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  • What is going to happen in your plot?
    • Two rebels will assist the people of Ryloth by providing supplies and protection to a desperate settlement as well as freeing its members from slave traders.
  • What other players will be a part of this?

    @ModernMarvel and @Bran and two other characters for stage 2 and 3.
  • Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
    • Space around Ryloth
    • Ruthariin Village on Ryloth
    • Trandoshan encampment
  • Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
    • Aellyn @ModernMarvel and Valerie @Bran will run a supply relief mission to a settlement on Ryloth that recently suffered from a pirate raid. They will pose as simple disaster relief members.
    • After arriving, they realise that the village in its weakened state was attacked by trandoshan slave traders that had kidnapped several women and children from the settlement.
    • Valerie and Aellyn send out an encrypted message calling for backup to rebels.
    • The now four rebels split into 2 groups of 2. The one group remains within the settlement to protect it from further raids and provide relief to the injured people and the other group attempts a rescue mission in order to free the captive citizens.
  • What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
    • They will harbour goodwill with the people of Ryloth as well as form a potential rebel staging ground on the planet.
  • Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
    • The second 2 threads will be run by dice rather than DM.
This is my first submitted plot so if anything is out of place I'd appreciate it if you would let me know.
 
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  • What is going to happen in your plot?
    • Two rebels will assist the people of Ryloth by providing supplies to a desperate settlement as well as freeing its members from slave traders.
  • What other players will be a part of this?

    @ModernMarvel and @Bran and two other characters for stage 2.
  • Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
    • Space around Ryloth
    • Ruthariin Village on Ryloth
    • Trandoshan encampment
  • Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
    • Aellyn @ModernMarvel and Valerie @Bran will run a supply relief mission to a settlement on Ryloth that recently suffered from a mandalorian raid. They will pose as simple disaster relief members.
    • After arriving, they realise that the village in its weakened state was attacked by trandoshan slave traders that had kidnapped several women and children from the settlement.
    • Valerie and Aellyn send out an encrypted message calling for backup to rebels.
    • The group then attempts a rescue mission in order to free the captive citizens.
  • What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
    • They will harbour goodwill with the people of Ryloth as well as form a potential rebel staging ground on the planet.
  • Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
    • The plot will be run by dice rather than DM
This is my first submitted plot so if anything is out of place I'd appreciate it if you would let me know.

Just to confirm, this plot is to be how many threads? It looks like two but I just want to make sure :)

Also tagging @Minuteman75 to get his thoughts
 

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Yeah two threads. The first being just two people and then a thread of four members.
 

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I would suggest edit out the Mandalorians and make another group like pirates or something. Considering that Mandos are busy hitting Imperial targets it’s kinda hard to imagine they would go out of their way to attack villages on Ryloth that hasn’t no connection to the Sith. Other than that recommendation I’m fine with this plot.
 
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This officially now has my seal of approval then. Now it’s up to @Nefieslab to make the final decision on whether this needs to more improvement or is ready to go.
 

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@Bran

I do need some stuff clarifying;

  1. What do you expect in terms of the extent of the goodwill?
  2. What do you mean by staging ground?
 

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The goodwill and staging ground will go hand in hand with each other. Basically the rebel Alliance will be able to use the village as either a hideout or makeshift base for any mission conducted in the area. This can perhaps later on be developed into a proper base later on down the line. The citizens of the settlement will also be better inclined to help allied rebel forces and potentially be recruited as npc forces as a sort of 'passive benefit'.
 

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The goodwill and staging ground will go hand in hand with each other. Basically the rebel Alliance will be able to use the village as either a hideout or makeshift base for any mission conducted in the area. This can perhaps later on be developed into a proper base later on down the line. The citizens of the settlement will also be better inclined to help allied rebel forces and potentially be recruited as npc forces as a sort of 'passive benefit'.

That's what I thought.

Add in another thread that is being dice rolled then please - one dice roll thread is not enough for this level of reward in my opinion

Let me know when you've added one with more opposition
 

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Added a third settlement defense thread to the timeline, requiring the group to split into 2 smaller groups of 2. I'm willing to bump up the rescue group to 3 members for more inclusivity. @Nefieslab
 

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Added a third settlement defense thread to the timeline, requiring the group to split into 2 smaller groups of 2. I'm willing to bump up the rescue group to 3 members for more inclusivity. @Nefieslab

Alright looks good - 4 people over two threads would be fine but it's up to you how many people join up!

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