Pein Hyjik

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Sosoki Hyjik
"I'll bring pain upon the weak."
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Name
Pein Hyjik, Formerly Sosoki Hyjik
Age
19
Faction
Sith Brotherhood
Rank
Sith Warrior
Gender
Female
Species
Human
Homeworld
Nar Shaddaa
Force Sensitive
Yes, trained
Appearance
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Casual Attire
Height: 5'2 Short?
Weight: 179 lbs
Gear
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Biography
Sosoki was born into a family and life of luxury and riches, living in a penthouse which overlooked the beautiful city of Nar Shaddaa. Her father was a Senate, and was the one who kept the family's name up, and made sure the family's name was never tarnished. As a young child, Sosoki was given mostly everything she wanted, she was taught at home by her loving mother, who stayed at home and made sure the place was looking clean and nice. Sosoki's father had several ties to the Sith, which gave him a certain idea. Her father decided to send his daughter to the Sith academy on Korriban, at age 11, as Sosoki was a force sensitive. So the journey to Korriban began, as Sosoki flew across space in a ship owned by his partner, Kol' Lo.

Sosoki didn't say anything the whole ride, she just sat in the back of the ship, lifting up things on the floor of the ship using the force. Upon landing on Korriban, Kol' Lo gave Sosoki a holocom, which suddenly projected a hologram of her father speaking, he says, "My dear Soso, i wish you the best of luck as you train under a specific mentor i picked for you, Inquisitor Yule, do as he says, and you're bound to become a great Sith." The hologram disappeared, and Sosoki stuffed the holocom in her pocket. "Soso, what a lame name." Sosoki hated the nickname, but learned to deal with it. Sosoki made her way up the academy steps, there a middle aged man stood at the entrance to the academy, he told Sosoki he was Inquisitor Yule, and that he would train Sosoki in the ways of the Sith.

Sosoki spent quite a while at the academy, practicing the force, excelling quickly in Inquisitor Yule's lessons. Sosoki became obsessed with lightning techniques as she trained, and used them almost as an expert as years went by. Sosoki's power in the force was astounding, yet Inquisitor Yule found flaws in her power. At the age of 14, Inquisitor Yule gave Sosoki the task of travelling to an ancient tomb, where a sith lord was buried, Sosoki's task was to take the lightsaber of the Sith lord, and to bring it back to Inquisitor Yule. Sosoki travelled to the tomb in her new robes, given to her by Inquisitor Yule. Upon entering the tomb, she was met by a strange voice, saying, "Come with me, and i will show you the way."

Sosoki followed in the direction of the voice, wondering where this was headed. Sosoki stopped at a large doorway, which was covered in scratch marks, and cobwebs. As the door was too heavy for her to open, she used the force and pushed the heavy door open. Sosoki walked down a long hallway, lit by torches which were spread out every few meters or so. Once Sosoki exited the dimly lit hallway, she came face to face with a large statue of a chained person weeping in sorrow. Sosoki waited, and then heard something beside her open, it was a passage way.

Sosoki followed the passage, into a tomb. In the center of the room was a coffin of some sort, Sosoki lifted the top, looking inside there was a skeleton covered in cobwebs. Resting in its hands, was a lightsaber, Sosoki fearlessly grabbed the saber, and felt the power of the dark force flow through her for a single moment. Sosoki felt great, and also felt great for completing her task.

After returning to the academy, she entered Inquisitor Yule's chambers. "So, you got the lightsaber from the tomb? Good, good, now let me examine it." Sosoki handed over the saber. "Well, as an award for completing my task, this lightsaber is now yours." Inquisitor Yule tossed the lightsaber to Sosoki, who grinned faintly, but on the inside was so very excited. She hooked the saber onto her belt, and exited Inquisitor Yule's chambers. 4 years after Sosoki's training with Inquisitor Yule, which was successful, Sosoki was given the title of Sith, along with new gear and armor. Sosoki now travels the galaxy, executing missions assigned by the Sith Empire. Sosoki now goes by the name Pein, which was given to her by the voice in the tomb for reasons which are unknown, but she likes the name, and decided to go by it.
Personality
Pein was never really a social person, she was a dark and mysterious figure, even though she was given pretty much everything she wanted by her father, she still didn't like it, and was always nasty about it. She is known for being merciless, striking down her enemies with no care in the world for what they have to say. Pein though mostly a sarcastic and rude person, also was a kind girl, though it was rare when she was kind to others, as she is shrouded in darkness and despair. Pein also means Pain, which she likes about her new name, because of her brutal characteristic, she loves to make people suffer slowly until they die. Pein is known mostly for her cockiness, thinking she can do everything without fail, also thinking that shes higher than everybody else because of her family name. Other than these personality traits, Pein is more or less a girl you wouldn't want to piss off.
Skills
Intelligence XXXXXXXXXX A wise young girl, who can overcome challenges easily.
Medical Knowledge XXXXXXXXXX Able to heal minor wounds, nothing large.
Piloting XXXXXXXXXX A good pilot, with expert piloting skills, with some flaws.
Combat XXXXXXXXXX Martial Arts is where most of her combat skills are from.
Swordsmanship XXXXXXXXXX She can handle light weapons with expertise, yet others are difficult.
Force Push XXXXXXXXXX Able to push heavy and large objects easily, yet this skill has its flaws.
Force Lift XXXXXXXXXX Able to lift things ranging from light to heavy, yet still wastes energy when using this technique.
Force Choke XXXXXXXXXX One of her favorite techniques, she can use this technique both skillfully, and brutally.
Force Leap XXXXXXXXXX Uses this technique to jump to higher places, yet fails a lot of the time.
Lightning Chain XXXXXXXXXX Another one of her brutal torture techniques, which she favorites out of them all.
Force Lightning XXXXXXXXXX In all, she can use most of her learned techniques with skill, yet some she lacks skill in.
Lightsaber Proficiency XXXXXXXXXX She has mastred several techniques, and can perform them with skill, using them to brutally end her foes.
Ships
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CN-130g Freighter
A freighter she picked up from her father's collection.
Threads
N/A
Relationships
Inquisitor Yule - Her Sith mentor who trained her in becoming the Sith she is today.
Her Father - The man who provided for her, and sent her on her way to becoming a Sith.
The Voice - This strange voice has stuck with her ever since she entered the tomb, and gave her power.
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I feel like your character is kind of interesting, but her backstory could probably use some expanding. I think further exploring why her personality is the way it is would be a nice touch,, as well as elaborating on the renaming to Pein.

Things of note in the biography section, Darth is a title only held by Dark Council members and the sith higher up in the ranks from there and as far as new canon is concerned sith ghosts aren't a thing that exist. Just as an example for Darth titles Darth Reign and Darth Trepidus are Dark Council members, Darth Cain is the head of the council, Darth Malon is the emperor, etc. For sith force ghosts, nothing in the disney canon makes it seem like force ghost manifestation is an ability darksiders have access to, save for Darth Vader but even then that was Anakin not Vader.

Point is, only high ranking sith get to have the title of Sith Lord since it's not only a military rank but also part of the sith order. "Darth Reiki" wouldn't be able to exist as a darth, since it would be kind of impossible. You'd probably want to have the Reiki character turned into a regular sith marauder rather than a darth for the purposes of the biography since I'm assuming they would be a one-time NPC specific to the character profile.
 

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Darth Reiki is just for biography purposes, so Pein has someone to train under. And i got the force ghost from Swtor, if you know what i'm talking about. But i'll fix that, and the voice isn't necessarily a ghost, its just, there. And wouldn't it be weird to train under a normal low ranking sith? I mean, she has to train under somebody... And there are ancient sith lord tombs, i know that, but i will remove the ghost part. As long as i can keep my sith lord tomb part, i find that cool.
 

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Changed that little ghost part, and the personality, i hope maybe this makes you feel better?
 

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The tomb part is fine, but your going to need to nix the mentions of the Sith Lord. There have been a very limited number of Sith Lords in the time of the Empire, all of them PCs, so the character that you mentioned simply would not have existed—even as a background character.
 

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What Sith Lord? Darth Reiki or the tomb one?
 

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I changed the Sith Lord into the Inquisitor, who was mentioned when she was travelling into the tomb. As it isn't a Darth, it is now just an Inquisitor. Does that work better?
 
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