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Character Name: Kyber-42
Link to their Profile: Here
Desired Rank: Acolyte?
The thread here is relevant to his induction into the Sith.
 
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The Living Daylights said:
Character Name: Karnhal Marliff
Link to their Profile: Here
Desired Rank: Sith
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No admittance! 3spoopy5me ;-;
haha. I'm kidding. I like him. However it is no longer just 'Sith'. We've added tropes like Warrior, Sorcerer(ess), and Inquisitor. Warriors make up the bulk of the Sith Army that focus on combat either with physicals weapons or the Force. Sorcerers are rarely seen out of Sith Space and practice their dark magic within the confines of their lair. Inquisitors are the smallest grouping that include assassin/spy types, the guys you would send in alone to gather information, or steal documents.

So with all that said, give him a title and you're good to go!
 
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Gian Greydragon said:
No admittance! 3spoopy5me ;-;
haha. I'm kidding. I like him. However it is no longer just 'Sith'. We've added tropes like Warrior, Sorcerer(ess), and Inquisitor. Warriors make up the bulk of the Sith Army that focus on combat either with physicals weapons or the Force. Sorcerers are rarely seen out of Sith Space and practice their dark magic within the confines of their lair. Inquisitors are the smallest grouping that include assassin/spy types, the guys you would send in alone to gather information, or steal documents.

So with all that said, give him a title and you're good to go!
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Thanks. My design seems like a Sorcerer/Inquisitor hybrid and I'm not too sure which one I want to go with. I'll go with Sorcerer for now. Is it possible for me to make a change later?

EDIT: Actually, if I'm not able to travel much as a Sorcerer, I'll have to be an Inquisitor, then.
 
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The Living Daylights said:
Thanks. My design seems like a Sorcerer/Inquisitor hybrid and I'm not too sure which one I want to go with. I'll go with Sorcerer for now. Is it possible for me to make a change later?
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I don't think there are any hard rules against hybrids. It's whatever you wanna do there. I kinda felt the same about him too, being fit to be a hybrid Sorcerer/Inquisitor type. @Prudence finalized the changes to the rank system.

EDIT: As a Sorcerer you're not barred from leaving Sith Space, that's just a trait lots of Sorcerers have, preferring the safety of allied space over galactic travel. This doesn't mean you can't go out, make expeditions to find and study things.
 
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Darth Bommer said:
Name: Faux Baan
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/faux-baan.70774/
Rank: sith
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I like where you're going with this guy, I've yet to see a Givin on this site. I do have to ask you to meet the minimum 2 paragraphs in the personality, and the 2-3 paragraph minimum requirements for the bio on the site. Flesh him out a bit more, and I'll take another look at him.
Spectrum said:
Name: Saibot Jinn
Link: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/please-give-feedback-saibot-jinn.70786/
Desired rank: Sith
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I've given your character a look as well, and I'm in agreement with @Gamov, the drugs will need a write up and approval if you want them to do anything. As a background for your character, him being a bit of an addict, that's fine, plenty of people do that. It just can't buff your character like that.

Another thing Ill bring up, is the shadow clone thing. I'm not sure if you were going for a Naruto reference, or the clone Saibot has in MK (I'm assuming the latter) but those belong in their respective universes. Here, we've got things like Force Illusions. All in all, though, man, I like the character from what I can see. He's certainly better than what my very first character was on the site. Lol. Dude lasted three days before he got killed.
 
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Got it, I'll make the necessary adjustments
And thanks for the feedback :)

I'll probably keep the drugs to a purely weakening effect without using them daily.

As for the shadow clone (you were right, MK reference), do you think it would be suitable as some kind of a pet that he can keep within his body and send charging at the opponent to attack / absorb an attack before evaporating and returning to Jinn's body, or extend a punch or kick without Jinn having to take a step forward?
 
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Spectrum said:
Got it, I'll make the necessary adjustments
And thanks for the feedback :)

I'll probably keep the drugs to a purely weakening effect without using them daily.

As for the shadow clone (you were right, MK reference), do you think it would be suitable as some kind of a pet that he can keep within his body and send charging at the opponent to attack / absorb an attack before evaporating and returning to Jinn's body, or extend a punch or kick without Jinn having to take a step forward?
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Nah, I don't think that'd fly. While it's a cool idea, I don't think that can be done. Force Illusions however can manifest into many things. I could totally see you feigning a strike, like what you described, only to attack somewhere else.
 
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Gian Greydragon said:
Nah, I don't think that'd fly. While it's a cool idea, I don't think that can be done. Force Illusions however can manifest into many things. I could totally see you feigning a strike, like what you described, only to attack somewhere else.
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Thanks for the feedback, and I will follow your advice
 
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No problem, man. If you run into any stumbling blocks, shoot me a message, and we'll brainstorm together.
 
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