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Hey guys, so a few quick things before we continue on here.
@fasteagle190 I'm not sure your character should be "rushing" anywhere, or literally jumping for that matter. He took a disk to the leg, a serious wound that would definitely hinder those kinds of activities. Its fine if you hurry, but you should clarify in your post that he's limping forward or something like that, and not at top speed. He COULD perhaps use the force to give himself a boost and attain his normal max speed, but he's not doing that at the moment.
@Alejandrø77 So, is Alex using the force to stave off the choke in that last bit? Its a little unclear as its written. Also, I feel "annoyance" is a bit mild for what he should be experiencing in the opening stages of the choke. Its a prepped attempt to crush your throat, and while you don't need to die, you should probably be feeling some pain in addition to sudden loss of your airway.
@fasteagle190 I'm not sure your character should be "rushing" anywhere, or literally jumping for that matter. He took a disk to the leg, a serious wound that would definitely hinder those kinds of activities. Its fine if you hurry, but you should clarify in your post that he's limping forward or something like that, and not at top speed. He COULD perhaps use the force to give himself a boost and attain his normal max speed, but he's not doing that at the moment.
@Alejandrø77 So, is Alex using the force to stave off the choke in that last bit? Its a little unclear as its written. Also, I feel "annoyance" is a bit mild for what he should be experiencing in the opening stages of the choke. Its a prepped attempt to crush your throat, and while you don't need to die, you should probably be feeling some pain in addition to sudden loss of your airway.