Pyro
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Ok so I actually made this guy already but he hasn't been used at all , so I'm going to update him so he makes sense in DOTR , please tell me if I've not updated anything properly ( or is generally wrong)
NAME: Vaulthuz
FACTION: Lords of the Sith
RANK: Crusader (this is the default rank for Sith , right?)
SPECIES: Annoo-dat prime
AGE: 26
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 227 cm
WEIGHT: 128 kg
EYES: Pale yellow
HAIR: species does not have hair
SKIN: Dull orange
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Top right eye is clouded/white
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
Appearance: Wears a typical Sith robe covered in dried blood, a tattered black cape with a hood and a mask resembling the upper jaw of a carrion spat , it is black and has a respirator attached. The respirator was attached as precaution during Vaulthuz's experiments but has lost it's functionality over the years.
STRENGTH: 5/10- Despite his species' natural strength, Vaulthuz never built upon it, he had other things to do
DEXTERITY: 4/10 while definitely not clumsy, his large size makes it relatively difficult to dodge consistently
CONSTITUTION: 4/10 Vaulthuz is not tough at all , despite his large stature , he can take a bit but will fall fairly quickly if hit by consistently powerful blows
INTELLIGENCE: 9/10 Vaulthuz spent most of his young life reading or researching (on animals)
WISDOM: 5/10 not a sage but in the right situation he may just have the right advice
CHARISMA: 6/10 Despite never really having a consistent group of friends, Vaulthuz could always slip out of trouble , pin the blame on others or get along with his peers ( or at least make them tolerate him)
PERSONALITY:
Simply, Vaulthuz is a sadist. He laughs out others misfortune and misery , this was mainly developed through his childhood, being left alone with a knife and nearby wildlife usually ended badly for the animal. Along with this came a slight amount of insanity due to being neglected and an untreated , but mild , case of schizophrenia.However this gradually faded as he grew up . His childhood experiences also almost entirely desensitized him to violence and gore in general. With no real friends or family Vaulthuz shut himself off giving him the appearance of a very cold,calculating character despite the madman on the inside, his cold character can occasionally 'break' revealing his true personality, these situations usually involve tension,excitement or imminent combat.
(Note: I do intend to update this as I use this character , but until then critique this current...form as you see fit)
BIOGRAPHY:
Vaulthuz was born on Annoo and into a wealthy family. Despite this his parents never had time for him as they were always working or pursuing something to increase their agricultural business. This caused the young Vaulthuz to never properly develop any social skills and found it difficult to make any real friends. Instead of bothering after months of trying to make friends , Vaulthuz shut himself off from others, simply using his time to pursue knowledge and eventually gained a fascination of pathogens and general biology. During this time he began to utilize the force, he began by simply shuffling his tools a bit closer but eventually he began using it for more complex dissection. Sadly during and experiment that went wrong Vaulthuz became blind in one of his eyes due to one of his test subjects biting back.
Eventually Vaulthuz was discovered by a mysterious figure in his late teens. Instead of informing his parents and getting him trained as a Jedi , the man revealed himself as a Sith to the boy and offered to train him for a few months. After these few months Vaulthuz grew to hate the man. He was arrogant and impatient , he had shown no evidence he had the slightest skill in force. Fortunately he was a good teacher and Vaulthuz finally got revenge on his family by destroying their home. Did they die? He didn't care. After this the Sith congratulated Vaulthuz before calling him a murderer with nothing to his name now and attempted to leave. A slab of crumbling concrete finally silenced the arrogant man. Vaulthuz retrieved the mans ( simple) lightsaber and decided he would continue the path the man had set him on. He would become a Sith.
FORCE POWERS:
While generally skilled with the force and able to pick up new skills fairly quickly, Vaulthuz usually uses kinesis and force grip -like techniques.
SKILLS:
Creating poisons/disease
Advanced surgical skills
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-cho
Juyo
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Vaulthuz is fairly talented in the force and can keep his concentration for a fair amount of time
Vaulthuz moves slowly during combat, he will rarely move quickly unless avoiding imminent danger , such as a rocket.
GEAR:
Vaulthuz is usually carrying a large amount of poisons and contained diseases with him in small bags along his waist. Admittedly these contain little use in combat as they are either too unpredictable to use or are not usable at all, poison can't exactly be put on a lightsaber.
A mask based off a carrion spat , painted black with a broken respirator attached
He also carries a curve handled, red light-saber
-- The Content Below is Optional, but Encouraged!--
SHIP:
DROIDS:
PETS:
KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:
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NAME: Vaulthuz
FACTION: Lords of the Sith
RANK: Crusader (this is the default rank for Sith , right?)
SPECIES: Annoo-dat prime
AGE: 26
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 227 cm
WEIGHT: 128 kg
EYES: Pale yellow
HAIR: species does not have hair
SKIN: Dull orange
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Top right eye is clouded/white
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
Appearance: Wears a typical Sith robe covered in dried blood, a tattered black cape with a hood and a mask resembling the upper jaw of a carrion spat , it is black and has a respirator attached. The respirator was attached as precaution during Vaulthuz's experiments but has lost it's functionality over the years.
STRENGTH: 5/10- Despite his species' natural strength, Vaulthuz never built upon it, he had other things to do
DEXTERITY: 4/10 while definitely not clumsy, his large size makes it relatively difficult to dodge consistently
CONSTITUTION: 4/10 Vaulthuz is not tough at all , despite his large stature , he can take a bit but will fall fairly quickly if hit by consistently powerful blows
INTELLIGENCE: 9/10 Vaulthuz spent most of his young life reading or researching (on animals)
WISDOM: 5/10 not a sage but in the right situation he may just have the right advice
CHARISMA: 6/10 Despite never really having a consistent group of friends, Vaulthuz could always slip out of trouble , pin the blame on others or get along with his peers ( or at least make them tolerate him)
PERSONALITY:
Simply, Vaulthuz is a sadist. He laughs out others misfortune and misery , this was mainly developed through his childhood, being left alone with a knife and nearby wildlife usually ended badly for the animal. Along with this came a slight amount of insanity due to being neglected and an untreated , but mild , case of schizophrenia.However this gradually faded as he grew up . His childhood experiences also almost entirely desensitized him to violence and gore in general. With no real friends or family Vaulthuz shut himself off giving him the appearance of a very cold,calculating character despite the madman on the inside, his cold character can occasionally 'break' revealing his true personality, these situations usually involve tension,excitement or imminent combat.
(Note: I do intend to update this as I use this character , but until then critique this current...form as you see fit)
BIOGRAPHY:
Vaulthuz was born on Annoo and into a wealthy family. Despite this his parents never had time for him as they were always working or pursuing something to increase their agricultural business. This caused the young Vaulthuz to never properly develop any social skills and found it difficult to make any real friends. Instead of bothering after months of trying to make friends , Vaulthuz shut himself off from others, simply using his time to pursue knowledge and eventually gained a fascination of pathogens and general biology. During this time he began to utilize the force, he began by simply shuffling his tools a bit closer but eventually he began using it for more complex dissection. Sadly during and experiment that went wrong Vaulthuz became blind in one of his eyes due to one of his test subjects biting back.
Eventually Vaulthuz was discovered by a mysterious figure in his late teens. Instead of informing his parents and getting him trained as a Jedi , the man revealed himself as a Sith to the boy and offered to train him for a few months. After these few months Vaulthuz grew to hate the man. He was arrogant and impatient , he had shown no evidence he had the slightest skill in force. Fortunately he was a good teacher and Vaulthuz finally got revenge on his family by destroying their home. Did they die? He didn't care. After this the Sith congratulated Vaulthuz before calling him a murderer with nothing to his name now and attempted to leave. A slab of crumbling concrete finally silenced the arrogant man. Vaulthuz retrieved the mans ( simple) lightsaber and decided he would continue the path the man had set him on. He would become a Sith.
FORCE POWERS:
While generally skilled with the force and able to pick up new skills fairly quickly, Vaulthuz usually uses kinesis and force grip -like techniques.
SKILLS:
Creating poisons/disease
Advanced surgical skills
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-cho
Juyo
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Vaulthuz is fairly talented in the force and can keep his concentration for a fair amount of time
Vaulthuz moves slowly during combat, he will rarely move quickly unless avoiding imminent danger , such as a rocket.
GEAR:
Vaulthuz is usually carrying a large amount of poisons and contained diseases with him in small bags along his waist. Admittedly these contain little use in combat as they are either too unpredictable to use or are not usable at all, poison can't exactly be put on a lightsaber.
A mask based off a carrion spat , painted black with a broken respirator attached
He also carries a curve handled, red light-saber
-- The Content Below is Optional, but Encouraged!--
SHIP:
DROIDS:
PETS:
KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:
.
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