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Saul Perth

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I guess this is my first step back down the rabbit hole, ready to jump into the new timeline.

I guess I'll used this first post as a WIP for the new incarnation of Saul. This Saul is going to be a lot less militaristic and more on the lines of how he was originally planned, something of a swashbuckler spacer hanging around slums taking down gangs or drug rings, ect. An odd foil for this timeline, but I actually think playing a character that's not all gung ho about leaving civilians to die to go on crusade, and probably getting judged for it, will be quite entertaining.

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Saul Perth

NAME: Saul Perth
FACTION: Jedi Knights
RANK: Knight
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'11"
WEIGHT: 170 lbs
EYES: Pale blue
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: Never enough
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes



STRENGTH: Saul is only slightly stronger than an average human male of his size due to harsh physical training, however he lacks the bulk and raw power typical of career soldiers.

DEXTERITY: Even among other Jedi, Saul has excellent manual dexterity and hand-eye coordination. In a straight line sprint however, he is only average for a Force user.

CONSTITUTION: Saul's training and light build allow him to be highly physically active for extended periods without tiring, although his relatively small frame provides little raw defense against physical damage.

INTELLIGENCE: Although sharp witted and a quick thinker, the majority of Saul's instruction has been in the form of "learning by doing", leaving little time to study from a textbook and build a reserve of general knowledge.

WISDOM: Always paying attention to his surroundings and well in tune with his natural instincts, Saul is usually in a state of high awareness. This has lead to him being somewhat overconfident at times though, at times relying on nothing but his own luck to get him through.

CHARISMA: Although a little awkward at first due to the odd arrangement of growing up with the Jedi, as Saul progressed in his career he found himself among the general population on assignments. Although he's still not the smoothest talker, Saul's developed a fair knack at using a quick joke or a well placed smile to turn a conversation in his favor.



PERSONALITY:
Saul boasts a rather lighthearted personality, even as his line of work sends him into the most wretched hives of scum and villainy the galaxy has to offer. He's devoted to helping the people that truly deserve it, and he doesn't bat an eye if a few rules need to be broken to get the job done. His natural instincts and willingness to spontaneously follow his gut make him act rashly at times, but his quick actions have saved both his own life and the lives of others many times over.

BIOGRAPHY:
Like most Jedi, Saul was taken from his family when he was very young. His file in the temple archives says he was raised by a single mother on Nar Shaddaa, but contains little helpful information. New Jedi are supposed to leave behind their former lives, and lingering memories are anathema to the separation process.

As a boy in the temple, Saul used to sneak in old action holos set in the outer rim to watch at night. The people in the movies always fascinated him, standing alone against all the terrors that would plague his projection. He wanted to grow up and become a hero, helping those without huge armies, massive fleets, or planetary shields to protect them, just like in the movies.


FORCE POWERS:
Saul is less adept at directly utilizing the Force than most other Knights, and when he does attempt to actively manifest his powers, the result usually lacks focus.

Master: Force Sense
Expert: N/A
Proficient: Push, Slow Fall, Telekinesis, Jump, Speed
Basic: Mind Trick

SKILLS:
Saul is a impressive gunfighter, and is skilled enough to accurately utilize two pistols at the same time. His reflexes and instincts also make him a crack pilot, although he is generally reliant on a droid for the more in depth mechanical aspects of a ship. Over the last few years Saul has also become quite versed in several bar games, not the least of which is called "drinking". He's also self proclaimed to be "pretty good" at twirling his pistols around.

LIGHTSABER FORM:

When Saul uses his lightsaber, he typically favors a personal style, resembling something of a fusion of the basics of Soresu and Niman. It is quite simplistic, some might say sloppy, due mostly to Saul never actually practicing.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Saul's most glaring weaknesses are his relative lack of physical strength and subpar selection of Force powers when compared to other Jedi. He makes up for this by trusting in his mind and endurance, playing the long game until a more physically dominating foe tires out or makes a mistake. Saul also utilizes a number of tactics unexpected of a Jedi such as using blasters, explosives, or sneak attacks.


CLOTHES: Saul wears clothing that gives the appearance of a spacer or smuggler, favoring a pair of weathered black boots, dark denim pants, grey undershirt and a black leather flight jacket. Although appearing simple, Saul's jacket is lined with armor mesh that can stop a knife, shrapnel, or a light hit from a blaster pistol. Many pockets are also hidden inside, including a couple sized to contain and conceal a holdout blaster and lightsaber respectively.

LIGHTSABER:
Saul's lightsaber consists of a simple hilt with rubberized grips housing an cyan focusing crystal. If required, the weapon can be concealed within a functional stun baton, although it takes some time to disassemble the baton to remove the saber.

BLASTERS: Exactly what blasters Saul has on his person changes about as often as the day, but he's never without at least a pistol on each hip, usually with a small holdout blaster concealed in his jacket as well.

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One of Saul's many pairs of pistols.


MISC EQUIPMENT: In addition to the above equipment, Saul also makes use of a small set of security spikes and manual lock picks hidden in his boots, as well as a vibro dagger usually tucked in his jacket.
 
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William Drake
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AGE: 37 ---
SPECIES: Human ---

HEIGHT: 6'3" ---
WEIGHT: 225 lbs ---

EYE COLOR: Blue ---
HAIR COLOR: Black ---
SKIN COLOR: White ---
MARKINGS: Facial Scars ---

FACTION: Jedi Knights ---
RANK: Knight ---

"An open mind is like a fortress with its gate unbarred and unguarded." - William Drake

William Drake is noted for his stubborn adherence, if not zealotry, to the ideal that the duty of warriors of the Light is to combat the minions of the Dark, that a true Jedi should strive to protect the weak by first-and-foremost eliminating the Sith that seek to enslave the galaxy. This must surely be the will of the Light and the purpose behind each Jedi's call to power.[/fancybox4]


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"Let your soul be armored with Faith." - William Drake

William's inherited suit of armor has been passed down the Drake line for generations, each previous owner gifting it to his son when he was deemed worth of wearing it. The Drake family warriors have taken up the symbol of a dragon to be something of a family crest, and have worn its image on their armor long before this suit.

Like most modern suits of combat armor, the Drake family suit is comprised of several layers. The first layer is a simple rubberized body glove, which is mildly electrically and thermally resistive, but its primary role is simply as a foundation for the outer layers. Next, a layer of ballistic mesh is layered over the body glove to increase protection against shrapnel, knives, and small projectiles. A second layer of this material is then added over all areas not to be protected by plates. Lastly, numerous different durasteel armor plates are layered as shown, protecting the chest, arms, lower legs, outer thighs and hands. An optional helmet provides resistance against moderate head trauma and can filter out hazardous airborne material for a short time. A small personal shield generator is housed within the back plate of the armor, providing mild protection against energy weapons before needing several seconds to recharge.

William's lightsaber is built with a solid, two-handed grip in mind, with a hilt that is is slightly longer than standard for Jedi Knights. The saber also incorporates a crossguard of phrik, extending roughly six inches from the hilt in either direction. The blade of the saber burns a fierce gold. A multi-phase emitter allows William to adjust between blade lengths of approximately three to six feet.

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Description
[fancybox2]"Carry the Light as your torch, with it destroy the Shadow." - William Drake

William Drake is a notably physically imposing man, standing well over six feet tall and weighing in at about 225 pounds of muscle. This great stature and strength are the core elements of his Djem So combat style. Natural bulk, heavy armor and sheer willpower also allow William to take massive amounts of punishment before succumbing to his injuries. His size and strength aren't without their drawbacks however, as the sheer bulk of both his armor and own body limit William's speed.

As a self described man of the sword, not the book, William's mental attributes are average at best, with only the most basic of a formal education. Still, he possesses a sort of cunning on the battlefield, the type common among those warriors who live longer than luck alone could allow. In a conversation, he is rather short and direct in a sort of cold manner. What words he does speak are clearly said, backed by a voice that drips with unshakable conviction, regardless of the situation.

William knows how to utilize relatively few Force abilities, but his sheer willpower makes the effect of these few abilities surprisingly powerful, although they lack focus. He has displayed the ability to create pockets of compressed air that rapidly expand to violently push anything in their path, as well as increase his strength and speed for a short time.
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Biography
[fancybox2]"Doubt is a sign of weakness." - William Drake

Born the son of Jedi Crusader Joshua Drake, William was raised from birth to be a loyal warrior against the Sith. Since the boy was old enough to hold a sword, his life had been devoted to training and mental conditioning at the behest of his father. His early years were filled with intense physical exercises and sparring matches, and whenever his young body just couldn't take any more abuse, heavy doses of stimulants and rejuvenating drugs were used to prepare him to start it all over again tomorrow. Through it all was his father, telling him why he needed to be strong, even as he knocked his son to the ground. He had to be strong because he had to win. The only way to stop the Sith, to remove their taint from the galaxy, was not to turn a blind eye and hope they go away. You had to win, had to be strong, had to get back up, no matter the cost.

That was his life then, and is still his life now. William's father has long since fallen on the field of battle, not defeated with honor, but downed by a sniper's bullet. A cowards weapon, for a servant of the Sith that dared not face a true warrior in combat. William had long since accepted his fate to likely be falling in battle, but he wished to go out with honor, with dignity. The thought of his father passing without a death worthy of a crusader of the Light caused the flame of righteous fury to burn in his heart hotter than any lesson his father had ever imparted. He now seeks to bring about an end to the Sith as a whole, or die in the process. Which matters not, so long as the crusade lives on to see the final victory of the Light.

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Other Quotes: No army is big enough to conquer the galaxy. But faith alone can overturn the universe.

Power resides in the will of the Righteous.

The keenest blade is righteous hatred.

To question is to doubt.

 
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