Ryse Quinn

[RyseQuinn]

NAME: Ryse Quinn
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Initiate
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 19
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Trained

APPEARANCE:
Ryse stands at 5'10 and weighs around 150 pounds. Ryse has a darker color of brown hair that is kept short though his bangs are spiked up. Ryse has a fair complexion with green eyes and tends to keep himself with a clean shave. Ryse has a decent musculature that isn't too bulky, overall it'd be correct to say he has a lean or athletic build.

ATTRIBUTES:
Ryse was given basic training through his youth that includes that of wielding a lightsaber and even the way of the force. Ryse has gone and learned the basic fundamentals of what it takes to be a Jedi. For Ryse he focused more upon being able to use his lightsaber better whether it be from deflecting blaster bolts to slicing and dicing through his opponents. His force abilities aren't lacking however, though he does need improvement, as well as with every aspect of his training as he can only improve. However his force abilities aren't at the level of his swordsmanship and still needs further training. Ryse is good with enhancing his speed and acrobatics with the force as well as the basics, but needs work going into anything more advanced, anything beyond force pushes, pulls, telekinesis, and other basics. His overall weakness would be decision making. Ryse is young and naive and still has much to learn about making the right choice and when to and not to act.

Strength: Ryse is fairly strong, more than average, however he doesn't focus on it.

Constitution: Ryse trains constantly and always keeps up good health.

Dexterity: Ryse is rather quick in combat, mixing speed with power to strike at his opponents.

Intelligence: Ryse is smart but he is more reactionary in combat over being a strategist, he rushes in without a plan.

Wisdom: Wisdom is something else Ryse is lacking in being as naive and young as he is. He has much to learn.

Charisma: Ryse is a decently charismatic person. He is rather outgoing and is quick to make friends.

PERSONALITY:
Ryse is laid back yet outgoing as he is seen to be a rather happy person. Ryse is rather nonchalant and enjoys helping others. At times he can be a bit sarcastic at times but it's all in good jest or just to tease somebody. Ryse is rather playful and goofy sometimes but he knows the times to be serious and can be when it comes to it. He knows there's a time for play and a time for work. Ryse's top priority is the lives of others, even going so far as to focus on gaining power for the purpose of protecting the peace and the lives of those around him. Ryse is a trustworthy person that can be relied on in times of trouble. Overall Ryse is a kind person who wants to help others and bring down the Sith that are disturbing the peace as well as gain power so he can protect those around him.

BIOGRAPHY:
Ryse was born to that of a Sith Marauder. His mother however was unhappy with the relationship and just what his father would do to Ryse as he grew up. Ryse's mother then relied on the assistance of the Jedi Order to kill his father. Ryse was never told of his parents. Instead of a Sith upbringing Ryse was given that of a Jedi. Ryse was taken and brought to a safe place and a place where he could be trained. The Jedi Order figured it would be right to train him in that of the light before he could fall to the path of the dark side later.

Through his youth Ryse trained in the path of the Jedi, learning their values and ways so he could become a proper Jedi Knight one day. As he was trained, his force abilities were awakened and he was further taught how to use these abilities, starting off with the basics. This included the force push and pull as well as telekinesis and even enhancing his own body movements. Ryse however focused more on his swordsmanship and ability with a lightsaber. As time went on Ryse became a Jedi Initiate and was put on the path to become a Jedi Knight...

SKILLS:

• Acrobatics- Adept
• Martial Arts- Adept
• Flying in starfighters and speeders- Adept
• Lightsaber Combat
⁃ Form I Shii-Cho- Adept
⁃ Form II Makashi- Apprentice
⁃ Form III Soresu- Adept
⁃ Form IV Ataru- Adept
⁃ Form V Shien/Djem So- Expert
• Force Abilities
⁃ Force Heal- Apprentice
⁃ Force Sense- Adept
⁃ Force Push/Pull- Adept
⁃ Force Grip/Telekinesis- Adept
⁃ Force Mind Trick- Apprentice
⁃ Force Stealth- Apprentice
• Strategy- Apprentice
• Critical Thinking- Apprentice

GEAR:
• Standard single hilt Lightsaber with Blue focusing Crystal
• Standard robes
• Standard Gauntlets (2 blaster shots, 1 lightsaber brush)
• Standard Grieves (1 blaster shot)
• Comlink
• Holo projector

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A


RELATIONSHIPS:
N/A


SHIP:
• Basic starship

DROIDS:
N/A

PETS:
N/A

KILLS:
N/A

COMBAT:
N/A

 

[Logan]

Overall it looks pretty good here, but one thing I can suggest is to maybe give a scale for the way you rank your character's proficiency in his attributes. Is apprentice the lowest rank of proficiency? Maybe putting a key above like rank -> rank -> rank so that people have a good idea of where he falls might be a good idea.

You'll also have to acquire Sith approval for the inclusion of Sith in his biography, but as far as I know the usage and killing of a Lord specifically probably won't be accepted (usually these titles are for PCs only so there aren't many of them out there to begin with), so I think you'd be better off just making him a Sith Marauder or something of that nature. It shouldn't change your background too much I don't think. I'll go ahead and tag the Sith FL guys for you so they can give you their two cents.

@Malon @Vinny @Intratec

So if we can just shore those small things up I think you'll be good to go.

 

[RyseQuinn]

Overall it looks pretty good here, but one thing I can suggest is to maybe give a scale for the way you rank your character's proficiency in his attributes. Is apprentice the lowest rank of proficiency? Maybe putting a key above like rank -> rank -> rank so that people have a good idea of where he falls might be a good idea.

You'll also have to acquire Sith approval for the inclusion of Sith in his biography, but as far as I know the usage and killing of a Lord specifically probably won't be accepted (usually these titles are for PCs only so there aren't many of them out there to begin with), so I think you'd be better off just making him a Sith Marauder or something of that nature. It shouldn't change your background too much I don't think. I'll go ahead and tag the Sith FL guys for you so they can give you their two cents.

@Malon @Vinny @Intratec

So if we can just shore those small things up I think you'll be good to go.

Well the ranking would go Apprentice as the lowest, then adept, then expert, finally I'll have Master. I figured it would be known as one of the example profiles for the Jedi uses this same set up.

Changing to marauder is fine as well.

 

[Valen Pelora]

With the understanding that the rankings go from apprentice, to adept, to expert, then master, that portion of the profile is fine. Since everything has been changed to Sith Marauder instead of Sith Lord I don't think the Sith leadership team will have any issues. I am tagging them again just to make sure.

@Malon @Vinny @Intratec.

 

[Intratec]

The biography is a little light, but it seems fine to me.

 

[Valen Pelora]

APPROVED!!!

 

[Talon maara]

I sense the possible turmoil of the dark side with him. He grew up with a sith father if I read that correctly? So he has that dark past in him. And also he has a passion for gaining power regardless of the light in him. Plus he has a tendency to rush into things without thinking sometimes.

So in my mind it would make an interesting story cause one he could get curious at some time of his father whom he finds out he was a sith, also his Passion for power could also tempt him over to the dark side along his journey. Both could bring him to the fence of either side and none the less an interesting story.

 

[RyseQuinn]

I sense the possible turmoil of the dark side with him. He grew up with a sith father if I read that correctly? So he has that dark past in him. And also he has a passion for gaining power regardless of the light in him. Plus he has a tendency to rush into things without thinking sometimes.

So in my mind it would make an interesting story cause one he could get curious at some time of his father whom he finds out he was a sith, also his Passion for power could also tempt him over to the dark side along his journey. Both could bring him to the fence of either side and none the less an interesting story.

Yup! That's the plan. It really opens up just how I can rp and who exactly I can rp with.. TBH it's kind of like an Anakin thing really, but not really. Basically he's just on the fence the same way Anakin was. He has Jedi motives and such, just wants power and will do whatever he can for it.