"Alba-16"? Interesting enough, there is a planet called Alba :p just not without the 16, and uh, if I'm guessing right where all the action is going to be happening, the planet is WAY from the action of the new timeline's story...just fyi lol but still overall, everything looks great!
Constructive criticism? Scale down the picture. Alot. Several of our members access this site via mobile devices, and massive pictures like that can be enough to make them keel over. Same with the font on the basic stats, such as hair colour and such. Having it be ALL MEGA HUGE LIKE THISeffect on the quality of the profile. It just fills up dead space, and can make it harder for people to navigate, especially if they've got a small screen to work off of.
^ This or another alternative if you cant do that is place it in Spoilers. Though I would consider that temporary until you can actually scale it down :)