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Carden Mannux

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OOC: Boli hasn't revealed himself yet, so how could you possibly jump behind him?
 

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OCC: sorry, forgot. fixed it. ya can post now.
 

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OOC: Sorry, I realized I missed a bunch of posts and deleted mine because it wasn't in chronological order. Then I saw Grim's post, and now I feel all bad about it n' stuff. Sorry.
 

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Just post something, and i'll delete my post and respond to it.
 

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A ripple in the Force beckoned him, and so he made his way forth towards the main audience chambers and witnessed what was truly a sorry sight: one of his men, a naval commander, had the nerve to insult Carden Mannux, one of the most feared Dark Lords of the time, and then to order his men to open fire on him. Carden, however, was needed. He could use him in his latest gambit.

“Soldiers, lower your weapons.”

At once, the men did as their Dark Lord told them. Provin stepped up beside the man formerly known as Darth Lettow and nodded his head, almost showing but a mere ounce of respect for him. He motioned towards the hilt of Mannux’s lightsaber, a faint yet somewhat noticeable smile etched across his face.

“Mannux, execute this traitor.”
 

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*After easily dodging the blasts lobbed towards him, Carden watched as the Dark Lord motioned for his blade, though the former Dark Lord shook his head in disagreement. Instead, he decided to use the power of the mind shard, a powerful offensive form of telepathy. Drinking the pool of the Dark Side around him, he unleashed its power into the mind of the foolish Sith commander. He drove his daggers of psychic energy into the commander’s mind. As he increased his power, the victim’s neural pathways began to become disrupted. Intense pains overcame him until he could literally feel nothing else. In a matter of moments, it would kill him.*
 

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Khavaal took this opportunity to step forward, completely disregarding Provin, though his guard was still nevertheless up. Without warning, his hands reached out as a wave of kinetic energy coursed forth, the Force Wave powerful enough to knock everyone within the radius over, or at least break their concentration.

"Oho...Mannux, you have fallen far to be obeying the command of this one. I thought you were better than this. Apparently not. Apparently, you are as much a slave to the Sith as any of the other scum that resides in these halls."
 

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Demonous kneeled as Darth Provin entered, and carefully watched Commander Janson with a hint of a smile. He then tried to search the former Dark Lord's mind for hints on how this power might work, but realized that his abilities were somehow blocked.
 

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So Mannux wont lop off this man's head and at least give him some small dignity with his blade, then He will have to do it. Stepping around that beast that used to be a threat to Provin's power, He ignited one of the blades he was carrying on his belt, more specifically Nexus' blade, as it seemed fitting for this moment. Walking up to the man now withering on the ground from the mental attack, he held the blade pointing towards the ground, next to his head.

"Disgusting" was all Provin said as he swung with his blade, creating a decapitation arc, clearly with the intent of killing the man that was once one of his commanders. Not anymore however. Now we have more important manners to attend to.
 

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OOC: Daks probably needs to respond to my edited post, too.
 

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OOC: This thread is starting to get ridiculous. I knew I should have made it closed.
 

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OOC: There's just been a couple of edits that have messed people over. B'sides, you do too many closed threads.
 

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OOC: I don't criticize your way of RPing, so don't criticize mine. Besides, my intention for this thread was just to talk to Dakar.
 

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OOC: lol, what? When did I? Ah, forget it. Have your bloody thread to yourself then.

*Khavaal goes bye bye because of cranky-bac. Toodles!*
 

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OOC: I never said leave the thread. I simply said that I thought it was getting a bit ridiculous with Sith commanders wanting to blow up the galaxy and big bad monsters Force pushing everyone in a room. And, when I said the criticism thing, I referred to "you do too many closed threads."
 

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OOC: It wasn't criticism in the least, it was a simple fact. If you want to take it as an insult, then you obviously see something wrong with having too many closed threads. You gotta realize, though, that an open thread rarely runs to a set script. People interfere, as we've seen here today.
 
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