to send a quick jab into the air in front of him to create a shock wave similar to a force push.

No. Not without alot more explanation on how this works. And regardless of that, it would be a huge drain on his power, which brings me to a second point...

The "serum".

The auto repair function of his suit runs off of an extremely expensive serum that is difficult to produce, which is why he doesn't carry any around with him except for a small vial stored inside the left shoulder.

Auto-repairing armour will have to go. Yes, Vencu and Jiang have approved armour with laminanium (or however it's spelled), that reforms over damaged areas, but only when introduced to heat, and the overall strenght of the entire armour is weakened. Having a magical compound that'll both function as a fuel cell and a magical healing potion just won't get approved by neither Boli, Jiang, or Vencu. It's just way too overpowered, especially for a Cyborg.

The only replacement that allows for it to run, albeit much less efficiently, is the blood of organics, using it to recharge his cyborg fuel cells, which can then power the auto repair function. This is also one of the major weaknesses of the armor, as the fuel cells which power the armor, and the cyborg, have a huge power draw, thus draining the cells much more quickly, making him have to either use the serum to replenish the cells so he can stay alive for about a week, or he can "feed" off of biologicals by harvesting their blood with several absorption points located in his hands and forearms.

A vampire cyborg... who'd have thought. On a more serious note, this most likely won't get approved either, simply due to the above statements of the "serum". And because it simply doesn't make any kind of logical sense that I, in my insane mind, can think of. Why does blood work as a functional substitute for the serum? Why would they even turn James into a cyborg WITHOUT blood if blood could be used to power his systems? Why not strap it onto him and have it drain his blood that way (which is what the Sith would have done), instead of chopping off his limbs and inserting an artificial limb that requires a magic potion to work? Wasteful and inefficient.

A single ten fluid ounce vial of serum will allow for the suit to run for a week at maximum power output, and even longer if the operator stays incognito. However with only being able to feed off of the blood of other biologicals around them, the operator and armor system will only be able to operate for a full day between the feedings, and if combat enters into the equation, will reduce the time to six hours at maximum power draw.

Considering the vast amount of systems, upgrades, and implants in this system, a ten ounce fluid vial (by the way, use the metric system as is clearly indicated several places, I as a European have no idea how much "ten ounces" is in fluids or even grams), but it sounds like a ludicrous amount to run this kinda heavy combat cyborg on in combat. I'd be honestly surprised if he could last a single hour at maximum combat output, and even that's generous, as combat usually lasts a few seconds, and combat would allow him to refuel anyway, right?

In short, this does not have my approval as a member of the Sith, nor my approval as a techie, and I seriously doubt it'd be approved by any of our admins.

 

[ShadowWalker]

And there goes the other one. Project Orion is hereby scrapped.

 

[Jiang Winters]

Archived.