Primula 1st

[anzat17]

Plot Outline Submission Template:
1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Primula Peyvand is going to expand her planets and her estates defenses by getting soldiers, pilots, weapons, armor, and fighters.
2. What other players will be a part of this?
Anzat17 Nefieslab
3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Onderon, Taanab, Parmarthe
4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Thread 1: Primula meets with Allard Keever to get herself soldiers and contacts for pilots.
Thread 2: Primula meets with leaders of the pilots guild to contract a fighter escort for herself as well as patrol around her planet and estate.
Thread 3: Primula goes to Onderon to inspect the armor she bought and is attacked by pirates. The pirates are warded off and Primula finds herself questioning battles and war for the first time.
Thread 4: Primula attends a weapons tradeshow to purchase weapons for her soldiers.
[In Progress]
5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
To get my senator some basic ways of protecting herself.
6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No

 

[Malon]

Hi @anzat17! I just noticed that you've got this plot and second one just like it. Was that intentional? Did you want to merge the two?

Also, upon reading the content of both, it seems like you're trying to build up the defenses of Tanaab, which is a Republic world. I think, if that's the case, that these might work better as Faction plots. What do you think?

 

[anzat17]

Yes, I hadn't thought of that. You just want me to put the 5 un completed threads in this thread?

And yes, I trust your judgement so yes I can move it to faction instead.

 

[Malon]

Yes, please! If you would put the completed list in a plot submission for Faction Plots, I can give it a look over :) Thank you!