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Phoenix:




"Not All Who Wander Are Lost"


Name: Unknown

Alias: Phoenix

Age: Thirty Years Old

Height: Five Feet Five Inches

Weight: One Hundred and Thirty Five Pounds

Faction: The Jedi

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I witnessed it fall... Tython, once a symbol of hope, honour and justice in the galaxy and as it fell, I fell with it.

Millions of voices cried out in terror, the horrors unleashed by the Sith suddenly silencing them, and upon me a wound was left. A wound in the force itself.

The pain... too much to bare and the screams... too much to handle!
The lives of those on Tython were severed, and so too was my connection to the force.

I travelled across stars and into ruins, across skies that crackled with thunder and baron wastes torn asunder.

For all my effort I was rewarded. Like a phoenix I have risen from the ashes. The force flowing through me once more, a bond built more powerfully before, a bond built on pain, suffering and anguish not just mine, but of all those lost that day.

So now I carry them with me and it is for them I return.

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Armour: Phoenix's Exalted Armour

Phoenix's armour is a light and protective set up that marries up a perfect combination of manoeuvrability and defensive properties. Unlike many armours seen throughout the galaxy, Phoenix has chosen to do away with a helmet, choosing to rely on her senses rather than that of a heads up display.

From each of the shoulders is clipped a cape, that drapes down behind Phoenix and can be quickly released from her if it is getting in the way. The shoulders themselves are made of a combination of leather strapping, for comfort and mobility as well as phrik plates that rise up and cover the sides of Phoenix's neck.

The rest of the armour follows a similar pattern, with the plates being composed of durasteel and while the underside and the strapping are made of tough leather. Due to the build of the armour, it offers no more of a benefit that the "Modular Jedi Armour" seen to be worn by many Jedi of this era differing only in that the use of phrik is in the shoulder section of Phoenix's armour as opposed to the gauntlets.

In several sections of the armour, kyber crystals have been polished and fixed into the armour itself. They do however provide no additional protection other than adding to what is already an imposing armour aesthetic.


Primary Weapon: Lightsaber Gauntlets

Unlike the more standardised versions of the lightsaber gauntlet that some force sensitives use Phoenix's has a longer blade with a slightly more pronounced point. This due to the use of cracked kyber crystals making the blade unstable and giving it a noticeable crackle when ignited.

The gauntlets cover more of the forearm than other wrist mounted lightsabers and much like the rest of Phoenix's armour is a combination of leather and durateel plating. Similarly to others of this style the area that houses the lightsaber itself is protected.

Phoenix ignites the blade through hand motion, but the way the gauntlet is built nullifies all chances that the blade may contact her hand.


Secondary Weapon: Lightsaber Pike

A masterful practitioner of the lightsaber forms Niman and Juyo Phoenix has become renowned for her use of the Lightsaber Pike.

The weapon itself is beautifully hand crafted from phrik and the components that allow the hilt to extent are well hidden within the blade itself. Due to its design it can be used as both a shoto lightsaber, and in its extended form as Phoenix's preferred Lightsaber Pike.

The period from which the button is depressed to activate its extension, to the point that the blade is fully extended is roughly one second and once extended has a total length of 218 centimetres. (Including the blade length.)


Miscellaneous Information: Stats and Combat Overview

Strength:

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Certainly it can be said that Phoenix is not the strongest of fighters in the galaxy, however she is far from the weakest and often relies more on her ability to use of leverage to overpower or thrown opponents than her raw brute strength.

Dexterity:

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Nimble and lightning fast it is in this area that Phoenix excels and can attribute much of her natural combat skill from. Although she is slower slightly due the use of armour compared to that of her comrades who opt for robes, she had no problem matching there speed or even surpassing it thanks to her years training in her battle attire.


Stamina:

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Phoenix has just slightly above average combat stamina and this is attributed purely to the long hours of training she has put in. With her main combat asset being her speed, Phoenix aims to end fights quickly rather than prolong them.

Intelligence:

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Phoenix is neither overly smart, nor overly stupid and has what would be persevered galaxy wide as an average intelligent. He also posses no real technical know how, but has self taught herself how to craft armour so as she can repair hers if it gets broken.


Melee Combat:

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As a Jedi Knight she is, and has been trained well in the use of melee weaponry and is a master of both Niman and Juyo. Phoenix has taken her training in melee combat to the next level however and has studied numerous styles of martial arts. Although her love of martial arts and hand to hand combat in general is more of a hobby, she is adapt at it and can use what she has learnt to deadly effectiveness if required.

Marksmanship:

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Phoenix cares little for the use of ranged weaponry and has but a basic understanding of how a rifle and a pistol works. She can load, aim and fire however that is about it.


Ship: Ashla's Blade


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Phoenix's Roleplay:




"Welcome to My Roleplay Tracker"


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Hello everyone, I hope you have enjoyed the brief read that is my character Phoenix and I hope that you would like to set up some roleplays with me because of it.

If you would like to form a roleplay with me, please feel free to drop me a PM or even comment on the character sheet bellow.

Thank You!

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A Chance Encounter: In Progress

Point of the Spear: Complete

A Silent Dance: In Progress (PvP Thread)

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I love the format. Really beautiful and simplistic.

You may need to submit the ship to the tech profiles since it changes the ships physical abilities rather than just the aesthetics.

The armor is a little vague. Just how much protection does it provide? I.e. blaster hits on various pieces. It seems like it may be classified as medium given that it covers much of her body save for her head. Not to be nitpicky, I just don't want you to have any problems in a PvP.
 

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I love the format. Really beautiful and simplistic.

You may need to submit the ship to the tech profiles since it changes the ships physical abilities rather than just the aesthetics.

The armor is a little vague. Just how much protection does it provide? I.e. blaster hits on various pieces. It seems like it may be classified as medium given that it covers much of her body save for her head. Not to be nitpicky, I just don't want you to have any problems in a PvP.

Yeah, it's going to need a tech write-up as per this note due to the S-foil-like function.

But yeah. very nice profile!
 

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Glad that you like the profile and the character!

Thanks for your comments - For that reason a note to all those viewing this profile or who I may be role-playing with prior to the changes.

  • Ship is pending a tech profile and therefore pending approval. As such until this time it should be considered to have the same attributes as the ship linked, all that has changed is its aesthetic.
  • The armour should be considered generic, because that is all that the armour ever was going to be, however I will be updating its description for clarity on this point.
If anyone feels there is anything else, please feel free to let me know either here on this profile page, or via PM.
 
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Very flashy. I dig it.

  • Ship is pending a tech profile and therefore pending approval. As such until this time it should be considered to have the same attributes as the ship linked, all that has changed is its aesthetic.

On this though, I'm afraid you'll have to pick a different ship to base your reskin on for the time being. That fighter is intended as a highly advanced one-off design, procured at great expense for the personal use of the most powerful person in the galaxy- the Dark Lord of the Sith. Theres supposed to be nothing else like it out there, and nothing on par with it is likely to be approved without a significant amount of RP time and resources invested. We dont generally want to see a whole lot of unique tech submitted for single characters unless there's been some real work invested in it.
 
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Very flashy. I dig it.



On this though, I'm afraid you'll have to pick a different ship to base your reskin on for the time being. That fighter is intended as a highly advanced one-off design, procured at great expense for the personal use of the most powerful person in the galaxy- the Dark Lord of the Sith. Theres supposed to be nothing else like it out there, and nothing on par with it is likely to be approved without a significant amount of RP time and resources invested. We dont generally want to see a whole lot of unique tech submitted for single characters unless there's been some real work invested in it.

That is what I assumed when I initially questioned the re skin. What I will do is tweak mine with the help of some others prior to its submission to minimize the ball ache at your end having a long winded Re-review process!

Thank you for the reply!
 

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Really enjoyed reading this profile. Awesome work.
 
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