Tango Jorl

[Bastilo Marshall]

Name: Tango Jorl

Faction: Independent

Occupton: Musician/Smuggler

Species: Bith

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Force Sensitive: No

Attributes Bio Skills and Gear Roleplays

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  Apperance: A yellow skinned Bith with a head unoticably smaller tha others.
  
  
  
  Attributes: Born with amazing eyesight and a sly Tango was born with a love for music and money taking any chance he could to get some money. He also knows how to repair vehicles and ships. He's also slightly more resistant to sound just barely able to bear but it leaves him in a weak nearly unconscious state. Due to his intelligent mind and cybernetics he can't lose brain cells to alcohol.
  
  
  
  Personality: A nice cocky and sly guy who loves a good women with something that'll get him drunk along with a party. His love for music can go from soothing to shaking a house. If you get on his good side me might just swipe a credit and invite you to his concert. If you get on his bad side he might take any amount he can grab and frame you or fight you.
  
  How he feels about Jedi: "Meh, They can have a little fun from time to time you know what I mean?"
  How he feels about Sith: "Yes some might be on my side but they have to much power for being Evil"
  How he feels about Smugglers: "There my kind of people as they can throw parties and do.. Stuff!"
  How he feels about Mandolorians: "Erm, some of them scare me but I've never really met one fully"
  How he feels about Criminals: "I'm alright with them, if its gang we may or may not have a problem"
  
  
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  Biography: Born on Clak'dor VII Tango was born sly and creative. As he grew up in Weogar he became very popular for his unmatched music skills but in the criminal underworld he was clever when it came to making deals and pick pocketing. When he was a teen and he was playing in a concert on night he was attacked and kidnapped by a gang where he had illegal cybernetics placed into him and was thrown out with trash since they thought he was dead after the proseizure. He crawled home getting multiple rides until his mom found passed outside near there door. He was taken to the Hostpital but wasn't able to get all 3 of the cybernetics out and they left the 3rd on in his head. They then lowered the power of the 3rd one an after a few weeks of healing he was up and walking.
  
  
  
  Years later after he made a gun into a secret weapon and became a smuggler and full on musician he played in his first cantina and was loved by them on. Later on in the cantina he met a couple of twei'lek dancers and lets just say he had a... fun night. After that he played at more concerts and more cantinas for more "fun nights" a good bar fight and some loving fans. When he was smuggling some cargo the same gang that kidnapped him tried to kidnap him again before he could launch. He blasted them all away and after the job he bought himself a trench coat with many pockets holding tons of ammo.
  
  
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  Skills:
  Marksmanship: With his flute he can make any shot as long as he's not drunk (4/5)
  Melee Combat: With his blade he's skilled but isn't skilled with hand-to-hand fighting (3/5)
  Stealth: He can prove to be stealthy when needed (4/5)
  Acrobatics: He's light on his feet but isn't well with acrobats (2/5)
  Physical Strength: Not as tough as a trandoshan (1/5)
  Mental Strength: He has a strong amount of Mental control over himself (5/5)
  Mechanics and Engines: He's capable of putting together a somewhat functioning speeder (3/5)
  Piloting: A great pilot, even under pressure (5/5)
  Social/Conversations: He can keep conversations interesting and on for hours (5/5)
  Intellect: He's smart from time to time as he isn't capable of expert level (2/5)
  
  
  Abilities:
  
  Music- Expert
  
  Charm- Adept
  
  Pickpocketing- Adept
  
  Drunk Fighting- Expert
  
  Trick Shots- Apprentice
  
  Persuasion- Expert
  
  
  
  Gear: A brown trenchcoat with each pocket full of ammo. Holster with his Flute gun hanging from his belt and a canister of bantha milk hanging form his belt. He has a coin that made of pure phrik and designed to look like gold. Every time he flicks it some kind of advantage or luck appears for him.
  
  
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  A song, a drink, and a bar fight. http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/a-song-a-drink-and-a-bar-fight.75753/
  

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[Kaane]

Hey Bastillo. I've just got a few things to ask about this profile, if you don't mind, to help it get past any issues you might face from the mods.

1: His Flute gun is probably going to have to be approved in tech boards, as its a unique piece of technology and not a generic weapon.

2: "Due to his intelligent mind and cybernetics he can't lose brain cells to alcohol." I just googled it to be certain, but you can't actually lose brain cells to alcohol in general; brain damage from rampant alcohol use isn't due to cell death apparently. Fun fact of the day lol ^^. But concerning the cybernetics, what exactly are they? What do they do? What does the one that didn't get removed do to affect your character? And perhaps most importantly, I think there's some kind of emotional trauma that your char would've experienced from this whole thing. You can probably add it to your personality section to give your char a new dimension, if you wanted.

3: Why did the gang want to kidnap him? This could be a very cool story device imo, if you fleshed it out some. Like if it were the Hutts it'd give him a sort of vendetta, a primary motive in life.

4: In my opinion your profile would do better without the background. For some people it's hard to read the yellow text over the pictures, is all.

That's really all I have to say, but I hope regardless of what happens you can enjoy yourself RPing with him ^^.

 

[Dark child]

Please slow down on making characters. You have done little to no threads with your other characters besides your Jedi and these profiles get shorter every time. If you have an idea for a character you can always post it in Player Workshops instead of feeling the need to post it right away. This profile does not meet the minimum requirements and at this point you should have known that. I do not mean to bash on creativity here, I'm glad that you have some pretty interesting ideas but it's important not to rush into things. Get involved with the story more before you decide to make more characters. I would consider moving this to your workshop for now and deleting the official post unless you are absolutely sure that you want to archive one of your other characters. If the latter is the case you should expand this profile quite a bit, explain and fix the issues that Kaane mentions in the bio and submit the flute gun to the tech boards.​

 

[Bastilo Marshall]

Improved! :D

 

[Outlander]

I'm gonna have to agree with @Kaane that this is really hard to read on that background. Maybe you could remove it, or at least change the color of the text to make it stand out more?

 

[Bastilo Marshall]

There you go!

 

[Bastilo Marshall]

I'm somewhat confused, has Tango been approved? Because I'm not really sure.

 

[Dark child]

I'd be tentative on approving another character until you've began RPing with the other two that you have. If you do not have any use for Tenrin or Rakte then you can have one or both of them archived to make room for Tango. I highly suggest that before submitting or archiving characters that you consider which are most important to you and try to play out their stories before killing them off or archiving them.

It's always better to create more threads to build interesting relationships between other characters than it is to archive a PC that you never really use.
I know that most people, myself included, brainstorm characters when we get bored. Don't be a victim of boredom! Go out and ask other players to do a thread with you, make suggestions and build plot ideas together. Interaction between PCs is the magic of RP!

Going to tag @210yeti and @DraconicPsycho because this is just good advice. You also have characters that may make perfect friends or foes for each other.

Ultimately I will leave it up to Relent to approve the profile once you've made room for another character. Once you have done that, and you're sure you want Tango to be one of your PCs go ahead and tag Relent.

 

[Bastilo Marshall]

I've already archived Range due to me not being notified that he was approved. Tenrin and Bastilo are approved and I'm just waiting for Tango. @Relent

 

[Bastilo Marshall]

@Relent

 

[Logan]

Hmm, for the cybernetic to actually give him increased healing capacity it would have to be approved through the tech boards. I also don't think it would get approved even if you did submit it so I would nix that part entirely.

I think the rest of it looks ok tho.

 

[Bastilo Marshall]

Improved