Rakata

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Hello, guys. :CHappy:

Erm, well, to get to the point, I wrote a short story, and it's called "Rakata." It's part of a kind of anthology of short stories kind of thing, but right now this is the only one done. It's my first venture into "pseudo-horror" so be nice to me. :)

It's premise isn't that complicated, fortunately. It happens in the SW universe, in the time of (surprisesurprise) the Rakata. It's supposed to be able to fit into canon kinda. It's about a farm animal. I think a farm animal would be called a farm animal in SW, but at any rate it gives you the idea.

Since I don't want to code it for here and don't really want to post the whole thing, I hope it's okay if I just link you to it: http://swfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Rakata_(short_story)

I would like comments and critiques, please. I do want to improve after all. Thank you for your time.

Please don't post any spoilerz, and ignore anything and everything Bac says. :p
 

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SPOILERS:

Everybody dies.
 

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Wow, that was chilling! I never saw that ending coming. Great story.
 

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SPOILERS:

Everybody dies.
What was that? All I heard was a lot of hot air.

Wow, that was chilling! I never saw that ending coming. Great story.
Oh, thank you! <3 <3 <3

<huggles>

:CHappy:

Now, you don't have to answer this and stuff, but I do want to ask 1) What you liked about it and 2) What you would change/thought was wrong. If it deals with spoilerz you can always just PM me. Thank you in advance if you go ahead and answer. :)
 
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