Rune Haako

[BentheDoge]

Hello everyone, I am new to this site and would love to begin.
So to begin.
NAME: Rune Haako
FACTION: None
RANK: None
SPECIES: Neimodian
AGE: 32
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 2.11 meters
WEIGHT: (Average weight) Lean http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Neimoidian
EYES: orange eyes
HAIR: none
SKIN: greenish gray
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Negative

STRENGTH: Low
DEXTERITY: Above average
CONSTITUTION: Above Average
INTELLIGENCE: High
WISDOM: Low
CHARISMA: High
PERSONALITY:
Very high intent on keeping what is own. Likes piloting and working with droids. Very fond of credits, goods, supplies and droids. Doesn't care really about the jedi or sith. Very resourceful at times. Dislikes overconfident people. Very adept with clonewars technology. Views the force as something that can be dealed with.
BIOGRAPHY:
Born on Cato Neimodia. At this time, the worst of the republics reform was no where near an end. With all battle had been put out of commision, crime shot up like a rocket. Heavy taxes put on the once wealthy neimodians now poor. Since a young age, Haako has always been wondering what it would be like if the clone wars never happened, the Empire was never created and the great trade and business owned by Cato Neimodia was never destroyed. But wishing would never help, Haako would be stuck in the terrible suffering of Cato Neimodia. Although times were tough, Haako always seemed to find a way around things. At the early age of 16, Haako took combat training and hand crafted his own electrostaff. The thought of flight amazed Haako but he never had enough money to buy it. One day when the Imperium came to collect their heavy taxes, Haako realized he soon wouldn't have enough money to pay for taxes so from that day on, every chance hegot, he would take a piece of a ship nearby. At the age of 22, Haako saw a ship crashing down from the sky as it hit the ground. Haako ran over to the crash site. This was his golden ticket off the planet. He managed to repair the ship with all of the working parts he had taken earlier on. The finished product was a YT series ship.
http://yadrenightwalker.tumblr.com/post/129954724416/star-wars-ships-yt-series-freighters
Haako moved to Naboo where he would successfully open a shop, but he always kept a close watch on Geonosis...
FORCE POWERS:
None
SKILLS:
Piloting
Engineering
Electrostaff combat
Droid Modification and design
Marketing
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Expert Fighter with Electrostaff and/or other staffs
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Weaknesses-Thermal Sensitive, Cowardly
Stengths- Engineering, Marketing
GEAR:
Electrostaff
Binoculars
Crates of spare parts
Detonators
dh-17 blaster rifle
SHIP:
Custom Build Ship
http://adamkop.deviantart.com/art/Star-Wars-Czerka-Arms-Cargo-Ship-295699122
DROIDS:
Droid parts
PETS:
Dewback
KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:

 

[Outlander]

Not bad. Just a couple of things I'd like to point out though:

• New characters generally only start out with 1000 credits.
• Why is he so intent on the Clone Wars? They ended over 1000 years prior and the Galactic Empire has been gone for almost as long.
• Maybe go into detail on how exactly he managed to steal an Imperial ship? Tie Fighters are no longer in use by the way.
• He is cowardly and has low strength, but not only is adept in electrostatic combat, but was able to go directly against the Imperium?
• Generally, only Faction Leaders of high ranking members get to have combat NPCs.
• To get the custom ship shown here, you'll need to make a tech write-up and submit it through the tech board. Although the board will be closed until the next timeline.

Also, you really need to stop making new threads for this character.

 

[BentheDoge]

Not bad. Just a couple of things I'd like to point out though:

• New characters generally only start out with 1000 credits.
• Why is he so intent on the Clone Wars? They ended over 1000 years prior and the Galactic Empire has been gone for almost as long.
• Maybe go into detail on how exactly he managed to steal an Imperial ship? Tie Fighters are no longer in use by the way.
• He is cowardly and has low strength, but not only is adept in electrostatic combat, but was able to go directly against the Imperium?
• Generally, only Faction Leaders of high ranking members get to have combat NPCs.
• To get the custom ship shown here, you'll need to make a tech write-up and submit it through the tech board. Although the board will be closed until the next timeline.

Also, you really need to stop making new threads for this character.

Ok thanks for the advice, i'm just saying with the credits, 1000 credits is equal to about 5,000 usd. That's not alot to live on.
Okay, on comeat npcs, no more Droideka and only battledroids, would that work?
Saying tie fighters, I mean they're average fighter craft.
Adept in electrostaff, I don't think you have to be strong with electro staff combat, that's one of the best parts of electrostaffs and lightsabers.
Doyouthink it would be better if I stole just a civilian craft?

 

[Nor'baal]

Is this character the Canon Rune Haako or do they just have the same name?

 

[BentheDoge]

Is this character the Canon Rune Haako or do they just have the same name?

Same names not the best at making Neimodian names

 

[Outlander]

Ok thanks for the advice, i'm just saying with the credits, 1000 credits is equal to about 5,000 usd. That's not alot to live on.
Okay, on comeat npcs, no more Droideka and only battledroids, would that work?
Saying tie fighters, I mean they're average fighter craft.
Adept in electrostaff, I don't think you have to be strong with electro staff combat, that's one of the best parts of electrostaffs and lightsabers.
Doyouthink it would be better if I stole just a civilian craft?

Just quoting the rules man. Usually, characters start with 1000.

I wouldn't recommend it. I'd say to scrap them all together.

Still, basically everything about his character says that he's not a great fighter, which makes sense because he's a more economic focused character. So why would he be really good at electrostaffs?

I mean, nemoidians are all about subsidizing their work out to people beneath them. So why is he out stealing things in the first place?

 

[BentheDoge]

Ok

Just quoting the rules man. Usually, characters start with 1000.

I wouldn't recommend it. I'd say to scrap them all together.

Still, basically everything about his character says that he's not a great fighter, which makes sense because he's a more economic focused character. So why would he be really good at electrostaffs?

I mean, nemoidians are all about subsidizing their work out to people beneath them. So why is he out stealing things in the first place?

Ok, I'll set the credits to 1000
As for the electrostaff, a form of defense in a way,I never said I would be killing jedi or sith. Like remember the pirate leader guy from star wars the clonewars, he had an electrostaff. I just plain like electrostaffs alot, I would choose them over a lightsaber

Cato Neimodia now with the Imperium and their heavy taxes, the demolished cities from war, and the collapse of a large part of their economy.
My character is stealing things so he can get off the planet due to the Imperium's high taxes and Cato Neimodia's high crime

 

[Outlander]

Yeah. But its not in character for a cowardly person to know how to use one. Its great if you want to keep it, but then I'd say you should have him not be cowardly.

Did you come up with that yourself, or is that a description from the site somewhere? Its fine either way.

 

[BentheDoge]

Yeah. But its not in character for a cowardly person to know how to use one. Its great if you want to keep it, but then I'd say you should have him not be cowardly.

Did you come up with that yourself, or is that a description from the site somewhere? Its fine either way.

For some weird reason, neimodians are my favorite species, maybe it's that they're great at business or use droids for combat
I tried to make my character share the attributes of a normal neimodian as well as new ones. I got most of my info from wookiepedia

 

[Outlander]

Then I'd say to scrap the electrostaff and focus completely on manipulating people. It goes against your character in a fairly significant way.

 

[BentheDoge]

Would it be fine if I kept the electrostaff?

 

[Outlander]

Look, I can't stop you from keeping it. But its in direct contrast to how your character actually is. I really think you should remove it and just have a small self defense blasted. Its far more reasonable for a Nemoidian and your character in particular

 

[Nor'baal]

Nemodians are a very interesting race, in fact I am contemplating making a nemoidian for the senate faction in the new timeline.

However - one thing to remember is that you start out as a 'low level' character, so your new thread to liberate geonosis is a big no-no, as you cannot simply liberate a planet at this stage and without a faction behind you.

 

[BentheDoge]

I understand, but I can liberate a few geonosis prisoners, right?

 

[Nor'baal]

I imagine so - but you cannot use it to suddenly secure hundreds of NPC minions, without a faction at your command.