Rune Haako (Join the Revival of the Trade Federation)

[BentheDoge]

Hello everyone, I am new to this site and would love to begin.
So to begin.
NAME: Rune Haako
FACTION: The Trade Federation (if I remember, I am pretty sure it was destroyed, this is an attempt to rebuild it)
RANK: Leader
SPECIES: Neimodian
AGE: 32
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 2.11 meters
WEIGHT: (Average weight) Lean http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Neimoidian
EYES: orange eyes
HAIR: none
SKIN: greenish gray
CREDITS: 120,000 credits (600,000 usd)
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Negative

STRENGTH: Low
DEXTERITY: Above average
CONSTITUTION: Above Average
INTELLIGENCE: High
WISDOM: Low
CHARISMA: High
PERSONALITY:
Very high intent on keeping what is own. Likes piloting and working with droids. Very fond of credits, goods, supplies and droids. Doesn't care really about the jedi or sith. Very resourceful at times. Dislikes overconfident people. Very adept with clonewars technology. Views the force as something that can be dealed with. Highly Dislikes Nute Gunray.
BIOGRAPHY:
Born on Cato Neimodia and was forced to fight with the other young neimodians for limited food. When young, made good friends with another neimodian named Sil Unch. Continued to learn how to fly in secret by the age of 12. Together with Sil Unch, repaired and reused a slightly disfunctional battledroid. Later in the life, showed a great tactical commanding skills and was premoted to Ship commander. Sil Unch was promoted to a crew member aboard the ship.
As a commander, won many battles in the clone wars. Many battles were lost in the end of the war as well. Took further training in fighting with electrostaffs and showed potential. Joined in on trade negotiations as well. During the end of the war, was stationed on mustafar with Sil Unch awaiting Darth Vader's arrival. When Darth Vader arrived and slaughtered, Sil Unch was killed when Rune Haako was out flying a personal vulture droid. Rune Haako layed low for the rest of the end of the clone wars after setting up a shop on an asteroid.
FORCE POWERS:
None
SKILLS:
Piloting
Engineering
Electrostaff combat
Droid Modification and design
Marketing
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Expert Fighter with Electrostaff and/or other staffs
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Weaknesses-Thermal Sensitive, Cowardly
Stengths- Engineering, Marketing
GEAR:
Electrostaff
Binoculars
Crates of spare parts
Detonators
dh-17 blaster rifle
SHIP:
Custom Build Ship
http://adamkop.deviantart.com/art/Star-Wars-Czerka-Arms-Cargo-Ship-295699122
DROIDS:
Personal Droideka and 4 battledroids refitted
PETS:
Dewback
KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?posts/1227161/
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?posts/1227160/
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...ions-revival-recruiting-needed-members.63799/
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/the-trade-federations-revival.63797/

 

[BentheDoge]

Any suggestions of what to change would be greatly appreciated, I'm sorry if the backstory isn't so good. This is really my first time doing large scale roleplay.

 

[Jabonicus]

EDITED

Profile is a bit rough, but it's as good of a start as any.

You've set the timeline of your character to what I assume is just after the Clone Wars. However, the current on-site timeline is roughly a thousand years after the Galactic Civil War.

Going along with this, the Trade Federation is long gone. A complete restart of them would involve creating an indie faction, which is quite a lot of work. While I won't stop you, I'd certainly suggest standard RPing for a while before starting an entire faction.

I apologize for sounding like a dick in the first, unedited version of this post. At the time, I believed my attitude was justifiable. Now, on second thought, I was quite obviously wrong. If you want help with anything later on, feel free to shoot me a PM, and I'll do my best to help.

 

[Raydo]

Alright, you're a bit clueless, so I'm not really going to bother fixing up your profile.

You need to read the site lore. Don't tell me you have, because you obviously haven't. Not only was the Clone Wars a long time ago, it was thousands of years ago. Going alongside that, this is not how factions work. You put his faction in the thread title as Rebel, which is incorrect, as he is not a part or designed to be a part of the Rebellion against the Imperium. A faction requires several people to make, and the Trade Federation, if you somehow managed to 'revive' it after thousands of years of not existing, would be counted as an 'Indie' (independent) faction.

So please, please read the site lore and rules.

No need to be an asshole. There are plenty of ways to offer the advice you give and not sound like a total douche.

 

[MasterTyvokka]

Alrighty... So to begin you are off to a decent start as far as the basic character goes. There aren't a whole lot of Neimodians on the site.

Now I want to warn you my post may seem a bit overwhelming as there will be a number of links in it and a good bit of info. But I am trying to help you since you are new to this.
First off I recommend reading this. (and the later announcements) We have a new timeline coming within the next month or so. As a result you may not want to get to invested in the current one. However if you really want to dive right in there is nothing wrong with that. Also some others are making characters to try in this timeline and then move into the new one.

If you want to dive right in I recommend reading this. It will catch you up on what is going on in the current timeline. Then I would read this. Since you are new it should help you out.

You can also check this thread out. It may help with your character creation. Now you do have a few issues with your character which you will need to correct. At this time there is not a trade federation faction. (it did exist a long time ago.) Like what was said above if you wanted to make a trade federation it would have to be an indie faction. Here is the link for that info. As a result your faction would either need to be changed. If you want to be a rebel change it to that. Otherwise he could be an indie or in one of the other main factions. You will also need to change the main forum tag to indie if you are not going to be in one of the main factions. Finally the clone wars were over 1000 years ago. But you could just say "he was a commander and won many battles."

I know all of this was a lot but don't sweat it. I started many years ago RPing and I was completely new. It took me a little while but I eventually got the hang of things. If you need any further help don't hesitate to ask.

 

[BentheDoge]

Few questions?
When will the next timeline be
Is geonosis imperium or rebel controlled (I know the Empire used the geonosis as slaves)
Are there still droid factories left, for say on geonosis, Cato neimodia, etc
Does umbara tech still exist
Know any good bios to start with

 

[Outlander]

1000 years before Yavin.

 

[MasterTyvokka]

^^ what he said. That's a rough estimate anyways. We don't know exactly at this point.

This thread will answer your questions about territories.

As for the others they are a bit up in the air. Check all the timeline announcements.