Reilorso Marshall

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Reilorso Marshall

Name: Reilorso Marshall
Codename: None at the moment
Age: 19
Birthday: 6 month on the 17th
Faction: Jedi Exiles
Birth Place: Naboo
Level: 1
Rank: Apprentice
Location: Traveling
Force Sensitive? Trained?: Yes, Trained Well in the light and dark


Biography Chp-1: Rough Beginnings


At a young age he was born In a force sensitive family and really at first wasn't capable of using it to its full extent, not even using it at all. After working with his father to gather some water and berries in the forest, he discovered his force sensitivity after tree nearly falling on him and he was able you a fragment of his potential and move it to the right of him, letting it fall on the ground right next to him. He was then taken into the Jedi Order after his family sent him off after witnessing his power. He was a slow in his teachings but after he first got an idea of what he needed to learn he was able to understand it quiet fast. He wasn't used to the life of a jedi in training as he didn't feel like he has the power required. He then fell into temptation.



Biography Chp-2: Exposure of Power


After a vast amount of time, under cover in his training looking through the knowledge given to him by his superiors and looking secretly in deeper places he found that It was possible to be stronger. As he grew he trained with the Jedi blindly, and practiced the dark side secretly. He was then sought out and caught by one of his peers and forced them to stay put and put them in extreme pain. He threatened them to not tell anyone about it for the next week or so. After the week he was packed and began to leave but was stopped by master. He retreated quickly from hearing what the master had to say into the wilderness. He was later found by another Exile and was taken in to the ways of the Dark.



Personality


Very passionate about his power he's diligent when it comes to exclaiming his purpose, and any minor information. He can be merciful when he gets what he wants quickly and use whatever he can to boost his gain. His power and skill are sharp as he focuses on tampering with the mind, and with that he can be curious about thoughts and cautious about intentions. He more of the type to put up a temporary façade to keep the person he's talking to always guessing.



Combat Skills


Skilled in lightsaber combat and receiving training from both sides of the force he's quiet efficient when using fighting styles. He's capable with multiple melee weapons as he's had training in all areas. He's learned how to deflect blaster bolts as well since his perception his very acute among his attributes.



The Force and Mind Tampering


He is very capable in his telekinetic and telepathic capabilities as he focuses on influencing the force mostly. He's trained enough to the point where he can put his foes to sleep after a a lot of mental concentration and then the wave of his hand.



Apperance


He wears dark red Jedi robes, along with being coated in dark brown skin. He's a fit somewhat skinny mesomorph as he has short black curly hair and silver eyes. He doesn't seem to have any marks surrounding his training within the dark side.



 
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Raydo

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Hello,

Please take a look at the write ups for the factions. Your character is essentially an Exile. You say he practised the Dark Side in secret but then say he was trained in both the light and dark sides of the Force. The Jedi Order would not train a Jedi to use the Dark Side, and considering the Jedi Council have exiled many of their own ranks in the years leading up to the start of TL find it difficult to believe he would be allowed to stay in the Order especially after attacking another Jedi. If you want to play this character as is, My recommendation would be to change the faction to the Jedi Exiles. It fits the theme and makes sense for the character.

Lastly (Pretty minor) - Star Wars doesn't use our calendar so July 12th wouldn't be a date.
 

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Your profile is mostly good except for one thing in his force powers area. A level 1 character wouldn't be capable of diving into someone else's dreams and search for memories like it's a grocery store. If you remove this part you should be ok.

I'm also not entirely familiar with the force being able to put people to sleep, but I guess it's essentially stasis in what you describe so I'm not as worried about that part.
 

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There you go. I went for a character alike kylo ren, since in star wars episode 7 he was able to put rey asleep just with a wave after restraining her. And the entering the mind thing was for kylo ren as well while in the inferno squad story (which is canon I think) he was able to walk through someone's memories in search for what he's looking for. Also, can I keep the sleep thing?
 

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Yeah the sleep thing is fine, although it would be mostly for story as I don’t see it being practical at all in a pvp scenario. It’d be a pretty hard thing to do in any scenario, really.

And yeah, I know where your inspiration came from but I’d consider Kylo more than a lvl 1 character. You may be able to accomplish such things at lvl 2 or 3.

Approved!
 
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