Sonama Shikura

[lonewolf]

Name: Sonama Shikura
Faction: Jedi
Rank: jedi padawan(i read u just put padawan and deteail life before that it was in the jedi temple)
Species: Human
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Height: 6'2
Weight: 175(im not good at this…he is average)
Eyes: ice blue
Hair: blond
Skin: white
Credits: 1000 Credits.
Distinguishing Marks: none
Dominate Hand: a little amedextris but he uses his right hand the most
Force Sensitive: yes

Strength: average
Dexterity: very
Constitution: average
Intelligence: very
Wisdom: slightly above average
Charisma: average

Force Powers:
force push/pull
force jump
mind trick

Skills:
he is a skilled lightasaber wielder and a great piliot

Lightsaber Forms:
jar kai niman

Strengths and Weaknesses:
he is a great pilot and great with his light saber however he tends to be a bit rash and is a horrible shot with a blaster except turrets or on a ship

Gear:
jedi robes and a blue lightsaber and a green light saber (blue he made green was his brothers)

Ships:none

Pets: none

Personality:
he is kind and helpful as well as smart but he has a short temper and act rash sometimes

History:
Sonama was born on corasant where he was found by the jedi council. He and his older brother became jedi and learned light saber combat and the ways of the force. When Sonama was around 14 his brother was killed by a sith in a lightsaber duel and Sonama inhereited his lightsaber Sonama. Respected the jedi code and agreeded to never look for revenge. Around the same time he began training with a master currently he wants to be a jedi more than anything.
Kills:
none

Dueling Ring Matches:
none

Grand Tournament Matches:
none

RP’s:
none

 

[OneoftheLost]

First of all. You will find no one here will be easy on you. We prosecute to the highest degree.
Now let me be the first to go over your profile, and after a special message from me... to you.

First thing I noticed.

Your rank, as a aspiring jedi you are a Jedi Hopeful, not a knight. So you might want to change that. Nothing major, I'm just nitpicky. :D


Next thing:

Lightsaber Forms:
Put them here as you learn them. As a Jedi Padawan/Sith Acolyte/etc. and Jedi Knight/Sith Knight/etc. you may know only one form. As a Jedi Master/Sith Lord/etc. and higher you may know only two forms. However, if you are a Faction Leader or Faction Assistant you may know a third form, though we would prefer it if you did not master the third form.

For your purposes put Form I later on. As you go through Jedi training you will be asked numerous things, and probably have to deal with questions regarding forms. I highly suggest picking one out for later on, for instance my jedi prefer's the defensive form of Soresu. Nothing big, just so you know, if you need a link to the list, shoot me a PM.

Next: Your background is good, I like it. Your Personality is good as well, very human. We've all got failings. Some people will find the background a bit short, so maybe elaborate? how did his brother die? Will it be a cause for revenge? Little details make the charector.

Thats about it. See that wasn't so bad was it? if you have any questions whatsoever shoot anybody around here a PM, The Consort (or Bac as we call him.) Anya Morak, Enishi, Mandalore, Darman, Xeroph, Dakar, Malak, these are all experts, and most are staff and would be happy to help you with anything you need. Remember we are here for you....or something like that. ;D

Next order of business, introduce yourself! Make a thread in the appropriate forum! We love to eye the new meat...er...greet the new recruits!

Lastly being a Jedi hopeful, please check out their neck of the woods..er.. forums and then apply for a master. (all masters are great so don't worry about which one. )

Well thats about it, good charector, hope to see you around!

 

[Enishi]

For a new guy, the profile is not that bad!

Weaken the stats, and your good.

 

[lonewolf]

im about to create a unquie faction so im gonna edit by doing one thing adjusting stlyes (i read faction leaders can have 3) and add history explaining why he isnt a jedi anymore btw enishi i fixed his stats =)

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Only main faction leaders can know three. Independent factions do not count in that.

 

[Hue]

Plus, your faction could use some work. But if you have your own Faction, why are you with the Jedi? One more thing: Read everything about RPing here; your grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. could use some work.

 

[lonewolf]

ok fixed sorry for all the trouble guys i decided not to make my own faction and i fixed everything i think...again really sorry

 

[lonewolf]

so is it ok?