Spice N' Rave OOC

[Dust]

The men came out of the alley into the street to surround the car right before their heads got dinged. But yea, he's still standing over them as Prudii makes his accidental/on purpose remark. Still quite a scene!

 

[Dust]

Long outro post! You can do or do not with anything I added as I leave the thread! It was fun everyone :D

 

[Arcangel]

Long outro post! You can do or do not with anything I added as I leave the thread! It was fun everyone :D

Going to have to ask you to remove the bit about giving the authorities a holo recording seeing as you never actually mentioned recording the action or having a holo recorder in your previous post.

 

[Dust]

I didn't? I could have sworn I did. *goes to check*

 

[Dust]

I did write he had pulled out his holo-communicator in the previous post, near the bottom.

 

[Arcangel]

I did write he had pulled out his holo-communicator in the previous post, near the bottom.

Which isnt a holo recorder. That and he would be pulling it out after the men approached the vehicle and were shot dead.

 

[Dust]

Oh you're right about that! While Kir's comm can record as he has a very advanced one on his profile, you are 100% in the fact they were dead before then because of the interruption. Thanks for catching that. It's like...3am.

 

[Arcangel]

@Dust

Its all good, we all make mistakes.

 

[Dust]

Well, edited it! So hopefully it's up to snuff now. Anyone else got any issue? Just post here!