Ruvo Gru

[Finbar800]

*BOGAN ACOLYTE 177890*
*RUVO GRU*​

Spoiler: BOGAN SPECIFICATION FILE

NAME: Ruvo Gru

FACTION: Bogan

RANK: Acolyte

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 23

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 6' 2''

WEIGHT: 161 lbs

EYES: Yellow

HAIR: None, shaved

SKIN: White

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Bogan tatoos on head.

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes.

STRENGTH: Medium to high. Subject is above average in strength. Shown ability to carry a maximum of 130 lbs.

DEXTERITY: High. Subject is highly agile and nimble. Has shown to be remarkable at sneaking, climbing, and dodging.

CONSTITUTION: Low. Subject appears to have remarkable stamina, but like all humans, she is prone to disease and injury.

INTELLIGENCE: High. Subject is smart in knowledge and problem solving.

WISDOM: Medium. Subject has basic common sense but sometimes rushes into action.

CHARISMA: Low. Subject is aggresive and will use force instead of deception.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Speed
Force Jump
Force Pull
Force Push
Force Slow

STRENGTHS/WEAKNESSES:

Subject has remarkable agility and can easily finish an obstacle course. He has shown the ability to use computers and technology but nothing special. He can use the Force extremely well in destructive ways. Subject is weak in pursuasion and deception, and he prefers to use his anger and destruction to get what he wants. Subject is remarkable for his unique fighting style. He is weak in ranged weapons. Subject is completely ambidextrous.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

Form II: Makashi backhand

GEAR:

Subject carries with him a custom built red lightsaber. It has the same engravings as on his head tatoos. He usually uses it in his left hand, but sometimes switches to confuse the opponent.

Subject prefers a black cloak that is semi-tight. Under the cloak he prefers black leather. Subject is keen on having that armor and nothing else.

SHIP:
None

Subject filled out the following according to his own beliefs.

Appearance:

I don't care what I look like. I just want it to be the thing that frightens my enemies before I kill them. I have shaved my head to put tatoos on. They are tatoos that are custom to Dark Jedi. I have a long face, and my eyes are yellow. I am tall and muscular. I wear a black cloak and under that a black leather suit. I try to look intimidating.

Likes and Dislikes

I dislike talking to people. Especially ignorant fools. I dislike anything that isn't Bogan and moves. I especially hate Jedi scum. I dislike showoffs and people with large egos.

I don't like much. I do like watching my enemies suffer, and killing my them. I like showing my enemies that I am better than them. I like the night, for it shields me and protects me.

Personality

I guess I am cruel. It is what feeds my anger. It is what feeds me the dark side. I want what I want, and know one can change that. If I need a task to be done, I will do it. I'm not afraid to die as long as I am trying to destroy my enemies. If people insult me in any way, shape, or form, I will kill them. I try to be intimidating. I am self-confident in that I know that I am powerful. I guess I have a bad temped. I get angry easily, and when I do, it isn't pretty. I guess I'm not fun to be around, but "fun" is for people who have nothing to do. I have something to do. Destroy the Jedi.

Biography

I was born on Anaxes. My parents were drunkies. They treated me like crap. They would leave me in the house unattended. Some nights they would feed me, but if it weren't for my neighbor, I would have died. My neighbor, Benden Gru, took me away from my parents when I was 6 months old. He took care of me. I actually was healthy with him.

When I was twelve, he started to teach me. Benden was dark. You could just sense it. He taught me how to use a lightsaber and how to use the Force. I was good at it all, but I still had a lot to learn.

When I was 15, I got a job at a small shipyard. I was ignorant then. I didn't know about the world. When I was working, I started to brag about Benden and how he was teaching me how to use a Lightsaber and the Force. The shipyard was a Republic one. Word got out about it. It eventually reached a Republic Officer. The Republic Officer told the Jedi on Coruscant about it. 1 year later a group of Jedi came to my town.

I was at work on that day. When I came home, Benden was currently fighting several Jedi. I yelled but it was too late. Benden was overwhelmed. He was stabbed, and he had his arm cut off. I was overwhelmed in anger. I Force pushed a Jedi into a wall. Ever since that day I hated the Jedi. I fled into the town, and stole a ship from the ship yard.

I flew away without finishing my training...

Eventually I learned about the Bogan. I was at a cantina on Coruscant. Some guy ran into me, and I Force pushed him into a table. A man in a dark cloak came up to me. He told me about the Bogan. I decided to go there and learn the ways of the Dark and finish my training. I flew to there planet and signed up.

 

[TheIronLotus]

Yooo. Make him an Acolyte just fyi. Besides that, good luck with the profile!

 

[Finbar800]

Yea. It is really under construction. But I one really good one. See Redgar Bandoran on sig.

 

[Horizon]

If you are already trained within the Force to use the basics and with that a lightsaber...Why exactly are you coming to seek out the Bogan? Although you could be doing it merely for the furtherment of your skills. Then again you kind of have to be trained by a faction like that of the Bogan or the Jedi to even be able to use advanced forms pertaining to lightsaber combat.

(answered my own question there)

My only other problem though with the profile is that your character killed two Jedi. They would probably be far more surperior to your character in skill and such. To me it just seems unlikey that your character at his level...Let's say apprentice could kill two full fledged Jedi Knights. Maybe this is me just being really nit picky.

 

[TheIronLotus]

No man, you're wrong, he didn't kill two Jedi Knights. Jeez.

He killed three. *flees*

 

[Horizon]

No man, you're wrong, he didn't kill two Jedi Knights. Jeez.

He killed three. *flees*

How did I miss that...Well that reinforces what I said though.

 

[TheIronLotus]

How did I miss that...Well that reinforces what I said though.

Yeah, pretty much why I fled, and that he killed em all at the same time. I mean, it's not a bad profile, just...way too hardcore for someone new to the Bogan, and most classical training.

 

[Finbar800]

Ok. I will change the Jedi part. Other than that am I ok?

 

[Brandon Rhea]

A couple things:

When I was six, he started to teach me. Benden was dark. He wasn't part of the Bogan. He said he was too old. I didn't know what the Bogan was.

This isn't possible. The Bogan were formed only about 15 years ago or so IC, after having been the Ospion Guardians and falling to the dark side for a few years, and the galaxy only first learned about them about 1 year ago IC. Benden couldn't have known about the Bogan 18 years ago IC.

When I was 15, I got a job at a small shipyard. I was ignorant then. I didn't know about the world. I didn't know about the world. I didn't know about the war.

That was 8 years ago IC, based on your character's current age. There was no war going on then. The Alsakan Crisis ended 21 years ago, and the Hutt War has only been going on for a little over a year.

Eventually I learned about the Bogan. I flew to there planet and signed up to become a Dark Crusader.

This needs to be explained. The location of the Bogan Temple is a closely guarded secret, so Ruvo wouldn't know where to fly to. He would've needed to have encountered someone from the Bogan who saw his Force potential and brought him to Ando Prime for training.

 

[Finbar800]

Ok. Thanks Bac.

 

[Finbar800]

Ok, fixed it, and by the way, are you on 24/7 Bac?

 

[Brandon Rhea]

By the time I was 12, I was fully trained in basic Force powers and how to use a lightsaber.

I also take issue with this. 12 years old is far too young to be fully trained in any aspect of Force and lightsaber training. You may know how to push something, pull something, etc., or how to swing a lightsaber around, but this passage makes it seem like he's much stronger than he really is. Removing the word "fully" would make the difference.

Also, don't forget to remove the mention of the war. :)

Ok, fixed it, and by the way, are you on 24/7 Bac?

No, why?

 

[Finbar800]

It just seems you are on all of the time. But as I'm writing this you are not on.

 

[Finbar800]

I changed it so that he hasn't finished his training.